This will be my art thread from now on, since in the first i was just introducing myself and the other was about my sigworm. :rolleyes:

Here's my first attempt at making a comic:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25690859/

I hope you guys enjoy it and those who are subject of the comic don't get too ticked off with me cause it's just a joke. :p :D

Suggestions and critiques, please... ;)


*no requests, please* ;)

lol, nice comic. but the hammer looks more like a beer than a bloody hammer... or is it reallly a beer?
edit: oh, it is a beer, nevermind that then.

Umm...
Good art, but I don't get it.
And I like comics
Edit: Wait, is that a nose?

nice :D

thats what i want to do! :p

nice mate u doin good,ur drawing is nice!!

Umm...
Good art, but I don't get it.
And I like comics
Edit: Wait, is that a nose?
That post made me laugh.


Mostly because of me misreading it as "Wait, what is a nose?"


Oh, well...

The only problem with it is that it looks a bit like the worm in the third frame is holding the hammer, which doesn't make much sense. Otherwise, great. Nice avatar, too.

oh good job! that made me laugh to myself.
You're very good with expressions.
keep it up!!! *shakes hand*

lol, nice comic. but the hammer looks more like a beer than a bloody hammer... or is it reallly a beer?
edit: oh, it is a beer, nevermind that then.
Yeap, that would be a beer cup... :D
Umm...
Good art, but I don't get it.
And I like comics
Edit: Wait, is that a nose?
Oh, thanks... but...what didn't you get? And... a nose? Where?
nice

thats what i want to do!
Thanks... ;)
nice mate u doin good,ur drawing is nice!!
Oh, thank you, sir! And i wanna see ur sig done, mate! :D
That post made me laugh.


Mostly because of me misreading it as "Wait, what is a nose?"


Oh, well...
Thanks for the constructive criticism...
The only problem with it is that it looks a bit like the worm in the third frame is holding the hammer, which doesn't make much sense. Otherwise, great. Nice avatar, too.
Hmmm...not quite... if you look at the hand position you would see it's the same position as the 2nd frame... though i get your point, that hand is bad positioned, indeed. And thanks... :)
oh good job! that made me laugh to myself.
You're very good with expressions.
keep it up!!! *shakes hand*Oh, thanks! That was the whole idea... make some people laugh a little... :D

Heh, I like that. Oh and do you think you will put any random forumers in?

Nice! The comic's good, but I still like your drawings more.

very very very nice so...your sigworm is called beardy ? :D nice choice

Yes, the expressions are brilliant.

When I first saw the comic, the word "smooth" came to mind, which is a good thing. Keep it up.

LOLZORIZED! VEry smooth and very well-drawn! keep it up dude!

You should see my art section. I drew you with a goatee.

very nice error but the only thing i have to agree with AndrewTaylor about the holing hammer thing but other than that pure ownage.

By the way, is it really that hard to write UnKnown? I mean, why the hell does everyone write "unkown"? You don't write "kown" instead of "known", do you? Do you write "I don't kow"?
Bah!

Heh, I like that. Oh and do you think you will put any random forumers in?
Not likely, that was just a strip for fun, it's not like it will be continued or something like that. Though, yea, i plan to make a comic with a plot and some forum members.

And as you said yourself on other thread, i think you should, "enhance" your sig a little bit, mate. :)
Nice! The comic's good, but I still like your drawings more.
Thanks, man... if you could tell me why did you like the drawings more, i could improve my next comics...
very very very nice so...your sigworm is called beardy ? nice choice
Thanks, mate... and yea, it's called "Beardy". Thanks to Superblob for the name. ;)
Yes, the expressions are brilliant.

When I first saw the comic, the word "smooth" came to mind, which is a good thing. Keep it up.
Ohh, thanks dude. Why would u say "smooth"?
I worked hard on those, sketched them a few times around to get them right. I'm just starting at this, so it's all kinda hard for me. :rolleyes:
LOLZORIZED! VEry smooth and very well-drawn! keep it up dude!
Thank you, sir!
You should see my art section. I drew you with a[hightlight]goatee[/highlight].
Somehow that cut off all my will to see the drawing... :rolleyes:
very nice error but the only thing i have to agree with AndrewTaylor about the holing hammer thing but other than that pure ownage.
Yea, it's bad positioned... i tried to keep the hand at the exact same place as the frame before it, but i wouldn't say it looks like it's holding the hammer. If you look at the hand "pose" u'll see it couldn't be holding it. :)

Ohh, thanks dude. Why would u say "smooth"?
I worked hard on those, sketched them a few times around to get them right. I'm just starting at this, so it's all kinda hard for me. :rolleyes:
When I first saw the comic, the word "smooth" came to mind, which is a good thing. Keep it up.. .

I know it's a good thing, i've read your post :p.

I was just asking why do you think it's "smooth". :D

The style of your art is great. Keep up the good work!

I know it's a good thing, i've read your post :p.

I was just asking why do you think it's "smooth". :D
Probably because the curves are actually curves and not wobbly miniature rollercoasters...

Here's my first attempt at making a comic:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25690859/
LOLZISM!
I really like the expressions.

Thanks, man... if you could tell me why did you like the drawings more, i could improve my next comics...

The comic could be a little bit longer. Really.

But - I like your drawings anyway, so my opinion is that you don't have to improve your drawings.

Improve just your comics.

Thats very good. NIce, original style as well.

Thanks folks! :)

I was saving this next pic to use in a comic i'm thinking about, but i did some experiments and it didn't quite fit in, so, here it goes: :D

· http://www.deviantart.com/view/25736889/

ps: Before anyone says, yea, i know it's a little too small...:-/

wow. thats really nice dude :D i love the expressions ^^

Ohh nice, once again. I was thinking of a new avvie, so I best edit my sigg worm first. More art!

really nice work i some how look like gir from invader zim "get off my head !!"

LOL! nice one dude!

*DRWME* :rolleyes:

Didn't you read the *no requests* part? Meh.

Didn't you read the *no requests* part? Meh.
I think he might have been being sarcastic.

Oh, you think so? ...

Quit the spam on this thread, please... If you don't have something (preferably constructive) to say about the art, just save it for another spammish thread.

I would appreciate that very much... :-/

Good stuff, there.
Quit the spam on this thread, please... If you don't have something (preferably constructive) to say about the art, just save it for another spammish thread.

I would appreciate that very much...
Normally, I would disagree, saying that threads that lead offtopic can be some of the best threads there are.
Then again, this is the Team17 forum, so I agree.

I think he might have been being sarcastic.
Maybe :rolleyes:

Soo working on anythig lately?

I know this isn't a great deal, but since everyone is making christmas themed drawings, here comes mine: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25939728/

I'm not very happy with it... i think this one was calling for a colouring, it's not very good just in black and white... :-/

I colored your pic, 404. I just need to post it here because Imageshack is being an ass.
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I am going to ignore the above post until it is very rightfully deleted.
I colored your pic, 404. I just need to post it here because Imageshack is being an ass.
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Ohhh... a little pale, but now bad at all! Really good, actually... :D

I can see you didn't use the threshold there... :p What was the method you used to colour it? :) *curious*

Ohhh... a little pale, but now bad at all! Really good, actually... :D

I can see you didn't use the threshold there... :p What was the method you used to colour it? :) *curious*
I had these layers in this order:

Lineart: set to multiply
Shading: 90% opacy, set to multiply.
Color: Ordinary layer
Background: Just plain white.

I used a fuzzy brush to do the shading, and I used the magic wand and grew it by a pixel each time. Your pencil lines are smooth enough for it to work.
Though the picture was kinda small, so growing my selection by just one pixel made the selection kinda wonky. ALWAYS color the picture when it's big, and resize afterward.

i had a go at coloring your drawing,as said in the title this is my first colored drawing

and yes i know it sucks

I coloured the Psyke one for you :p
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and yes i know it sucks
I would have to agree with you here... :)
I mean, the shading itself isn't probably that bad, but the execution didn't come out well...
I coloured the Psyke one for you
Thanks, dude, but that's not quite the result i want out of that picture. Using the threshold tool (as i supose you did) only gives the picture a "paint-made" look and the colours you put on it are kinda flat, with no shading or whatsoever. No offence, nothing personal, i know you can do better. :)

Like i said to Pigbuster on dA, i don't want put any colours in the drawing; i want to make a good colour drawing. :)

And, please, enough of colouring my drawings, i think i got the point already. ;)

Thanks, dude, but that's not quite the result i want out of that picture. Using the threshold tool (as i supose you did) only gives the picture a "paint-made" look and the colours you put on it are kinda flat, with no shading or whatsoever. No offence, nothing personal, i know you can do better. :)

Like i said to Pigbuster on dA, i don't want put any colours in the drawing; i want to make a good colour drawing. :)

And, please, enough of colouring my drawings, i think i got the point already. ;)
Threshold? What the hell is that? :p
Also, I was bored, so I did just for the hell of it :p

Threshold? What the hell is that? :p
Also, I was bored, so I did just for the hell of it :p
Threshold is a tool in photoshop/GIMP that makes a picture only 2 colors, B+W. It can be good for coloring, but 404 likes his pictures to look more handdrawn than "Done-in-MS-paint".

It can be good for coloring, but 404 likes his pictures to look more handdrawn than "Done-in-MS-paint".
Close enough, but replace "handdrawn" with "anti-aliased". :D

Riseeeeeeee! Rise from the tomb my little thread, riseeeee!!!!!!! :D

Ok, guys and girls, this is a picture of Rarsonic's sigworm. Yes, him, Rarsonic!

- Erm... Error... why the hell did you drew him and not us that requested on the other threads?

Hmm... well mainly because i didn't have a good idea about your sigworms yet, or cause i've been busy drawing that picture for splapp's competition (The ****tiest christmas ever (http://www.deviantart.com/view/26607554/)) or even maybe because i was thinking about a plot for a comic that i'll start soon enough.

But actually because Rarsonic's avatar was pretty damn ugly (don't bother looking at his profile page cause he changed it already :rolleyes: ). I felt some pity for the poor boy with that horrible avatar so i decided to draw him a better avatar (which turned out into this picture).

Well, enough of talking, to the picture: Rarsonic Revisited (http://www.deviantart.com/view/27045514/)

- Right, Error, but you've overlooked quite a few elements from his sig!

Yes, of course, that's what the "revisited" stands for. I took his sigworm and changed some stuff in order to make it a little cooler (in my opinion, of course) and better to draw, trying to keep it's original look and essence. ;)

Anyways, i hope you guys, girls, worms and Rarsonic itself enjoy it! And keep watching for the comic to come! ;)

EDIT: Oh, and i was almost forgetting! If you want an avatar out of the picture, Rarsonic, just tell me. ;)

Loved you drew me :) *cries* *needs to get practice*

I know it is revisted, Error, but there are some obvious issues:

Being Rarsonic under a suit, how do you want it to have eyebrows? The same goes for the visor. And when i thought about my sig, i didn't want it to be a cyber-punk sigworm(meaning the backpack generator). Of course i like your drawing, but... well... i do not know... :-/

Damn good art right there, infront of us all!

I really like your style, it kicks... stuff!

It's not revisted, it's revisited. :)

And they're worms for christ's sake! They don't follow regular laws of physics, so, yes, they pretty much can have eyebrows even wearing suits over their heads. It would be weird if they did not have the eyebrows. :)

And, yeap, i thought of a better version of the visor that could still show the worm's pupils. And i didn't mean it to be cyberpunk either, but your sigworm's description frankly does seem a bit cyberpunk. :rolleyes:

I'm usualy against those killer-machines-with-overpowered-equipment kind of sigworms myself, but in your case i had a good idea for a picture, so i drew it. You're not forced to like it, mate, that's just my version. ;)

Oh, fine then, he looks uber cool.

bloddy brillant works of art man

Yes, very good pic, mate ;)

It's not revisted, it's revisited. :)

Thank you for the correction

And, yeap, i thought of a better version of the visor that could still show the worm's pupils. And i didn't mean it to be cyberpunk either, but your sigworm's description frankly does seem a bit cyberpunk. :rolleyes:

Yes. But i do not want Rar's suit to look like the uber-loaded barroque suits that currently appear on cyberpunk thingies.

I'm usualy against those killer-machines-with-overpowered-equipment kind of sigworms myself, but in your case i had a good idea for a picture, so i drew it. You're not forced to like it, mate, that's just my version. ;)

I have to edit my sigworm to clear things. Rarsonic only kills when needed(for example, enemies. When Rarsonic is on killing sprees, it does that only to make fear). It does not kill to kill, Rarsonic has a reason. So i do not think about Rarsonic about a killer machine (althrough AECA is a bit overpowered :p ).

And i like it. Thank you again for draw me good. :)

Thank you for the correction



Yes. But i do not want Rar's suit to look like the uber-loaded barroque suits that currently appear on cyberpunk thingies.



I have to edit my sigworm to clear things. Rarsonic only kills when needed(for example, enemies. When Rarsonic is on killing sprees, it does that only to make fear). It does not kill to kill, Rarsonic has a reason. So i do not think about Rarsonic about a killer machine (althrough AECA is a bit overpowered :p ).

And i like it. Thank you again for draw me good. :)
I understand that you think i made a lot of mistakes there and that you might be a little disappointed about it, i don't blame you for that. But all that i changed i did consciously, that's why i called it "another version" a "revisited version". :)

So try to think of it as indeed another version, a different version, and not as your regular sigworm. ;)

Woah, nice picture as usual, Error404! Keep up the great work!

The ****tiest christmas ever

it is adam west as cat man!

I don't think your brain can understand the word "Spidermonkey". :rolleyes:

****ing sweet pic dude what did u draw all that with?!?!

Pretty good mate. (Btw, if I don't post in an art topic, it's because I don't have anything constructive to say)

But his eyes are fairly odd. They make him look like he's a bit ill. They probably should have looked a bit more evil-like. Remember, Rarsonic is supposed to be a bit of an evil character.

I'm sure I posted in this thread before. Oh, well.

Incidentally, Error, have you seen my 12DOC thread yet as I know you wanted to see me do more drawing.

it is adam west as cat man!
Huh?
****ing sweet pic dude what did u draw all that with?!?!
Hand, piece of paper, mechanical pencil and a rubber. I just scanned it and coloured with photoshop with no real trick, just the brush and some layers.
And, yes, i stoped with programming for a few weeks cause i was damn stressed by it. As soon as i return to programming, i'll restart the league deal.
Btw, if I don't post in an art topic, it's because I don't have anything constructive to say
That's a wise thing to do. I wish more people did that instead of posting the same thing other people said previously over and over...:(
But his eyes are fairly odd. They make him look like he's a bit ill. They probably should have looked a bit more evil-like. Remember, Rarsonic is supposed to be a bit of an evil character.
I've read his profile before he changed it and that didn't seem evil to me. The eyes are odd because that was suposed to be this...i don't know...visor thing; i guess he had that before changing the profile. Besides, if you look at the picture as whole, you see that "evil eyes" have nothing to do with it. You can't have a character with just one strict expression. :rolleyes: ;)
Incidentally, Error, have you seen my 12DOC thread yet as I know you wanted to see me do more drawing.
I took just a quick look at it, but i didn't see the oldest pics. I'll look it more carefully soon. :)

And thanks to all for the kind comments. :D

Revival!

Capturing some essences: http://www.deviantart.com/view/27560855/ :p

Enjoy! ;)

Awsome work as usual :D

The hand of the female worm which is slapping slick, the thumb is a lil weird for me, but... Meh, WHO CARES!? ;)

That's damn good.
I must say, cell-shading fits your style perfectly.

Erm... thanks... fellas. That's not many comments, but they're good ones. :)

The hand of the female worm which is slapping slick, the thumb is a lil weird for me, but... Meh, WHO CARES!?
It looks right to me, man... If it's looking weird to more people, well, maybe i can consider changing. But maybe it's just you... :)
I must say, cell-shading fits your style perfectly.
But i always thought that "cell-shading" was a term only applied to 3D graphics. What's exactly the "cell-shading" your talking about here?

The female's face looks weird... But I like it!

Nice pics as usual...

But i always thought that "cell-shading" was a term only applied to 3D graphics. What's exactly the "cell-shading" your talking about here?
Shaded in a cell fashion I think :p
And nice, but I think the hand looks wierd overall

Just awesome. Small pic, but huge details.

Thanks fellas... :)

Part 1 of my comic is almost done...so watch out! :p ;)

Well, technically cel-shading is strictly for 3D, but I didn't know of any definition of the style of shading that you use. I think that 'block shading' might be it now, but I'm not sure.

Cell shading was invented to replicate the simple style of shading and colouring used a lot in cartoons. So cartoon shadiong would probably be correct.

Behold the comic: http://www.deviantart.com/view/27691036/ ;)

I hope you guys like it... :D

Obs: if you left a comment on dA, please, post it here too! :)

soo know whats gonna happen next ! there's gonna be a explosion and paul gets super powers or somthing..i think


GREAT comic anyways !

:D Very nice indeed. (esp for including me! :p)

And LOL at agent luke's "distraction"...

Woah, that's amazing! Do more!

Behold the comic: http://www.deviantart.com/view/27691036/ ;)

I hope you guys like it... :D

Obs: if you left a comment on dA, please, post it here too! :)
Nice Comic! Its very nice coloured, especially agentluke:p,
Cant wait to see what happens next =) Keep it up

Behold the comic: http://www.deviantart.com/view/27691036/ ;)

I hope you guys like it... :D

Obs: if you left a comment on dA, please, post it here too! :)
LOL! that was amazing! If I can be in, put me in! please:o

He said "no requests" in the first post. If he wants to, he'll put you in. Besides, he's became a (semi)hi-stat in such little time. :p

That is one of the best looking comics I've seen in a long time.
*Waits for more*

I'm very glad you enjoyed...thanks fellas! :D

And the plot is kinda done already, so there i won't probably be taking any requests for long participations, though some of you will surely appear for short periods doing some stuff (the popular "cameos" but with a bit more purpose :p)...

The next episode is already on progress. ;)

Sorry, been away.

Anyway, Thats one hellova comic there!

Nice idea on coloring Agent Luke with his own color xD

Looking forward to more!

dam best comic ive seen in ages all great, bg, colours, shaddin, line art.... all great. :p i want more!

Thanks guys... i'm working on the next episode right now... ;)

A little MSN personal message random doodle based on psyke's message:

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/27770573/

Enjoy ;)...

ps: I think i'll start another thread for my comic... it won't be good to mix it up with the other random stuff... :rolleyes:

Hiya, friendly reminder: please try not to double post: either edit your preceding post or, if you feel the need the bump the thread, copy your original, make a new post with both the original and your additions inside it, post that, then delete the original ("bump-editing")

LOL! nice comic! luke draws on toilet paper! LOL!!!!!!

right, I keep forgetting to post here so I'll be aware of updates and such.

/genericallyposts

WOA? I never posted here?

Anywayz keep it up dude! and if you have a tiny space available I'd love to see what I'm up to in your comics...:D

Hmm... i guess no one saw this comming: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/33974285/

What can i say? I got inspired by Zero and other people returning with good art... All the other explanations can be seen on that link...

I hope you guys enjoy it... ;)

It's an orgasim for the eyes! :D

I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this. The art is just magnificent. Paul's expression in the first one when whoever that is walks in is great. :D Glad I was somehow able to inspire you to do more.

Yeah, I think Paul's gonna need a band-aid for that one.

Edit: Also, I was considering doing the smiley-face-on-Error's-bandana-changes-in-every-panel thing too, but I guess I decided not to for some reason.

It's an orgasim for the eyes!
Lolz, man...thanks... :p
I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this. The art is just magnificent. Paul's expression in the first one when whoever that is walks in is great. Glad I was somehow able to inspire you to do more.
I apreciate it, man... i try to push my limits and draw good art with...fairly decent jokes on this comic... but i'm mainly practicing my art, so i'm happy to hear you liked it... :)
Edit: Also, I was considering doing the smiley-face-on-Error's-bandana-changes-in-every-panel thing too, but I guess I decided not to for some reason.
That kinda came naturally while i was doodling on MSN once... snooze drew me some sigworm stuff that inspired me to use the smile as a mood indicator... :)

It's not necessary, although it ads a nice touch... i usually leave it neutral unless there's a great mood change... :rolleyes:

Why have I only just found this thread?

Nice stuff here though. Keep it up.

Bugger deviantart!

Once again it refuses to let me zoom in.

But from what I can see from the zoomed out image, looks good! :D

Really nice, Error. A great job you've done there, the comic looks brilliant.

Thanks folks! :)

I was saving this next pic to use in a comic i'm thinking about, but i did some experiments and it didn't quite fit in, so, here it goes: :D

· http://www.deviantart.com/view/25736889/

ps: Before anyone says, yea, i know it's a little too small...:-/
Whoa! That looks as if you could put it in a colouring book!

Yowch.

But will I be able to play the piano afterwards?

Anyway, glad to see you're up and running again - not that I was expecting my head to come flying out of the fray...

Real nice and detailed. Very good job. :)

Why have I only just found this thread?
Nice stuff here though. Keep it up.
Well... it's normal for us to underestimate the newcomers... i do it a lot and then i realise how much of a fool i was... :p
And i'll try to keep it comming...not sure, though...
But from what I can see from the zoomed out image, looks good!
Thanks for dropping by, pilot... i'm most pleased that you enjoyed it... and the zooming problem might be occourring cause the image has aprox 500kb... so it might as well take a little while to load... ;)
Really nice, Error. A great job you've done there, the comic looks brilliant.
Thanks man...
Whoa! That looks as if you could put it in a colouring book!
Lol...that's quite...old... but thanks... i'm glad you liked it... :)
Yowch.

But will I be able to play the piano afterwards?

Anyway, glad to see you're up and running again - not that I was expecting my head to come flying out of the fray...
Wait and you shall see... i think i'll need another episode before the comic actually starts for real... by then you should be able to realise your future...
Dark things await for you in the shadows, my friend... :p
Real nice and detailed. Very good job.
Thanks, man... ;)

And i'll try to keep it comming...not sure, though...

So we MIGHT see part three in two or three months? :p

Anyways, great job, nice detail, and the oh-so-sucky explosion frame turned out very good ;)

So we MIGHT see part three in two or three months? :p

Anyways, great job, nice detail, and the oh-so-sucky explosion frame turned out very good ;)
Part three... hmm... who knows... i still got a lot of tough stuff to draw... but maybe if the next part doesn't involve explosions, i might even do it before the end of the next month... :p

You among a few know i had my share of bad moments while trying to put colours into that friggin explosion, so i apreciate you comment, man. You're a kickass artist and your opinion means a lot ot me... but, you know, only if you continue to draw your comic... otherwise i'll start treating you like crap! Bwaha! :D

Now that you mention it... here, have a next part! :p

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/33997090/

Thanks for dropping by, pilot... i'm most pleased that you enjoyed it... and the zooming problem might be occourring cause the image has aprox 500kb... so it might as well take a little while to load... ;)
Nah, its the old endless stream of adverts problem, its working fine now though.

The artwork really is pretty darn good!

Now that you mention it... here, have a next part!

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/33997090/
Lol... i kinda saw this comming... :P
That's nice, man, very nice... me likes it! :D
The artwork really is pretty darn good!
Oh...thanks man... ;)

Dark things await for you in the shadows, my friend... :p
Consider my interest peaked.:p

Dark things await for you in the shadows, my friend... :pOh dear, I'm going to meet up with Gardy Looo, DarthDarky and all the other "hey, let's make our sigworms black with glowing primary colour eyes" people. Just my luck.

;)

But seriously, oooh. This is going to be... well, different...

Oh dear, I'm going to meet up with Gardy Looo, DarthDarky and all the other "hey, let's make our sigworms black with glowing primary colour eyes" people. Just my luck.

;)

But seriously, oooh. This is going to be... well, different...
Lol...i haven't thought of that, but it's actually a pretty funny idea... :p :D

Oh dear, I'm going to meet up with Gardy Looo, DarthDarky and all the other "hey, let's make our sigworms black with glowing primary colour eyes" people. Just my luck.

;)

But seriously, oooh. This is going to be... well, different...
Well, I'm not black, that's one thing.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32504445/
And DD needs to be black, he's a dark lord, or something.

Well, I'm not black, that's one thing.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32504445/
And DD needs to be black, he's a dark lord, or something.speaking of your sig, why don't you crop that image and make it your avatar? the one you're using is rather low quality.

Well, I'm not black, that's one thing.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32504445/
And DD needs to be black, he's a dark lord, or something.It takes my brain a little time to adjust to new things.

As a result, your appearance in the Team 17 Forum Building is using your old sigworm. As if having him sitting on the toilet wasn't enough :p.

how many cartoons have you made so far?

Cartoons as in comics?

Erm...lemme count... 3... that is counting that wormish one about the hammer that i didn't color... :rolleyes:

Bwahahaha :D

Amazing, i love the way you draw man

Anyways dude, hope you continue with these amazing comics : O

MESARR PLOZZZZZZZZZZ (some of you wont understand.. -_-)

That is seriously high-class work, there. The only problems are small, and are miniscule when compared to the good parts.
Though I think that the smoke looks odd, since the texture is round, while the lineart for it is sharp and more jagged.
And what's with the brown blood? :p

Even so, that is really, very good. Keep it up, man.

Though I think that the smoke looks odd, since the texture is round, while the lineart for it is sharp and more jagged.
Lol...finally someone said something about the smoke!
I'm aware of it, man... i was aware even before releasing it althought i had 2 options: 1) change the shading 2) change the lineart

And since i didn't have any more ideas of how could i shade it and i couldn't bother my lazy ass to redraw and rescan the whole thing, i left it like that. I promise i'll make beter smokes on the episodes to come... :p

And what's with the brown blood?
Actually, that can vary from monitor to monitor, computer to computer. I see it as a maroon... red-ish... but i gotta admit that's not the usual color people pick for blood. I tend to use more gray-ish colours at my stuff... i like the pale looking of it rather than that bright, eye-hurting colors we usually see around. But i'll take not that i have to make it more red-ish... :)

Thanks for the criticism, man...i'm glad someone actually cared to make some... ;)

Oh, I'm not criticizing your dull (As in, grey-ish) color scheme.
It looks great, and it's rather unique to these forums.

Oh, I'm not criticizing your dull (As in, grey-ish) color scheme.
It looks great, and it's rather unique to these forums.heck, I dunno about you but I believe that's damn near the best coloring job I've ever seen. the greyer colors really make it look good.

and for the record, the blood is fine on my computer. darker than most people draw it, but it fits with the rest of the colors and the lighting.

heck, I dunno about you but I believe that's damn near the best coloring job I've ever seen. the greyer colors really make it look good.

It certainly does.

Now that you mention it... here, have a next part! :p

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/33997090/
Mmm.yay teh cr4zy n3ss!
Can't wait to see a fight...heh

heck, I dunno about you but I believe that's damn near the best coloring job I've ever seen. the greyer colors really make it look good.

and for the record, the blood is fine on my computer. darker than most people draw it, but it fits with the rest of the colors and the lighting.
Ow...thanks mate... :)

And i'm yet to try some pencil colored pic à la HK, but that's for the future. Those pics from HK are seriously good regarding colors... specially those last ones she made about slick poking psyduck's eye and splapp with coffin' (sorry if i misspelled that... i'm not much of a pokemon person)... :)
It certainly does.
Thanks man... :D

Ok, guys i had this done for a couple of days... i was actually gonna put this into the Fanartis of the (last)month competition but i felt like i should wait for this next one... a big mistake i guess, cause now Slick and maybe even Splapp and HK are going to participate, so my chances are kinda flushing down the toilet...

Anyways, this' a little joke i made towards Liketyplitt's request (check out this thread: http://forum.team17.co.uk/showthread.php?t=29393, 2nd and 3rd posts):
27805 (http://www.deviantart.com/view/34232776/)
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(Sorry about the small preview, but the original image exceeds the maximum filesize allowed, so, please, leave some comments here and not only on dA ;))

Woah... These expressions are again very good and the colouring is fine. I also like the details of your picture... A great job, as usual.

Thanks man... :)

That is pretty good.
Don't think that I won't make an entry, though. I want to show people what my worms art looks like since my absence. :p

That just looks downright painful. :p

That is pretty good.
Don't think that I won't make an entry, though. I want to show people what my worms art looks like since my absence.
Lol, thanks... :)
And i since i guess Splapp and Slick will enter the competetion, i don't worry to much...they'll likely crush us both anyway... :p
That just looks downright painful.
A tiny bit... :)

they'll likely crush us both anyway... :p
Oh, what kind of attitude is that? :p
You've seen how obsessed I can get about some things.
On the other hand, if I actually get accepted into the sudden-death tournament, than there's no way I could do this. So we'll see.

Oh, what kind of attitude is that?
A realistic one? :rolleyes:
You've seen how obsessed I can get about some things.
On the other hand, if I actually get accepted into the sudden-death tournament, than there's no way I could do this. So we'll see.
I'm not sure i got what you tried to say here...

And i since i guess Splapp and Slick will enter the competetion, i don't worry to much...they'll likely crush us both anyway... :p

People can be easily impressed. A picture with a lot in it is often impressive, even if each detail of it isn't particularly good or impressive.

This picture that I did here (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/19875207/) was actually very easy to draw. Each bit was very simple and basic. It's nothing spectacular. It's not even that well drawn and has no effects in it. The only real good thing about it is the fact it has a lot in it. The only thing it took to make is time. That's how easily people can be impressed.

Of course you all probably know this. If of course each little detail was drawn well, then the overall picture would be very good (like this one here (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/7954862/) (she also did a coloured one of it). Time is all it takes (although that is where the difficulty comes in).

People can be easily impressed. A picture with a lot in it is often impressive, even if each detail of it isn't particularly good or impressive.A case in point being my victory last round.

A case in point being my victory last round.

Indeed. That also had humour in it, an extra bonus.

Well... i guess you guys are right... if anyone appears with a 3 month pic like Paul's or if either Splapp or HK decides to draw one of those amazing pics, i'm definitely taking the 2nd (or 3rd) place.

But...oh well... it's all about participating anyway... i apreciate the fact you guys enjoyed it already...so... if i don't win anything, i'll be ok (despite of the depressions and the 2 suicide attempts)... :p

Oh, and i also want to thank you guys for making the Pineapple on a Stick? Nope... (http://www.deviantart.com/view/34232776/) my most faved deviation, with 8 favs. I know it ain't much compared to the "real artists" around, but, hey, it's already something to me. So thanks guys! ;)

That drawing you have there is quite exquisite. Fantastic job, Bravo, Excellento, Suberbo, et je te deteste. (I hate you for doing such an excellent job) I shall avenge thee bwah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha....... Just Kidding :p

That drawing you have there is quite exquisite. Fantastic job, Bravo, Excellento, Suberbo, et je te deteste. (I hate you for doing such an excellent job) I shall avenge thee bwah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha....... Just Kidding
Hehe...thanks...i guess... :p

Anyways, time for some more art! A little late, indeed... but hey! Better late than never! :) ;)
-> http://www.deviantart.com/view/34955062/ <-

Hehe...thanks...i guess... :p

Anyways, time for some more art! A little late, indeed... but hey! Better late than never! :) ;)
-> http://www.deviantart.com/view/34955062/ <-
AAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAH!!! Like I said, this is FANTASTICAL! I love it! Thanks! :D

Very nice. That last panel is so awesome that I'm going to have SEX.


Oh wait... family forum. Right.
Say kids! Did you know "sex" is super adult slang for "having a popsicle"?
It's true!

Huzzah for more nonsensical great works of art/comics.

Again a very good comic from teh Error...

I hate it. It sucked



J/K, lol, that was like, the best comic i've seen in 6 months!

Yea, brilliant! :)

AAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAH!!! Like I said, this is FANTASTICAL! I love it! Thanks!
Lol splapp, the pleasure is all mine... i'm glad you liked it... :D

Very nice. That last panel is so awesome that I'm going to have SEX.


Oh wait... family forum. Right.
Say kids! Did you know "sex" is super adult slang for "having a popsicle"?
It's true!~
Thanks man... Ironically, the last panel was one of the easiest to draw...

Oh and... i guess that "have a popsicle" would also be somehow accurate if you look at it through a female perspective... :rolleyes:

Huzzah for more nonsensical great works of art/comics.
Thank you there... ;)
Again a very good comic from teh Error...
Thanks man... i'm glad you enjoyed it...
I hate it. It sucked



J/K, lol, that was like, the best comic i've seen in 6 months!
Not likely, man! I released my 2nd episode of CW some weeks ago, so... HA! J/k ;)
Yea, brilliant!
It is, isn't it!? Thanks man! :p

Oh and... i guess that "have a popsicle" would also be somehow accurate if you look at it through a female perspective... :rolleyes:
Yes, I thought that too.
Even better, though, is the thought that some kid will read my post and then ask their friend if they want to have sex.
HOHOHO.

Very nice. That last panel is so awesome that I'm going to have SEX.


Oh wait... family forum. Right.
Say kids! Did you know "sex" is super adult slang for "having a popsicle"?
It's true!it had to be done....

http://www.deviantart.com/view/35006870/

Very nice. That last panel is so awesome that I'm going to have SEX.


Oh wait... family forum. Right.
Say kids! Did you know "sex" is super adult slang for "having a popsicle"?
It's true!

Really?

I thought it was 'twisitng a doorknob'.

Yes, I thought that too.
Even better, though, is the thought that some kid will read my post and then ask their friend if they want to have sex.
HOHOHO.
Lol...that could actually happen since we have our share of 10 year old kiddos frequenting the forum... :rolleyes:
it had to be done....

http://www.deviantart.com/view/35006870/
Nice... :p

Aku, why don't you try "loosening" your art a bit? You switched from sprites to vector art but i gotta say i see little effort in making it any different from the sprite's ctrl+c/ctrl+v style. Maybe you could try to draw the whole thing sometime. I mean... look at P.P... he keeps his stuff pretty simple and i can't say it's half bad. :)

Well... it's just an advice anyway, so if you don't ever feel like it, ignore the comment above. ;)

Lol...that could actually happen since we have our share of 10 year old kiddos frequenting the forum... :rolleyes:
...10 year olds DO know what sex is you know...:p

...10 year olds DO know what sex is you know...:p
Not the ones that can't distinguish a sausage from a worm, i guess...

...10 year olds DO know what sex is you know...:p
[INSERT OVERUSED MICHAEL JACKSON JOKE HERE]

Nice stuff, Error! Loving the stabbity goodness and the brilliant blood (mine often comes across looking like ketchup).

...10 year olds DO know what sex is you know...:p

And I am proof! :p

Not the ones that can't distinguish a sausage from a worm, i guess......I could make a nasty joke, but I won't.

ROFL! i laughed my way through the whole previous page!
...10 year olds DO know what sex is you know...:p
but they do know what "having a popsicle' is.:p

but they do know what "having a popsicle' is.:pDepends. They're called ice lollies in Britain.

Too cold is NOT good...

"Hey kid, you want a popsicle?"
"Jay! Sure i wan...-YAAAAAAAAAAAGH!"

Aw man. It seems that I've unleashed the demon of adult jokes.
BACK IN YOUR CAGE, DEMON. THE STENCH OF SPAM SURROUNDS WHERE YOU GO.

Let's let this thread stay un-deleted, 'kay?

O FOUL DEMON I UN-SUMMON YOU! BAD DEMON, BAAAAD DEMON. NO DESERT FOR YOU!:eek:

Spot the idiot competition #237

Ok...let's just say i won't be posting any new threads if this one gets deleted... last chance... ;)

*stays queit*

Meeh... :-/

28147 (http://www.deviantart.com/view/36387232/)
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There is no image. :p

Oh, sure there is. With Error all like "Oh really?" and what-not. It's quite good.

Oh... tis your birthday, tis? Ok. That's kinda what I thought it might have meant... Happy Birthday!

Oh... tis your birthday, tis? Ok. That's kinda what I thought it might have meant... Happy Birthday!
Ditto! :p

happy birthday!

...

*runs*

I posted my birthday pic in my thread, but it's up on dA as well.

happy Birthday, you could come over to holland and get some Heineken, its the best beer around the world ;)

happy birthday error!
oh no! more dutch people! net als ik

happy birthday!

...

*runs*
Lol... you should run... you better run... fast... :D
Oh... tis your birthday, tis? Ok. That's kinda what I thought it might have meant... Happy Birthday!
Ya, it would be, indeed... thanks... ;)
Ditto!
"Ya, it would be, indeed... thanks..."
Ditto! :p
I posted my birthday pic in my thread, but it's up on dA as well.
I know, and it's properly commented in both your thread and dA! ;)
happy Birthday, you could come over to holland and get some Heineken, its the best beer around the world
Or i can drink it right here... as a matter of fact, i drank about 3 "mugs" of Heineken chopp during lunch today... ha! :p
happy birthday error!
Thank ya...

Or i can drink it right here... as a matter of fact, i drank about 3 "mugs" of Heineken chopp during lunch today... ha! :p
We can tell from your spelling of Liketyspli.

That's actually how i usualy spell it when i'm refering to him in my conversations... that's even how i pronounce it... :rolleyes:

I know it's like-something... so i always change the last part... that's what you get by picking that kind of nick... :p

edit: oh, and 3 mugs of chopp would hardly let anyone drunk... ;)

Meh...
28154

Meh...
28154I'll just call you Bob from now on.

Happy birthday (http://www.deviantart.com/view/36413592/)

Happy Birthday Error. I'll post the birthday pic as soon as I get my scanner. Which will hopefully be today or tomorrow.

error, be glad you get SOMETHING, I didn't :p

Well Error uses constructive criticism, while you use destructive criticism. :p

Well Error uses constructive criticism, while you use destructive criticism. :pI use a bit of both, thank you very much :p you're just tainted by the image of me from years past....not to say I'm the picture of niceness, but neither is error :p

and the point remains. :p

Indeed, Aku is sometimes constructive. Like what he said about my pic of Agent Luke (about which every point he made seems entirely correct.)

Indeed, Aku is sometimes constructive. Like what he said about my pic of Agent Luke (about which every point he made seems entirely correct.)
whoa! agent luke, aku and constructive in ONE sentence!?

Not that I'm one who generally defends Aku, but most of his Agent Luke criticism has actually been constructive.

Meh...
For what matters, i could spell or pronounce your name correctly, but i just can't be bothered to do so... ;)
I'll just call you Bob from now on.
That's the spirit!
Happy birthday
Yay, man, thanks! That's some kickass picture... :p
Happy Birthday Error. I'll post the birthday pic as soon as I get my scanner. Which will hopefully be today or tomorrow.
Thanks man... and no rush, take yer time. ;)
error, be glad you get SOMETHING, I didn't
Oh, well, to get some pics i had to draw one moaning cause i didn't get any... it's not like i'm Splapp or something. :rolleyes:

All these comics are really good. Nice.

All these comics are really good. Nice.
Oi... thanks... i'm glad you liked...

By the way... are you new? I don't think i ever saw you posting here before...

2 days here, I think

error, be glad you get SOMETHING, I didn't :p
Jump on board my boat.
"The boat of no birthday pics."

We have rousing sing-songs about lacks of birthday pictures, and an annual Whose-birthday-was-the-least- acknowledged competition.
Plus, marshmallow roasts.

Jump on board my boat.
"The boat of no birthday pics."

We have rousing sing-songs about lacks of birthday pictures, and an annual Whose-birthday-was-the-least- acknowledged competition.
Plus, marshmallow roasts.

Can I join? :p.


Meh...
Attachment 28154

You know, the more you try and correct your name, the more it's going to be ridiculed.

Jump on board my boat.
"The boat of no birthday pics."

We have rousing sing-songs about lacks of birthday pictures, and an annual Whose-birthday-was-the-least- acknowledged competition.
Plus, marshmallow roasts.Well you know this forum's motto: the more you whine, the more you get. But no guarantees that what you get is what you wanted. :p

Well you know this forum's motto: the more you whine, the more you get. But no guarantees that what you get is what you wanted. :p

This forum has a motto?

It has now!

Oi... thanks... i'm glad you liked...

By the way... are you new? I don't think i ever saw you posting here before...

Im pretty new. I also dont post things that much.

28185
... :rolleyes:

Thats good. I like how you made the worm with the good picture really detailed and the one with the bad art extremely simple.

Thats good. I like how you made the worm with the good picture really detailed and the one with the bad art extremely simple.
Actually, the left worm plagiarised. It's a parody of this (http://forum.team17.co.uk/showthread.php?t=29908) thread. At least I hope it is, otherwise I'll sound pretty stupid.
Very nice picture Error! These forums are getting ridiculous :p

loam .

Oh lord, that's pure genius.

Very nice picture Error! These forums are getting ridiculous
Second that... :rolleyes:

Hehe. Good capture of what the Fanart forum felt like when I saw it this morning.

Oh my god... I love you Error! :p

Please, no more of that :rolleyes:

I really like how the left worm looks like a sausage. We might end up calling n00bs that way.

Hehe... it not only look like a sausage but it is a sausage, actually... :p

And thanks to all those who apreciated the little mocking... not great art, but like Slick said me once "you gotta say 'screw it' and get the things done anyway".... :)

To celebrate my tablet finally having pressure on MSN: ;)
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/6362/pressuremsncd5.png (http://img205.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pressuremsncd5.png)
I guess most of you don't even remember Preasure. Do you?

Oh man I do; I think I remember a load of members that were here up to 2006. Pitchforks ftw

Oh man I do; I think I remember a load of members that were here up to 2006. Pitchforks ftw
It's an extendible roasting fork. :rolleyes:

I guess most of you don't even remember Preasure. Do you?
Course we do my boy!

Glad to know some of you still do.
For the sake of nostalgia: http://slickster.deviantart.com/art/Slick-s-ART-With-an-unbeli-36612553

And here's a win-win situation. You get to see my marvelous drawing plus a little sip of Splapp's. ;)
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/9172/splappnbeardyxv5.png (http://img352.imageshack.us/my.php?image=splappnbeardyxv5.png)

How are you two SO good?

I really like the contrast between line widths. Obviously these are MSN sketches, so it's not fair to assume you've spent a lot of time on these, so it's not fair to criticise on things you could have improved. I really like your style, though.

The last two ones are funny. I used to love doing MSN sketches too, and I always dreamed with the day that I would have a super cool tablet to do them, and mess around in the chats :o





It never became true :(

I hate the msn for mac not having the doodle thingy.

I hate the msn for mac not having the doodle thingy.

I second that.

thirded. it annoys the hell out of me that I can't join in these great conversations :(

thirded. it annoys the hell out of me that I can't join in these great conversations :(

Plus you also have like a touchscreen mac don't you? That must make it suck twice.

Just sayin'. :p

Plus you also have like a touchscreen mac don't you? That must make it suck twice.

Just sayin'. :pnot touch screen, per se, but close enough, yes.

To keep you entertained while i draw the other stuff!
32289

you are awesome, i wish i had a tablet.

Thanks, mate.

But you can do that with the mouse, y'know. Splapp and MFAH use to do do it. ;)

do do

Hahaha, you said do do.

Yes!... and don't you dare make me repeat myself myself.

I used to draw with a mouse. An optical one that is, I don't think I could ever manage with a ball mouse. Then I got a tablet and now I have no freaking idea how I was able to draw with a mouse before.

I remember my first wireless mouse and my first tablet. I have switched between the two quite a lot of the last decade or so and I still find a pen easier than a mouse and a mouse easier than a tablet, usually. If I practise enough, the tablet is easier than the mouse. Bic biro on paper wins every time, though.

Bic biro on paper wins every time
I like the Pilot ballpoint pens a lot. The ones with the 1.5mm ballpoint that is.

Alright... it's done.

This is my retribution to Aku, since he was the first to spot Slick on the other thread. I inquired him if he would like a picture drawn or the cure for cancer and he chose the last one, so here it is:
http://forum.team17.co.uk/attachment.php?attachmentid=32298&d=1234964750 (http://the-error404.deviantart.com/art/The-Dairy-Cure-113313915)
[click the image for full version - beware of the monster file size ~1,2Mb]

I really put my heart and mind into this comic and it's the absolute best i can do. I worked hard on every step of the way and Pyramid is here to prove (and i thank him for the patience and comments).

Please, give your best critique. If you can find anything (artwise, plotwise, jokewise, scriptwise, etc.) that you think i should improve, please, say so. If you need a base to compare, my intention was to achieve the quality of a VG Cats comic (http://www.vgcats.com/comics/).

Ultimately, if this joke don't get me banned from here, nothing will! :p

Enjoy!

32298 (http://the-error404.deviantart.com/art/The-Dairy-Cure-113313915)

I feel the need to wash MY mouth with bleach.

So you succeded! D:

that. was. Awesome!™

ok, I'm scouring the pic as best I can for critiques. not much here to complain about.

1. the hand on the top right frame. the shadow is backwards or something, it's shaded on the top of the fingers near the light but not on the bottom? obviously you know better, but YOU SCREWED UP! :mad:

2. .......actually I can't see anything else.

seriously. awesome job.

Thanks guys. I'm glad you enjoyed.

1. the hand on the top right frame. the shadow is backwards or something, it's shaded on the top of the fingers near the light but not on the bottom? obviously you know better, but YOU SCREWED UP!
Indeed... that was, by far, the most dificult frame to draw and colour... the hand probably follows a former lightsource. I'll have that fixed tomorrow. The lightsource is still lower than the worm there, so i'll have to check on how to shade that thing properly.

If you have any comments on the joke... plot... or whatever... if you found it funny... or not. I'd like any feedback - positive or otherwise. :)

Very nice! (I mean the art, I swear!)

If I had one complaint, it would be how you seem to have married the C and V keys of your keyboard.


On a related matter, I don't really like VGcats anymore after it was pointed out that the majority of the jokes do suck.

Very nice! (I mean the art, I swear!)the fact that you have to defend yourself says quite a bit there, plasma ;)

If I had one complaint, it would be how you seem to have married the C and V keys of your keyboard.what? you expect him to redraw the EXACT SAME SCENE 6 different times? it's stationary, why on earth would he redraw it? animators essentially use copy+paste. would you prefer THEY redraw each frame?

On a related matter, I don't really like VGcats anymore after it was pointed out that the majority of the jokes do suck.really? you should explain why so that I can cast aside my own (obviously incorrect) opinions on the matter and be one step closer to cool. :cool:

If I had one complaint, it would be how you seem to have married the C and V keys of your keyboard.
As that was completely intentional to achieve a desired effect, i'll just go ahead and assume you had no complaints! :)

Thanks!

I also wonder about wether VGCats sucks... i laughted quite a bit browsing through their comics a few days ago.

what? you expect him to redraw the EXACT SAME SCENE 6 different times? it's stationary, why on earth would he redraw it? animators essentially use copy+paste. would you prefer THEY redraw each frame?
Hence why I said "If I had a complaint". I never minded copy-paste artwork myself, but from what I can gather, general consensus is that unchanging camera or duplicate expressions are not a good thing.

Amazing comic.

Like, seriously amazing.

I kind of wonder about the shading sometimes, in particular the sun is usually behind them if panel 2 and the shadows on the floor in the other panels are anything to go by, but on the worms themselves they seem to have the light coming from the opposite direction. Honestly, I think it actually looks fine as is and I'm only being really nitpicky, because I don't know if having all of their faces etc. in the shadows would look any better, but y'know... I just say to myself that the sunlight is really ambient and then that tends to solve things ;)

I love the way you blurred the background in the last panel because the "camera changed focus". I thought that panel where it splits in two and the only thing that changes are your eyes was really effective. I love the drawing of the bull. I love the "trail" of the "milk" coming (hyuk hyuk) from Error's mouth. Hell, I love everything about this comic.
Hence why I said "If I had a complaint". I never minded copy-paste artwork myself, but from what I can gather, general consensus is that unchanging camera or duplicate expressions are not a good thing.
Ehh.... not necessarily. Generally people tend to moan if a comic is nothing more than "talking heads". If the entire comic was that same pose, then I'd probably have a problem with it, but in every panel I'd say the panel is focusing on the right stuff. (The only exception I could probably make is the one where Error has the milk and is inserting the straw, as there's technically no need to see Aku in that panel, but he is talking to Aku so it's best to keep him in there. Even if I were to change it, I have no idea what would be more effective, if anything. I say it's perfectly fine as it is.)

P.S. Did I mention that I think this is wonderful?

Oh you finally finished it
And all that wait, well, was damn worth it! The comic is amazing!
The colours are so well done, perfectly executed. And you nailed the expressions (laughed alot of that last panel).
Second panel is so great.
The change of ambience in the 3th panel, was incredible, and an awesome background there.
Seriously...after all this work, and redoing the same things several times to achieve the best result, I think you got what you wanted so bad. I really really loved the comic, and it was great to see the progress of your work with it, through the week.
Congratulations

If you have any comments on the joke... plot... or whatever... if you found it funny... or not. I'd like any feedback - positive or otherwise. :)

I believe I wasn't clear enough on how awesome I thought it was.

ALSO: Can't avoid making my stomach go all funny after seeing the last panel for the 10th time.

How the hell can those go for so cheap? The last I heard, the erm, ingredients can be very expensive. Well ok, Top Gear isn't a reliable source, but still...

I think my only comment will be that Aku is very... still. A copy-paste background is fine, but I think it would be better if you redrew Aku each time.

When your comics and art are this good, it's time to start a webcomic.

And after reading that I want to wash my mouth out with concentrated sulphuric acid. :P

Great writing, great art. It's what makes a comic a comic!
Hooray!

Hence why I said "If I had a complaint". I never minded copy-paste artwork myself, but from what I can gather, general consensus is that unchanging camera or duplicate expressions are not a good thing.

Those frames set a really good pace for the comic. I think the way Error's portrayed Beardy's reaction time is brilliant; nothing short of perfection.

The art is astounding, too. The bull made me laugh out loud (excellently drawn) and the colours in the frame with Paul is so well contrast to the rest of the comic. Excellent work, my friend.

Any improvements you could have made are rendered invisible by the attention to detail you've put into this piece.

edit: Ooh, I noticed a mistake ;)

And after reading that I want to wash my mouth out with concentrated sulphuric acid. :P

Been drinking stuff you thought was milk have you?
I also recommend Hydrochloric Acid - it's less toxic and is produced naturally for use in the human stomach, but will have the same effect in your mouth as concentrated Sulphuric Acid without reacting too vigorously with your saliva.

I think my only comment will be that Aku is very... still. A copy-paste background is fine, but I think it would be better if you redrew Aku each time.

I disagree
Imagine as an animated cartoon, where Beardy keeps interacting, but Aku remain with the same stupid/funny expression, like if it was all ok and natural for him
I think the effect was right



edit: Ooh, I noticed a mistake ;)

Actually, it's a lil' cow at there, with Aku's head in front

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I kind of wonder about the shading sometimes, in particular the sun is usually behind them if panel 2 and the shadows on the floor in the other panels are anything to go by, but on the worms themselves they seem to have the light coming from the opposite direction. Honestly, I think it actually looks fine as is and I'm only being really nitpicky, because I don't know if having all of their faces etc. in the shadows would look any better, but y'know... I just say to myself that the sunlight is really ambient and then that tends to solve things
The shading is consistent with the exception of panel two, that has another kind of dramatic effect to emphasize the angle of the camera. That was meant to be.
I love the way you blurred the background in the last panel because the "camera changed focus". I thought that panel where it splits in two and the only thing that changes are your eyes was really effective. I love the drawing of the bull. I love the "trail" of the "milk" coming (hyuk hyuk) from Error's mouth. Hell, I love everything about this comic.
Thanks! I actually have gradual blur on the whole background. It gets blurred as it goes further away from the camera.
And thanks for that... that was the kind of effect that i was aiming for... glad it worked.
I love the drawing of the bull. I love the "trail" of the "milk" coming (hyuk hyuk) from Error's mouth. Hell, I love everything about this comic.
I got the bull this morning at first shot! HA! Total fluke but i couldn't stop laughin' at it... bulls in speedos are the best! :p But he wasn't actually planned to be there. I thought of him last night while i was preparing to sleep. The joke would end with... well... the graphical explanation of what was the content of the boxes but i thought that some people might just not get it just by looking at the... liquid... viscosity. I'm just glad i thought of him. Hell, that was fun to draw.

Big fat thanks. I'm very glad it all worked for you! :D


Oh you finally finished it
And all that wait, well, was damn worth it! The comic is amazing!
The colours are so well done, perfectly executed. And you nailed the expressions (laughed alot of that last panel).
Second panel is so great.
The change of ambience in the 3th panel, was incredible, and an awesome background there.
Seriously...after all this work, and redoing the same things several times to achieve the best result, I think you got what you wanted so bad. I really really loved the comic, and it was great to see the progress of your work with it, through the week.
Congratulations
Big thanks, mate!
You know better than anyone how i struggled with this. :p I was really careful about the details about panel 3's background and i think it turned out pretty good. Paul's beard an the pump shading are the only things i think i could've tweaked a little bit more. I'll make sure to post that panel in full colours later on.

I believe I wasn't clear enough on how awesome I thought it was.

ALSO: Can't avoid making my stomach go all funny after seeing the last panel for the 10th time.
Thanks! I feel fulfilled! ;)


How the hell can those go for so cheap? The last I heard, the erm, ingredients can be very expensive. Well ok, Top Gear isn't a reliable source, but still...
Worm currency!... it's nuts these days... go figure...
I think my only comment will be that Aku is very... still. A copy-paste background is fine, but I think it would be better if you redrew Aku each time.
Yes! He was supposed to look like a meat puppet and rather stupid with a vague stare and a sparkle of innocence.

When your comics and art are this good, it's time to start a webcomic.

And after reading that I want to wash my mouth out with concentrated sulphuric acid.

Great writing, great art. It's what makes a comic a comic!
Hooray!
I'm very glad to hear that... specially the will to wash your mouth with pH non-compliant for human condition! It's always a good sign!
Knowing that if i put all my effort and work like a bloody horse for a week straight i can get something that's worth posting as a webcomic is all i wanted to hear!

Those frames set a really good pace for the comic. I think the way Error's portrayed Beardy's reaction time is brilliant; nothing short of perfection.

The art is astounding, too. The bull made me laugh out loud (excellently drawn) and the colours in the frame with Paul is so well contrast to the rest of the comic. Excellent work, my friend.

Any improvements you could have made are rendered invisible by the attention to detail you've put into this piece.
I actually passed to the whole comic as if it was an animation quite a few times. And i thought of it as if it was, hence the frames with similar poses.

As mentioned previously. I laughed like a mad man while drawing that bull. It almost drew itself, man... false modesty aside, that one turned out great.

I think you'll like the original colours on that Paul and Muscular Worm frame even more. I'll post it later on today.

And thanks, my friend. That means a lot coming from you!

edit: Ooh, I noticed a mistake
It's a cow on the hill on the background. :eek:

Imagine as an animated cartoon, where Beardy keeps interacting, but Aku remain with the same stupid/funny expression, like if it was all ok and natural for him
I think the effect was right
Right on, my friend, right on!

Bottom line: Thanks for the feedback guys! I'll still need some more on this one, but i guess you'll find it easy to cast your vote on the other subjects!

It's pure awesome, only point I could say something about it the characters you used, Muscular Worm! Whoosh! isn't evil and generally does no harm. It's a wannabe superhero and wouldn't use weapons like a whip. Now I'm not sure about Aku, his character seems not to care about people, but could do this because he considers it fun.

You get the point.

I was absolute sure that you would whine about this so i rehearsed an answer already:
When i was forming that scene into my head i needed a big MUSCULAR worm to serve as the guard for Aku's evil lair. As "MUSCULAR" came to my mind i thought it would be fun to use him.

It seems that you just can't get happy by having your worms drawn by me (ok, i always kill them and wear their skins and draw them as being evil, but still). :p

Thanks for the compliment. :D

Ultimately, if this joke don't get me banned from here, nothing will! :p

Enjoy!

Well DA turned down a report I did on a censored rule 34 that still had the wrong milk in, so yeah you might get away with that. :P

I love this comic man, and that hard work you put has paid off.

Your new avatar is kickass too.

That is awesomely dusgusting, nice job.

No critisim, due to lack of pickiness

I just noticed the ill looking smile on beardys hat! XD

Well DA turned down a report I did on a censored rule 34 that still had the wrong milk in, so yeah you might get away with that. :P

I love this comic man, and that hard work you put has paid off.

Your new avatar is kickass too.
Oh, well... at least i didn't specify anything. So as far as a child can tell, that's either peanut butter or maple syrup. :)

And thanks for the compliment, ma'am. It meas a lot comming from another great artist.
That is awesomely dusgusting, nice job.

No critisim, due to lack of pickiness
Thanks mate!

The image of a bull wearing a thong will be forever imprinted in my mind. :eek:

Nice job.

I envy you for that. :(

Also, it's a lie, but thank you, sir.

I would like your opinion on a little something. Back when i was drawing The Dairy Cure, i came up with 3 different types of speech bubbles for the comic.

I was wondering which you guys like the best:
1-32316
2-32317
3-32318

Honest opinions, please. :)

I like number 2 - round bubbles use up too much excess space, the ones with cropped corners look almost clichéd and the ones in the middle have a good amount of give in them in terms of shape rigidity/formality combined with the pleasing aesthetic associated with round bubbles.

I also like 2. seems to suit your style much better.

2 is deliciously awesome.

I'd say 3 is the best there. 2 just looks too... irregular.