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Shadowmoon
28 Jan 2009, 16:52
Wow. Really nice stuff indeed.

Love the golem worm, the detail on it is great.

Akuryou13
11 Feb 2009, 05:14
wanted to draw stuff.

here is stuff:

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/97/grimoswaldly6.jpg

and before you ask, something funky happened with the colors while saving. made some of the black lines less.....black...not sure why.

Pyramid
11 Feb 2009, 05:20
I miss the hair on the left side of the head

Akuryou13
11 Feb 2009, 05:24
I miss the hair on the left side of the headnot sure how that would be shown from the angle I have him. ideas?

Pyramid
11 Feb 2009, 05:32
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/294/wormsexamplezb4.png

Somehow like one of these two. More likely the second one

Akuryou13
11 Feb 2009, 05:39
I was thinking along the lines of the second one, but I'm just not sure how it would work, exactly, given the eye and all.

GrimOswald
11 Feb 2009, 06:12
Oh, your "door" may have thwarted me for now, Mr. .Power, but next time you will not be so lucky! I WILL HAVE MY REVENGE! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

*Goes off and builds clown cannon*

(Oh, and I forgot to mention, but I really liked your sigworm/golem stuff too.)

Gardy Looo
11 Feb 2009, 06:34
That golem worm is just. Oh wow, awesome.
DANGIT AKU AND YOUR TABLET SKILLS.

Akuryou13
11 Feb 2009, 07:35
well, here's another one for tonight. what can I say, I'm bored.

just wanted to draw someone using a dragonball, and saffya seemed a good, generic candidate for that. bandana added to her sig for the sake of showing it's just a weapon.

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/3318/dragonballpb9.jpg

Gardy Looo
11 Feb 2009, 10:52
I don't really remember the fireball from the game being white, but I'm just being picky. Nice picture.
Although the highlight under the headband seems odd, as it's brighter when it's further from the fireball.

Akuryou13
11 Feb 2009, 11:00
I don't really remember the fireball from the game being white, but I'm just being picky. Nice picture.
Although the highlight under the headband seems odd, as it's brighter when it's further from the fireball.it's actually equally bright, but now that you mention it, it really shouldn't be. didn't think of that :p

and actually, the 3 colors of the dragonball are there, I just took the liberty of making it shiny (IE making it a Linear Dodge layer) and that turns it whiter than it was. I also used a bit of white anyway to make it look generally better (read "shinier").

Error404
11 Feb 2009, 13:39
Alright, where should i start? *evil grin*

First and more importantly, i like the new perspective and poses you're giving to the worms. It adds more to the pictures than you can imagine.

Your lineart seems rather flickery. I don't know if you're making it directly into Photoshop or whatever with a tablet or scanning then. If you're going with the second option, i'd advise you to ink (digitally or otherwise) your lineart before coloring for the sake of homogeneity (believe me, i know it's a pain, but it turns out for the best).

On the cliff image:
• The hair, which Mr. Pyramid smartly pointed out and gave rather precise instructions on how to correct;
• The worm seem tilted to the right side for no apparent reason;
• The lineart is a bit inconsistant. Sometimes it's too thick and black, sometimes isn't (i know you pointed that out yourself, but i'm talking about thickness here, not colour);
• The background seems a bit poor. Maybe you could add some stuff before the horizon line. This' not very important as most people don't even draw backgrounds but it's something that worth the attention.
• The... cliff... with...the... lair... seems... pointy on the top... or just... weird... i can't quite put my finger on it... the perspective of the bottom part seems fairly right, but the top... there's something wrong there...

On the dragonball:
• The whiteness doesn't bother me... it's seems good.
• There's some weird highlight leaking from the bandana to the worm there. That's wrong.
• The highlight itself isn't very convincing as it doesn't affect the hair, body and scarf.
• And when you prepare a fireball, you leave the bottom hand with the thumb pointing away from the body and the upper hand with the thumb pointing to the oposite direction. So your hands are weird. :p

Good job in general. I particullary like the one with Saffya. Keep it up!

Pyramid
11 Feb 2009, 14:13
• The... cliff... with...the... lair... seems... pointy on the top... or just... weird... i can't quite put my finger on it... the perspective of the bottom part seems fairly right, but the top... there's something wrong there...



The top gives the impression of being a round structure, because of that sahding, that I think it's the problem, while the bottom gives the impression of being a straight structure


And I'm not sure if I made my point clear :-/

Error404
11 Feb 2009, 14:43
Nonono... nono... i got it now... he drew it in isometric, not conic perspective. That's why it's weird.
32276

If you have an horizon line, Aku, the lines of any plane should meet there. Once you get the handle of conic perspective, aku, you'll see it's all much easier. ;)

Akuryou13
11 Feb 2009, 14:54
First and more importantly, i like the new perspective and poses you're giving to the worms. It adds more to the pictures than you can imagine.oh I realize. and thanks :)

Your lineart seems rather flickery. I don't know if you're making it directly into Photoshop or whatever with a tablet or scanning then. If you're going with the second option, i'd advise you to ink (digitally or otherwise) your lineart before coloring for the sake of homogeneity (believe me, i know it's a pain, but it turns out for the best).keep in mind that these are still my first few drawings on a tablet. I'm still getting used to the whole "actually drawing" thing.

• The worm seem tilted to the right side for no apparent reason;not sure what you're meaning here.

• The lineart is a bit inconsistant. Sometimes it's too thick and black, sometimes isn't (i know you pointed that out yourself, but i'm talking about thickness here, not colour);where are your problem areas in this regard? the sign is the main culprit of the overly black lines, so if that's where your complaint is, it's probably just the thing I pointed out. aside from that, I guess the worm is a little thicker than the rest, but that's mostly just my own getting used to actually doing lineart.

• The background seems a bit poor. Maybe you could add some stuff before the horizon line. This' not very important as most people don't even draw backgrounds but it's something that worth the attention.it was kind of a last-minute thing and I didn't put the effort into it it needed to be actually good. I'll figure something out to keep me from spending too much time while still making a decent picture next time.

• The... cliff... with...the... lair... seems... pointy on the top... or just... weird... i can't quite put my finger on it... the perspective of the bottom part seems fairly right, but the top... there's something wrong there...possibly you're having trouble with the perspective? it doesnt' exactly fit in with the background at all. in-perspective you wouldn't see the flat grassy area at all. perhaps that's where your issue lies?
edit: the background was a last-minute addition. guess I shouldn't have bothered :p

• The whiteness doesn't bother me... it's seems good.huzzah!
• There's some weird highlight leaking from the bandana to the worm there. That's wrong. under the bandana? it's meant to be a glow reflecting from the bandana, but yeah it's definitely a bit too vibrant there.
• The highlight itself isn't very convincing as it doesn't affect the hair, body and scarf.yeah, I've realized that as well since posting it.
• And when you prepare a fireball, you leave the bottom hand with the thumb pointing away from the body and the upper hand with the thumb pointing to the oposite direction. So your hands are weird. :pcharged many magic fireballs in your life, have you? :p but yeah, I see what you mean. I guess they're backwards. oops!

Good job in general. I particullary like the one with Saffya. Keep it up!:D thanks!

bonz
11 Feb 2009, 15:35
Nonono... nono... i got it now... he drew it in isometric, not conic perspective. That's why it's weird.
32276

If you have an horizon line, Aku, the lines of any plane should meet there. Once you get the handle of conic perspective, aku, you'll see it's all much easier. ;)
Actually, the top of that cliff could actually be a slope, not parallel to the ground.
If the gradient equals the perspective, it would look that way.
;)

Shadowmoon
11 Feb 2009, 15:40
Great stuff, as usual.

Akuryou13
11 Feb 2009, 15:41
Actually, the top of that cliff could actually be a slope, not parallel to the ground.
If the gradient equals the perspective, it would look that way.
;)and the door is built to align with the slope rather than the easiest way to build it! it's genius! paul must've wanted to torment and confuse his fellow scientists with an EXTREMELY awkward door, so that no one would bother him in his lab! :cool:

Error404
11 Feb 2009, 17:00
Actually, the top of that cliff could actually be a slope, not parallel to the ground.
If the gradient equals the perspective, it would look that way.
Could, but then it would be "pointy" like i said previously - and rather unnatural - and the door and the sign would follow the slope degree... I don't think that's what Aku was aiming for here. :p

keep in mind that these are still my first few drawings on a tablet. I'm still getting used to the whole "actually drawing" thing.
Don't worry... mine is too. A tip i can give you is to use the eraser just as you use the pen/brush. People tend to use the eraser just to erase mistakes, but you can use it as a powerful tool to get your lines straight and homogeneous.
not sure what you're meaning here.
32277
When you get the tail right, you make the body tilt... that's not good.
where are your problem areas in this regard? the sign is the main culprit of the overly black lines, so if that's where your complaint is, it's probably just the thing I pointed out. aside from that, I guess the worm is a little thicker than the rest, but that's mostly just my own getting used to actually doing lineart.
Indeed, it's mostly the worm and the sign. If you spoted that already, i think you'll make the necessary adjustments in the future.
charged many magic fireballs in your life, have you?
I lost the track of how many. But i'm like Dan... my fireballs are puny and weak. I've always wanted to learn the Yoga Fire, though. :P

bonz
11 Feb 2009, 21:04
Could, but then it would be "pointy" like i said previously - and rather unnatural - and the door and the sign would follow the slope degree... I don't think that's what Aku was aiming for here. :p
I had a second look on the image, and all you'd need to do is to raise the horizon and all the background stuff up a few centimeters.
Right now it the whole grass plain and the cliff look as if they were standing on a slope which is descending towards the viewer.

Plasma
11 Feb 2009, 21:09
Either that, or they're on a very small planet.

Metal Alex
11 Feb 2009, 21:35
Either that, or they're on a very small planet.

Too much Spore, Plasma... But you already know that, don't you?

Error404
11 Feb 2009, 21:39
Actually, no, bonz. That is (or at least seems as it was suposed to be) isometric... paralel lines never intersect. :p

I'm saying this cause Aku use to draw isometric stuff all the time, so i suspect it was his intention here. His mistake was to mix up isometric and conic perspect. Isometric does not have horizon lines.

And i believe Aku should drop the isometric stuff as it's artificial and designed to fill some very specific niches.

bonz
11 Feb 2009, 23:41
Isometric does not have horizon lines.
Well, it actually does. Infinitely away though, which is hard to draw on even the widest screen and highest resolution. :)

MtlAngelus
12 Feb 2009, 03:29
Has anyone ever tried playing HL2 on isometric perspective? Quite fun.

Akuryou13
12 Feb 2009, 03:46
32277
When you get the tail right, you make the body tilt... that's not good.only part I'm gunna bother to address I think.

I actually disagree here. I prefer the way it looks how I drew it. looks more threatening. oops, looked at that wrong. I prefer how you did it. my bad :p I'll fix that in the future.

Metal Alex
12 Feb 2009, 13:02
Has anyone ever tried playing HL2 on isometric perspective? Quite fun.

Is that even possible? If so, I need to know how. (I guess you mean Half-Life 2 :p)

Vader
12 Feb 2009, 14:11
You can see from the lines I've added how I have fixed your image, Aku. It now looks 30% more Zen.

MtlAngelus
12 Feb 2009, 15:17
Is that even possible? If so, I need to know how. (I guess you mean Half-Life 2 :p)

There is a console command, although I do not remember which one. I actually discovered it by accident when trying to find how to change the fov. And then I couldn't change it back so I was stuck playing like that until I restarted the game. :p

Saffya
14 Feb 2009, 17:53
well, here's another one for tonight. what can I say, I'm bored.

just wanted to draw someone using a dragonball, and saffya seemed a good, generic candidate for that. bandana added to her sig for the sake of showing it's just a weapon.

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/3318/dragonballpb9.jpg

Personally I like using fire punches, but this is pretty cool.

Akuryou13
19 Feb 2009, 03:32
wanted to practice a few things. mostly shading in the style of neon dragon (http://neondragon.deviantart.com). I think I got the character shading decently but the ground needs work. any suggestions on any aspect of this pic would be appreciated.

anyway, here's the pic. don't ask what they're pointing for. :p

http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/362/accostedakupu2.jpg

Error404
19 Feb 2009, 03:45
The shading itself is good. I can't add much to it. Maybe it's a bit too detailed for such a small resolution, but that's more of an option than a problem.

The lineart improved but still look a bit blurred or something. As if you made it with a soft brush or something.

The grass looks really bad, and i think you know. The sky looks like it has been taken from elsewhere and poorly resized.

That's about it. I can see improvements. Keep working on it!

Shadowmoon
19 Feb 2009, 08:10
Nice, your now using 3 colour shading.

Shading looks a lot better like that, in my opinion.

Metal Alex
19 Feb 2009, 12:52
OH hey, we grew an additional finger :O (I mean, stick to 3 or 4, preferably.)

As for my worm, you can literally draw him in any way you want. I prefer pupilless, but it works well for this pic.

Akuryou13
19 Feb 2009, 13:57
The shading itself is good. I can't add much to it. Maybe it's a bit too detailed for such a small resolution, but that's more of an option than a problem.eh, I quite like it as-is myself. I'm a fan of detail-work like that.

The lineart improved but still look a bit blurred or something. As if you made it with a soft brush or something.yeah. I made it too thick to begin with and then tried to make it smaller. guess it didn't come out quite as well as I wanted.

The grass looks really bad, and i think you know. The sky looks like it has been taken from elsewhere and poorly resized.yeah, I realize how bad the background is. I wanted to practice it a bit but the result just wasn't what I wanted. possibly because neondragon hasn't done anything with a big, open background so I couldn't look at how to draw a field in her style. I'll work something out in time.

Nice, your now using 3 colour shading.

Shading looks a lot better like that, in my opinion.5-color shading, actually. learn to count :p

OH hey, we grew an additional finger :O (I mean, stick to 3 or 4, preferably.)

As for my worm, you can literally draw him in any way you want. I prefer pupilless, but it works well for this pic.feh. I just intend to sketch your character and run with however that turns out.

Alien King
19 Feb 2009, 14:15
5-color shading, actually. learn to count :p

To be fair, I can only see 4. Either I'm blind or the 5th is very subtle.

Plasma
19 Feb 2009, 14:26
There's a very subtle second highlight. You wouldn't see it without zooming in.

Akuryou13
19 Feb 2009, 15:44
There's a very subtle second highlight. You wouldn't see it without zooming in.didn't realize it was quite that subtle. then again, I knew what I was looking for :p

Error404
19 Feb 2009, 16:25
To be fair, I can only see 4. Either I'm blind or the 5th is very subtle.
The fifth would be the thumb... either that or those are some sort of mutant hybrid between a worm a chimp.

Pyramid
19 Feb 2009, 16:28
Both hands looks weird to me

Alien King
19 Feb 2009, 16:30
The fifth would be the thumb... either that or those are some sort of mutant hybrid between a worm a chimp.

Erm, I'm not referring to digits on his hand. Those I can count.
I was talking about levels of lightning on the worm.

Error404
19 Feb 2009, 16:49
In that case, i am a hybrid between a man and a ferret.

Vader
19 Feb 2009, 16:55
A marret?

Error404
19 Feb 2009, 18:36
Yes please!

Akuryou13
20 Feb 2009, 00:31
great, now I have to spam as much as I can to cycle to a new page where I never have to gaze upon THAT travesty ever again...

Metal Alex
20 Feb 2009, 01:23
great, now I have to spam as much as I can to cycle to a new page where I never have to gaze upon THAT travesty ever again...

Need a little help here?

Akuryou13
20 Feb 2009, 02:02
Need a little help here?I think I'm good. only a few posts to go...

Kelster23
20 Feb 2009, 06:31
Cool stuff Aku!

koolies54
20 Feb 2009, 06:58
well, generally good stuff, the outlines on aku are a little dull, but its good.

Also, I like the shading on that pic, it looks a bit more natural to me, compared what you usually do.

Metal Alex
20 Feb 2009, 11:15
I think I'm good. only a few posts to go...

I insist

GrimOswald
20 Feb 2009, 13:01
That picture is pretty nice, though something seems odd to me about Aku's eyes. Could be just me though.

Oh, and slightly off topic, but I discovered this really great picture today and just had to share it with y'all:

Plasma
20 Feb 2009, 13:03
That picture is pretty nice, though something seems odd to me about Aku's eyes. Could be just me though.

Oh, and slightly off topic, but I discovered this really great picture today and just had to share it with y'all:
I take it then you forgot that you've got a post-per-page count set differently to the default?

GrimOswald
20 Feb 2009, 13:07
I take it then you forgot that you've got a post-per-page count set differently to the default?

My post-per-page count IS set to the default. Aku's, however, is not. :cool:

Akuryou13
20 Feb 2009, 14:44
My post-per-page count IS set to the default. Aku's, however, is not. :cool:oh you *******! :mad:

then again, I did see that sort of thing coming :p

Kelster23
21 Feb 2009, 21:45
Nice one Grim.

MtlAngelus
22 Feb 2009, 23:38
My post-per-page count IS set to the default. Aku's, however, is not. :cool:

But how did you know that Grim? :I

GrimOswald
23 Feb 2009, 01:46
But how did you know that Grim? :I

I think I'm good. only a few posts to go...

No idea. ;)

Akuryou13
4 Mar 2009, 07:41
Fantasy! Cartooning :cool:

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/6738/trollworm.jpg

koolies54
4 Mar 2009, 09:58
I have no clue what that is but it is fairly well drawn.

Akuryou13
4 Mar 2009, 11:43
I have no clue what that is but it is fairly well drawn.this is your worm on drugs.

alternatively, it's a troll-esque worm :p

Vader
4 Mar 2009, 11:55
It's not bad at all, my only criticisms being that it doesn't looks straight (his 'foot'/tail is at an angle), he's leaning to the left an unholy amount, and his tail looks wrong - there's far too much overlap between his back and the top of his tail. It sort of looks like he's sticking out of an apple... or rock... which he is part of... ummm... visual tip?:

Akuryou13
4 Mar 2009, 11:58
and his tail looks wrong - there's far too much overlap between his back and the top of his tail. It sort of looks like he's sticking out of an apple... or rock... which he is part of... ummm... visual tip?:I've noted that and a few other things (like the curve of the jaw in relation to the lip) as things I should fix next time I draw something.

Vader
4 Mar 2009, 12:02
I have to say I really like his brow and eyes. There's room for improvement but they're really cool - not at all wormy in the classic sense yet very fitting to the image.

I wouldn't focus too much on getting things looking anatomically correct - it's a cartoon image after all, so the jaw line is fine as it is, IMHO. :)

Akuryou13
4 Mar 2009, 12:20
I have to say I really like his brow and eyes. There's room for improvement but they're really cool - not at all wormy in the classic sense yet very fitting to the image.

I wouldn't focus too much on getting things looking anatomically correct - it's a cartoon image after all, so the jaw line is fine as it is, IMHO. :)eh, I mostly agree, but I'm going to try to make it MORE aligned in the future. definitely not looking for perfection, though.

.JeT
4 Mar 2009, 22:46
Only thing I Don't like is the shading on the mouth. (lips?) It just looks a bit strange.

Plasma
4 Mar 2009, 23:18
I agree with Jet. But then again, I always think your shading is generally rather off.

Error404
5 Mar 2009, 00:54
Vader did my job pretty damn well up there. I can't say much more than he said aside from: that angle of leaning is, indeed, possible - but only in dynamic situations. Much like people with their legs stretched straight up. You can't hold that position for nothing in hell. Same goes for the worm. I that was an action pose with something going on and a reason for the leaning, it'd be all good.

I agree the brows look nice and the shading of the mouth looks odd. You should've tried to follow the lineart there and properly shade the wrinkled lips (at least i think those are wrinkles).

Your shading is better, indeed, but there's room for inprovement. You should've tried to, first, enphasize the volumes on the picture. You did that on the jaw but forgot to do the same with te brows, the mouth, the eyes and so on. You should always try to shade them properly keeping in mind the volume they'd had in "real life".

Keep it up and remember: Think 3D - Draw 2D

Akuryou13
5 Mar 2009, 03:48
Vader did my job pretty damn well up there. I can't say much more than he said aside from: that angle of leaning is, indeed, possible - but only in dynamic situations. Much like people with their legs stretched straight up. You can't hold that position for nothing in hell. Same goes for the worm. I that was an action pose with something going on and a reason for the leaning, it'd be all good.I think I should've just put him looking down. he was supposed to be leaning in a menacing sort of horror monster-esque pose.

agree the brows look nice and the shading of the mouth looks odd. You should've tried to follow the lineart there and properly shade the wrinkled lips (at least i think those are wrinkles).good point about the wrinkles I'll keep that in mind.

Your shading is better, indeed, but there's room for inprovement. You should've tried to, first, enphasize the volumes on the picture. You did that on the jaw but forgot to do the same with te brows, the mouth, the eyes and so on. You should always try to shade them properly keeping in mind the volume they'd had in "real life".not sure what you mean that I missed on the brows :-/

Plasma
5 Mar 2009, 09:26
I think I should've just put him looking down. he was supposed to be leaning in a menacing sort of horror monster-esque pose.
Never heard of a horror monster leaning to make it look menacing, just hunching.

Vader
5 Mar 2009, 10:12
I think I should've just put him looking down. he was supposed to be leaning in a menacing sort of horror monster-esque pose.


His lean is quite creepy but in a weird bloke at the bus stop sort of way.

You know the sort.

A bit like Plasma.

Akuryou13
5 Mar 2009, 13:52
Never heard of a horror monster leaning to make it look menacing, just hunching.yeah, probably should've gone more for a hunch than a lean I guess.

Akuryou13
26 May 2009, 14:04
ZOMFG FAN ART! :eek:

http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/4717/taddarworm.jpg

cousin taddar asked for a revamp of his old worm. wanted a new pic for something. possibly myspace, where he's still using an old as dirt drawing of said worm.

enjoy the first fan art submission to the forums in about a month, I think.

FutureWorm
27 May 2009, 05:09
yo akuryou did you ever draw my sigworm? do it now, i dare you

Akuryou13
27 May 2009, 05:28
yo akuryou did you ever draw my sigworm? do it now, i dare youmight do just that. might not. WAIT AND SEEEEEEEEEeeeeee.......

Gardy Looo
27 May 2009, 07:18
The impressive facial hair made Taddar 120% more awesome.

Shadowmoon
4 Jun 2009, 12:04
Great job aku.

Akuryou13
30 Jul 2009, 04:00
*wave* hi again.


http://xelioth.deviantart.com/art/earth-vs-flame-131415887
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/9485/earthvsflamebyxelioth.jpg

edit: and I'm keeping the coolie and staff.

GrimOswald
30 Jul 2009, 04:49
Haha, for a moment I thought that said earth vs lame. :p

Cool beans, though the right hand looks kinda weird. (Why would he even hold the staff like that? That must be rather impractical. ~_^) And the perspective seems a little odd...I can't pin down an example, but something just seems off. Maybe that's just me and my delirium though.

But yeah, cool beans!

Akuryou13
30 Jul 2009, 13:49
(Why would he even hold the staff like that? That must be rather impractical. ~_^)not particularly. I posed myself holding my own Bo staff to check the feel of the stance before I started drawing. your hand being like that is pretty close to a few hand positions that work rather well, so that position makes for a decent staging position, which is basically what's needed in this pic. I'm not particularly trained with said bo staff, so it may be impractical in a serious fight, but at first glance it seems to work decently enough.

as to the perspective, I'd love to know what's wrong there, if you can find something to pin down. I'm not seeing it myself.

Plasma
30 Jul 2009, 15:13
For perhaps the first time in any of your pictures, I think you needed an extra effect. Mainly, the flame hand; its too dull as it is. I only realised it was meant to be illuminating the place when I noticed the shading.


Otherwise, t'is good. The background probably could've been a little more complex, but good nonetheless.

Akuryou13
30 Jul 2009, 23:07
Otherwise, t'is good. The background probably could've been a little more complex, but good nonetheless.don't have much experience with backgrounds. give me some time to fiddle with a way to do them quickly without making them horrible.

Toonix
2 Aug 2009, 22:29
don't have much experience with backgrounds. give me some time to fiddle with a way to do them quickly without making them horrible.

Actually, I figure the misty-looking background here is pretty good.

Gardy Looo
7 Aug 2009, 15:19
Nice. His left hand could be bigger, though. And maybe the staff should be more ornate if it's for casting earth mojo, but if it's only for combat, at least some cloth wrapped around the middle.
Do excuse my nitpicking, though. :p

Akuryou13
8 Aug 2009, 01:10
Nice. His left hand could be bigger, though. And maybe the staff should be more ornate if it's for casting earth mojo, but if it's only for combat, at least some cloth wrapped around the middle.
Do excuse my nitpicking, though. :pyeah, his left hand bugs me a bit too. wasn't THAT bad, so I just kinda hoped no one would notice seeing as I'd redrawn it like 8 times :p

I somewhat agree with the staff thing, but I dunno if it's worth the effort to put wrappings or something similar on the bottom half :p

MtlAngelus
8 Aug 2009, 06:15
I don't like it because they have really long faces and they look retarded. :(

Akuryou13
8 Aug 2009, 16:04
I don't like it because they have really long faces and they look retarded. :(looked in the mirror lately? :cool:

MtlAngelus
8 Aug 2009, 19:17
looked in the mirror lately? :cool:

Actually, I had to look in the mirror right after seeing your drawing. I needed to see true beauty to offset the ugliness I had seen. :cool:

Alien King
8 Aug 2009, 20:27
Actually, I had to look in the mirror right after seeing your drawing. I needed to see true beauty to offset the ugliness I had seen. :cool:

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder... therefore your eye is WRONG.

Your eye errs most dangerously indeed.


I honestly have no idea why I remembered you saying that, but it was in the old avatar rating thread

FutureWorm
12 Aug 2009, 00:54
stop fighting u guys :(

MtlAngelus
12 Aug 2009, 04:51
stop fighting u guys :(

Go to your room, Futureworm! This is between mommy and daddy!

poninja
13 Aug 2009, 23:18
Verry Good art aku

MtlAngelus
13 Aug 2009, 23:20
Your eye errs most dangerously indeed.


I honestly have no idea why I remembered you saying that, but it was in the old avatar rating thread

No because we had already established that your eye is wrong. Therefore, mine is correct. :cool:

Akuryou13
23 Sep 2009, 04:59
2 weeks of college as a studio art major:

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/9161/akuthrow.jpg
http://xelioth.deviantart.com/art/Aku-Smash-137941246

edit: surprise contest. first two replies will have their sigs drawn locked in an EPIC DUEL!

thomasp
23 Sep 2009, 17:08
Pretty impressive work! We expect to see a similar rate of improvement over the rest of your course :p

MrBunsy
23 Sep 2009, 17:29
edit: Surprise contest. First two replies will have their sigs drawn locked in an epic duel!

: D

Not sure the fuzzy horizon works though, kinda clashes with the clouds and the tree. Otherwise good!

Akuryou13
23 Sep 2009, 18:11
: D

Not sure the fuzzy horizon works though, kinda clashes with the clouds and the tree. Otherwise good!I agree. I decided to just do a straight black line in the future.

and what the heck is your sig, bunsy?

shadowman
23 Sep 2009, 19:19
It's a worm with a bauble hat.

Plasma
23 Sep 2009, 20:17
So let me get this straight: you're going to draw a sigworm EPIC DUEL between.... one guy who doesn't have a sigworm, and one guy whose sigworm you don't know.

shadowman
23 Sep 2009, 20:48
That or do me and Bunsy, since we're the first two with sigworms to post.

Plasma
23 Sep 2009, 20:56
Nah. Clearly, it should be me and MtlAngelus; we were the first to reply in the whole thread!

:P

Akuryou13
23 Sep 2009, 21:46
So let me get this straight: you're going to draw a sigworm EPIC DUEL between.... one guy who doesn't have a sigworm, and one guy whose sigworm you don't know.paul actually was on XFire shortly after I posted, and he reminded me of who bunsy's sig was. and thomas is easy as hell. just make it mac-related. instant thomas.

thomasp
23 Sep 2009, 21:57
I just don't have an official sigworm because I lack anything that might bear even the slightest resemblance to artistic talent or creativity :p

Therefore I have a few unofficial sigworms which have appeared in various comics, usually consisting of a partially eaten apple and the letters "U" and "M".

MrBunsy
23 Sep 2009, 23:02
It's a worm with a bauble hat.

A woolly bobble hat. The wool is significant :p He was my av for ages, but then CyberShadow made his rotatey pic generator.

Heh, this could be the most epically non-epic battle ever.

Akuryou13
23 Sep 2009, 23:19
oh you doubt my powers of epicification.....

BEHOLD! OH YE OF LITTLE FAITH!

http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/254/thomasvsbunsy.jpg
http://xelioth.deviantart.com/art/ThomasP-vs-MrBunsy-138016685

my laptop monitor is apparently rather dark. I suggest you don't look at this on a monitor with a high-contrast. you'll burn your eyes off :p

thomasp
23 Sep 2009, 23:21
That is rather awesome :D

What am I holding/using to zap Bunsy though?

Akuryou13
23 Sep 2009, 23:22
What am I holding/using to zap Bunsy though? iCannon, of course! Macintosh's answer to the Reploid menace!

MrBunsy
23 Sep 2009, 23:36
iCannon

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Awesome though. It does rather put me in mind of what the aperture science portal gun would look like if made by apple.

Liketyspli
24 Sep 2009, 07:32
Would've been more epic if there was like, big explosions and an 18-wheeler spins out of control and it's all like BRAAAASH! And motorcycles burst into flames while they jump over these helicopters, and it's all like BRAAAAWL! BRAAASH! KEBEWM!

shadowman
24 Sep 2009, 11:35
You should draw me now.

Y'know.

For fun.

SupSuper
24 Sep 2009, 12:00
There is no fun on these boards.

Akuryou13
24 Sep 2009, 13:04
You should draw me now.

Y'know.

For fun.the reason I was able to churn out these was a lack of homework for 2 days. I promise nothing in terms of further updates :p

Shadowmoon
24 Sep 2009, 15:21
I request, link to mah sigworm is in mah sig.

Akuryou13
24 Sep 2009, 23:55
I request, link to mah sigworm is in mah sig.ha! haha! hahahahahaaa!

hear that everyone? he requests! from ME! HA!

you're lucky if I do random stuff I WANT to do, much less the extra crap everyone else wants :p

not to say that I won't try to toss you in if I DO think of something, but requesting with me is rather entirely useless.

GrimOswald
25 Sep 2009, 05:07
So...I request? :cool::cool::cool:

Akuryou13
25 Sep 2009, 05:14
So...I request? :cool::cool::cool:duly noted. and immediately ignored.

Gardy Looo
25 Sep 2009, 07:34
I request also.
Basically, I'm narrowing your choice of sigworms when you want to draw someone, so you should be grateful. :cool:

Akuryou13
25 Sep 2009, 13:55
I request also.
Basically, I'm narrowing your choice of sigworms when you want to draw someone, so you should be grateful. :cool:wrong. ONE request makes me think about drawing said person because it's only one request. a bunch of requests and I know I'll never draw all those people, so I just ignore them all.

MtlAngelus
25 Sep 2009, 14:15
Hey Aku I heard you are doing requests now, so I'm requesting too.

Pyramid
26 Sep 2009, 06:32
Just to go against the herd, I don't request
That's right....

Vader
5 Oct 2009, 20:49
I don't need to rquest as I am so interesting and compelling and challenging and wonderful and insightful and fun to draw that everyone loves to draw me anyway.

If you disagree you are clearly retarded in the brain. That won't stop me from eating it, though.

FutureWorm
8 Oct 2009, 05:32
wrong. ONE request makes me think about drawing said person because it's only one request. a bunch of requests and I know I'll never draw all those people, so I just ignore them all.
you never did draw me, asshole

Akuryou13
8 Oct 2009, 12:49
you never did draw me, assholedarn. and I was so looking forward to it, too. :p

FutureWorm
9 Oct 2009, 06:05
darn. and I was so looking forward to it, too. :p

ho ho ho i see what you did there

Akuryou13
22 Jan 2010, 19:43
some of you may remember about 3 years ago I submitted this image to one of the FAoTM threads.

http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/1526/mayfanart.th.jpg (http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/1526/mayfanart.jpg)
http://akuryou13.deviantart.com/art/Defender-Battle-for-the-Spire-33719429

well now that I'm half through Color Theory in college I've decided to go ahead and remake that same image.

http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/9742/battleforthespire.th.jpg (http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/9742/battleforthespire.jpg)
http://silverwynde.deviantart.com/art/Battle-for-the-Spire-II-151349956

I have slightly owned myself.

edit: apparently Fan Art is so dead no one checks it anymore? :p

Liketyspli
23 Jan 2010, 20:16
Well, let me be the first to say: awesome.
Epic as ever, great stuff, do more etc. :p

super_frea
25 Jan 2010, 00:45
Nice! Very nice indeed.
Second one is better though. Better poses and such.

Akuryou13
25 Jan 2010, 04:17
Nice! Very nice indeed.
Second one is better though. Better poses and such......someone hand this man a medal! where's that old shadowmoon trophy?

Pyramid
25 Jan 2010, 06:15
Nice! Very nice indeed.
Second one is better though. Better poses and such.

LOL
Nice work, Aku. I was going to comment right after you posted but was too sleepy, so as I am now. Constructive Criticism will stay for later

Good job, anyway

super_frea
25 Jan 2010, 22:31
Note to self: do not post while intoxicated.

Akuryou13
26 Jan 2010, 04:00
Note to self: do not post while intoxicated.funny how the ink on those notes tends to fade when introduced to alcohol.

Akuryou13
9 Jul 2010, 00:37
BEWARE! despite the disarming appearance, this beast is cunning! So intelligent he can even see the future! keep away as best you can!

http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/8113/octopaul.jpg

MtlAngelus
9 Jul 2010, 01:45
Hahahaa, clever. :p

KRD
9 Jul 2010, 02:44
Okay so this ruins my avatar for me. I can practically see the red pencil in there. Thanks, Aku. :mad:

Shadowmoon
9 Jul 2010, 18:14
Heh, nice job, why didn't anyone think of turning Paul into a squid....

Akuryou13
9 Jul 2010, 18:37
Heh, nice job, why didn't anyone think of turning Paul into a squid....he's an octopus, not a squid. get it right.

and the reason no one thought about it is because until recently we were all under his control, unable to see his true form.

poninja
9 Jul 2010, 19:40
Finally some posts after a full week

Nice, but who or what is it?

MrBunsy
9 Jul 2010, 19:51
BEWARE! despite the disarming appearance, this beast is cunning! So intelligent he can even see the future! keep away as best you can!


Paul is Davey Jones! :p

Shadowmoon
9 Jul 2010, 20:45
Finally some posts after a full week

Nice, but who or what is it?

A squid octopus.

And its Paul.Power, got mentioned just a couple of posts back before yours. Isn't the red pencil a clear sign?

poninja
9 Jul 2010, 21:26
A squid octopus.

And its Paul.Power, got mentioned just a couple of posts back before yours. Isn't the red pencil a clear sign?

I noticed the pencil but doesn't looks too much like P.P

FutureWorm
9 Jul 2010, 23:04
Finally some posts after a full week

Nice, but who or what is it?

A squid octopus.

And its Paul.Power, got mentioned just a couple of posts back before yours. Isn't the red pencil a clear sign?

you are both really dumb

Shadowmoon
9 Jul 2010, 23:28
Just one of those days, where you just have this random dumb moment for a second.

Does that beat "I forgot wood is flammable?" :P

Plasma
9 Jul 2010, 23:49
I noticed the pencil but doesn't looks too much like P.P
Nooooo, really? I don't know, maybe he's just having a bad day, or maybe he just really needs to cut his beard already!

Just one of those days, where you just have this random dumb moment for a second.

Does that beat "I forgot wood is flammable?" :P
That doesn't. But what you just did - pretending you know what it is and just forgot - is pretty damn far on the Goddam Stupid scale!

thomasp
9 Jul 2010, 23:54
If you've read the news about a certain German cephalopod you'll understand Aku's drawing...

poninja
10 Jul 2010, 05:55
you are both really dumb

I don't really care

MtlAngelus
10 Jul 2010, 06:35
I don't really care

Yes you do.

poninja
10 Jul 2010, 06:52
Yes you do.

Ok you got me :(

Shadowmoon
10 Jul 2010, 10:31
If you've read the news about a certain German cephalopod you'll understand Aku's drawing...

News?!!? I don't read the news.

pretending you know what it is and just forgot - is pretty damn far on the Goddam Stupid scale!

Heh I forgot what a squid looked like, I in fact did not do it on purpose at all, just a stupid mistake :p

MtlAngelus
10 Jul 2010, 15:40
For the uninformed people here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Paul_the_Octopus

Akuryou13
11 Jul 2010, 18:02
Paul is Davey Jones! :pthought about that. decided I didnt care :p

Thurbo
11 Jul 2010, 18:35
We friggin hate Paul (http://www.der-flix.de/index.php?preselect=666)

Akuryou13
5 May 2011, 03:37
Worms are generally supposed to be Cute 'n' Pudgy
well apparently I can't draw. I'm sorry to subject all of you to this monstrously misproportionate worm.

http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/9892/cuteworm.jpg (http://xelioth.deviantart.com/#/d3fltlj)

SgtFusion
5 May 2011, 07:48
That looks pretty good. I like the stylized angular style.

Xinos
5 May 2011, 11:56
That's cool Aku!

mpenix
5 May 2011, 12:08
Kinda looks like a fresh cave painting to me :) Looks good, the flatness of it vs the shadows though make it hard to believe it's got depth (hence me thinking it looks like a cave painting). Still great stylistic representation!

Akuryou13
5 May 2011, 14:31
I like the stylized angular style.I REALLY do too!

I even got compared to Genndy Tartakovsky for it. I think I might want to explore the style a little more! :D

Zero72
10 May 2011, 15:58
Yeah, the angles and the high-contrast shadows are really cool together.

Plasma
10 May 2011, 16:56
Hey. Hey, stop making me look bad! You know I don't like it when I look bad!

Akuryou13
28 Apr 2012, 02:52
Welcome back to my thread that STILL hasn't left the front page despite being dead for a year...

anyway, I decided to see what I've learned while in art college, now that I'm preparing to move on to my animation degree. I did so by drawing SupSuper once again. Not sure why he's my benchmark, but hey whatever.

anyway, lemme know what you think. Critique is appreciated!

http://i47.tinypic.com/2akl0nr.jpg (http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-1w4dgnP0sMw/T5snykT8PVI/AAAAAAAAAKA/MVbxmM_CdN0/s1600/SupSuper4.jpg)

Blog Link (http://baldmessiah.blogspot.com/2012/04/through-years-i-have-repeatedly-drawn.html)

SupSuper
28 Apr 2012, 05:24
Ha, talk about a blast from the past! It's a pretty nice evolution, though my plasma gun has become decidedly less awesome over the years. :p

Akuryou13
28 Apr 2012, 05:28
Ha, talk about a blast from the past! It's a pretty nice evolution, though my plasma gun has become decidedly less awesome over the years. :phaha, I like to think of it as less over-the-top rather than less awesome :p

Akuryou13
8 Jan 2013, 17:19
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-spS4W_CzAes/UOXn7VzdSFI/AAAAAAAAAVA/bt8NRyylSf8/s320/Worms_Post.jpg (http://baldmessiah.blogspot.com/2013/01/worm-infested-scenery.html)

So I've been doing a series of video game-inspired low-poly 3D renders, to practice both my modelling and lighting (not so much the texturing as pretty much everything have been lamberts).

Anyway, I did one based on the Hell theme and with the general inspiration of Worms 1. enjoy. Also check out the rest of them at my blog:

Bald Messiah (http://baldmessiah.blogspot.com)

Akuryou13
9 Jun 2013, 17:33
One last bit of fanart to close out the thread. Rest in peace, dear forum....

http://oi41.tinypic.com/16j20d2.jpg (http://baldmessiah.blogspot.com/2013/06/death-of-forum.html)

http://baldmessiah.blogspot.com/2013/06/death-of-forum.html

Zero72
9 Jun 2013, 19:07
Thanks. This makes me smile.

This place sure will be missed.

WormGod
9 Jun 2013, 19:24
One last bit of fanart to close out the thread. Rest in peace, dear forum....

http://baldmessiah.blogspot.com/2013/06/death-of-forum.html

Oh hey, I just noticed the other guys up there in the background.

Now I guess I can make a more informed opinion: I really dig this.

MtlAngelus
9 Jun 2013, 19:25
That's awesome.

I would do something, but... I'm lazy. ._.