Yes, tis` me, mister "repentent but learning" himself! yeah, i nearly fell over when i saw that most of you people i knew back in the day are still on this site, anyway, i have for you now, a cartoon "TEST", i wanted some judgement on it, its a short little gangster thing i made, most of the symbols and stuff will be used in the official cartoon, but let me know what you think about it, i couldn't really find a good sound for the "bullet traveling" scene, oh well.

http://img230.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gangstatf3.swf

The animated moves are good but the drawings could use more effort
Those giant lines on the bullet scene is really bad
And I don't get it why it's called Gangsters as I didn't see any gangster on the animation :confused:

And I don't get it why it's called Gangsters as I didn't see any gangster on the animation :confused:
I think everyone in it is meant to be gansta. :p


It's alright but it has absolutely nothing to do with Worms.
D:

3 points:

1. why is this posted here?

2. the animation is good, the drawing is horrible.

3. lock this thread unless worms are included soon.

3 points:

1. why is this posted here?

2. the animation is good, the drawing is horrible.

3. lock this thread unless worms are included soon.
Yeah, the animation is good, it's just that the drawing is really bad..-_-'

The drawing isn't good.

The animation is.

Worms drawings would be super-swell though, considering that's what this fan-art forum is for.....

Got couple pic now, WORM pics

On the plus side, you have improved, but that's not really saying too much, if you don't mind me saying that ;)

Ditch those texture effects from those worms pictures. They're totally unnecessary and look horrible.

The orange colour as the shading is just.... wrong

In what format you saved that thing?

In what format you saved that thing?
The format is PNG.

But why is like that?
Was those bad effects made on purpose? :confused:

"Watch me LEAN FORWARD AGGRESSIVELY to DEMONSTRATE how COOL I am"

"I will stare GRIMLY and INTENSELY at the CURIOUSLY OBLONG EXPLOSION coming out of my hand"

Ugh.

I'm sorry, but those are INCREDIBLY bad. The shape is all wrong. They look like snakes.

Yeah as an animation student myself, I have to say that flash movie made me vomit. Have a nice day!

are you doing an inner bevel and a texture overlay on worms?! seriously, it's entirely unnecessary to stack effects like that. the bevel is useless anyway in terms of drawing. it's good for web-design and such like that. the texturing has to be appropriate. you don't put a rock texture on someone's shirt, for example.

the shape of the worms is absolutely horrendous and the only reason I don't want to vomit is because it's such an extreme leap forward compared to your old art....unfortunately, that's like saying getting a punch to the face is an improvement over getting a kick to the groin.

if you want to draw stuff in a public setting you need to first learn how to draw straight lines. after that you need to learn curved lines. only then can you put them together to form shapes.

seriously, you are absolutely horrible at art. go take an art class or something.

Yeah i'm just gonna give up on art, i'll stick with cartoons, i'd be a good cartoon writer, ALL over the web where iv'e posted my cartoons, iv'e gotten comments such as "Nice, you know the art kinda sucked, but nice ideas!" and "good plot and stuff but sucky art" yeah, but noone really WANTS a cartoon idea-list, but usually i just remember....Nobody i know in person can make cartoons but I CAN! HAHAHA!! PS: oh yeah people, move on about the kelster thing, that was when i was like 11 or 12, thats when i went for any chick that i saw.

Looks like Aku's gigantic finger exploded in that pic up there. :cool:

Yeah i'm just gonna give up on art, i'll stick with cartoons, i'd be a good cartoon writer, ALL over the web where iv'e posted my cartoons, iv'e gotten comments such as "Nice, you know the art kinda sucked, but nice ideas!" and "good plot and stuff but sucky art" yeah, but noone really WANTS a cartoon idea-list, but usually i just remember....Nobody i know in person can make cartoons but I CAN! HAHAHA!! PS: oh yeah people, move on about the kelster thing, that was when i was like 11 or 12, thats when i went for any chick that i saw.

But you can't make cartoons. You can make jokes. Cartoons are about the visual style mixed with jokes.

Yeah i'm just gonna give up on art, i'll stick with cartoons, i'd be a good cartoon writer, ALL over the web where iv'e posted my cartoons, iv'e gotten comments such as "Nice, you know the art kinda sucked, but nice ideas!" and "good plot and stuff but sucky art" yeah, but noone really WANTS a cartoon idea-list, but usually i just remember....Nobody i know in person can make cartoons but I CAN! HAHAHA!! PS: oh yeah people, move on about the kelster thing, that was when i was like 11 or 12, thats when i went for any chick that i saw.
it's still hilarious and i'm sure you're still the exact same way

by the way the poem in your signature is even worse than this art

i'd be a good cartoon writer.I'm sorry but a cartoon with so-called "gangstas" is a good idea? People who call themselves "gangsta" are the most pathetic people on earth and a cartoon of it would be even more pathetic. :-/

EDIT:
Oh, I'm sorry, I forgot something, "gangstas" aren't the most pathetic, Emos are. "Gangstas" come second.

I'm sorry but a cartoon with so-called "gangsta's" is a good idea? People who call themselves "gangsta" are the most pathetic people on earth and a cartoon of it would be even more pathetic. :-/

That depends... If the cartoon was only about gangstas dying in horrible pain, I would watch it...
But a cartoon is supposed tobe funny, and that's not funny at all...Nothing about gangstas can be funny, except for jokes moking them

Yikes, that animation is bad.

First, if you're going to do tweens, at least make some DECENT articulation. Mend any gaps, and make enough joints to have a variety of body poses.
Next, what is up with that bullet animation. Seriously. I can't even give advice it's so bad.

Also, nothing to do with Team17. At least pump your pre-teen egestions in pre-teen toilets such as Newgrounds rather than here.

ooh, burn

At least the colors are right.

At least the colors are right.

Except for the nice orange line running down Luke's back.

I somehow like the ducky lips. It's original.

I'm sorry but a cartoon with so-called "gangstas" is a good idea? People who call themselves "gangsta" are the most pathetic people on earth and a cartoon of it would be even more pathetic. :-/

EDIT:
Oh, I'm sorry, I forgot something, "gangstas" aren't the most pathetic, Emos are. "Gangstas" come second.


LIKE HOLY FLIP-OUT, geez you people its just art, and besides! that gangsta thing wasn't my "Big" idea, i just made that gansta thing, as a random shoot-out test, my BIG ideas are the ones where the dudes talk! :p

LIKE HOLY FLIP-OUT, geez you people its just art, and besides! that gangsta thing wasn't my "Big" idea, i just made that gansta thing, as a random shoot-out test, my BIG ideas are the ones where the dudes talk! :p

I'm gonna review u nad ur... stuff.

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There you go. That'll be FIVE thousand dollars.

I'm gonna review u nad ur... stuff.

UR GAY UR GAY UR GAY UR GAY UR GAY.

There you go. That'll be FIVE thousand dollars.
this calls for a high five

this calls for a high five

*high fives*

I'm gonna review u nad ur... stuff.

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There you go. That'll be FIVE thousand dollars.

Best review evar!:D

:p

LIKE HOLY FLIP-OUT, geez you people its just art, and besides! that gangsta thing wasn't my "Big" idea, i just made that gansta thing, as a random shoot-out test, my BIG ideas are the ones where the dudes talk! :p

And this is a fanart forum.;)

"just art"...

You make me vomit, you really do.

I cannot say anything has I have not watched.
Though from all the reviews it doesn't sound like I want to.

LIKE HOLY FLIP-OUT, geez you people its just art, and besides! that gangsta thing wasn't my "Big" idea, i just made that gansta thing, as a random shoot-out test, my BIG ideas are the ones where the dudes talk! :p

Just to make sure you understand whats being said to you, because I think you're having bit of trouble.

You cannot draw for the life of you. Nor can you animate for the life of you. You have no visible or evident talent. You are a failure.

Just to make sure you understand whats being said to you, because I think you're having bit of trouble.

You cannot draw for the life of you. Nor can you animate for the life of you. You have no visible or evident talent. You are a failure.

The truth hurts...

but you know what they say ... practice makes perfect


ALOT of practice

Just to make sure you understand whats being said to you, because I think you're having bit of trouble.

You cannot draw for the life of you. Nor can you animate for the life of you. You have no visible or evident talent. You are a failure.


Wow, you've changed significantly. That's okay though, because you still rulez.


@ luke
Those worms you drew look like cigars with buck teeth.

Wow, you've changed significantly. you've not actually read any of his old posts, have you? :p

I s'pose my memory just wasn't serving at the time. :p

i just realized that agent luke titled his own thread "welcome back agent luke"

that seems a bit presumptuous, really

i just realized that agent luke titled his own thread "welcome back agent luke"

that seems a bit presumptuous, really

I figured that he used a stupid title and then some mod changed...