A new forum tale is afoot. Written and drawn (with the use of sprites) entirely by me. Each issue will be posted throughout this thread and on the first post. Feel free to give me advice on the next 'stage' although I may well not listen to it. Requests are welcome, but again, may be ignored. ENJOY!

A Forumer's Tale

Issue 1 (http://tgwormy.deviantart.com/art/A-Forumer-s-Tale-Issue-1-75563584)

Issue 2 (http://tgwormy.deviantart.com/art/A-Forumer-s-Tale-75626840)

Issue 3 (http://tgwormy.deviantart.com/art/A-Forumer-s-Tale-Issue-3-75721362)

Issue 4 (http://tgwormy.deviantart.com/art/A-Forumer-s-Tale-Issue-4-75858178)

Issue 5 (http://tgwormy.deviantart.com/art/A-Forumer-s-Tale-Issue-5-76117160)

Issue 6 (http://tgwormy.deviantart.com/art/A-Forumer-s-Tale-Issue-6-76563949)

Ehh... I'll wait until the next comic before I start commenting...

Oh, also:
*requests to be a regular in this comic!*

*Gets brutaly murdered by the suspense*

Go on, comment on it. You know you want to...:p

LOL! thats quite good!:D

ohoh oh pick me! (request)

Request.

Of doom.
Even though I'm not really liking it so far.

Self-aware comics are so overdone. :p

Like those sonic comics where the author self-inserts.

Still no real comments so I'll wait for a few more before Issue 2.

Still no real comments so I'll wait for a few more before Issue 2.
Actually, I think everyone else is following my approach of 'wait for more before judging'. That's usually what happens around here.

Pick me! Pick me!
Yay!

Request...

Like those sonic comics where the author self-inserts.
SmackJeeves is No Man's Land.

SmackJeeves is No Man's Land.

And they are...?

Request.

Of doom.
Even though I'm not really liking it so far.

Well then you won't really be in it.

EDIT: Right, anywho, here is Issue 2 (http://tgwormy.deviantart.com/art/A-Forumer-s-Tale-75626840)

I like the mindless grin part.

Request.

And they are...?
www.smackjeeves.com

It's a comic hosting site. Or at least it used to be. Now it's a sonic fancomic dump.

www.smackjeeves.com

It's a comic hosting site. Or at least it used to be. Now it's a sonic fancomic dump.

Aha..Gotcha. MORE COMIC COMMENTS!

Well, you already know this, but they really need proper emotions!

Well, you already know this, but they really need proper emotions!

Yes well, I quite obviously know that and will add them in for Issue 3 :cool: Any more general comments?

Moments later EDIT: Issue 3 (http://tgwormy.deviantart.com/art/A-Forumer-s-Tale-Issue-3-75721362)

Nice idea. I'm liking the way the plot started. Possibly a little more work on drawing (Colours mostly, try not to use such garish ones =P) would go a long way

*Awaits next installment*

Well, I guess this one's good. Really!:D
Reminds me of GrimOswald's comics...

Request... should I?

Ahh, now I'm starting to like it.
Nicely done.


re-quest.

Ok, the true story is about to begin and I need a character to join the duo. Lots of people have requested and I may just choose one from that list. ORRR I may choose the next person to post a request (regardless of whether they have already requested or not).....but we shall see..

Ok, the true story is about to begin and I need a character to join the duo. Lots of people have requested and I may just choose one from that list. ORRR I may choose the next person to post a request (regardless of whether they have already requested or not).....but we shall see..

Well, you did improve it... you added backgrounds!:D

Me requests! I am the "next person to request!"

Pick me! I was the first one to request!

Back to that last issue, it was certainly better than the last two. But you're still missing decent final punchlines at the end of the issues.

Pick me! I was the first one to request!

Back to that last issue, it was certainly better than the last two. But you're still missing decent final punchlines at the end of the issues.

Well..you weren't but meh. I DON'T KNOW IF THAT IS THE WAY I AM GOING TO DO IT.... But...If it is the way I do this, robowurmz will be the third main character. There will be plenty of cameos and they shall be picked as and when..
I am going to write Issue 4 tonight so I guess all is left to say is....


...Watch this space...

Well..you weren't but meh.
I meant first to request overall. See post #2.

Pick me.
I'm the only female to have requested!
(I think...)

Um... where did their faces go in the last two frames? Or am I missing something?

And the "expressions" are still the default ones...

Um... where did their faces go in the last two frames? Or am I missing something?

And the "expressions" are still the default ones...

Oh dear....You are missing something....a piece of your brain. No, they are facing the mountains. I never said the expressions would not be default ones - just different to the original "mindless grin" faces.

Oh. How stupid of me.

Pick me.

I rule.

Pick me.
I'm the only female to have requested!
(I think...)
Pick us! It allows you to make relationship-based jokes!

Ok, Issue 4 is ready for viewing. The next issue will DEFINITELY contain the next two main characters...but who?! =D

Issue 4 (http://tgwormy.deviantart.com/art/A-Forumer-s-Tale-Issue-4-75858178)

Ooh, the yellow text guy said "poo."

It's got to be me now.

:P

hm......Some boring isuues : P.

Aha! This is getting somewhere at last. The comics have slowly been getting better with each episode. And what's this I see? A joke? Marvelous.

Oh, and thanks for the main role too.

Must... Not... Request...(strained)
Gah!!!!!! REQUESTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!

Aha! This is getting somewhere at last. The comics have slowly been getting better with each episode. And what's this I see? A joke? Marvelous.

Oh, and thanks for the main role too.

Well, it's better than the jokes getting slowly worse I suppose:p The joke was a bit of a guess but I hope it worked out ok. And FYI - you have the SECOND main role :p

And FYI - you have the SECOND main role :p
Sorry, I meant A main role rather than THE main role.

rofl poo. So random.

Ok, I'm in the middle of writing Issue 5 but need a sort of dumb character and am not sure who to cast the role to. Mr Bunsy would be an obvious choice but maybe is a bit middle of the road. Anyone wish to volunteer?

Oh I also need a ringleader..

I request to be in any, but preferably all, of those positions! :D

Meh... Issue 5 (http://tgwormy.deviantart.com/art/A-Forumer-s-Tale-Issue-5-76117160)

Umm... just so you know, you're better off using the wooly hat the worm has when he's selected the freeze weapon for Bunsy's hat.

Ok, I'm in the middle of writing Issue 5 but need a sort of dumb character and am not sure who to cast the role to. Mr Bunsy would be an obvious choice but maybe is a bit middle of the road. Anyone wish to volunteer?

Oh I also need a ringleader..

*raises hand*

*raises hand*

*Points upwards to where Issue 5 has been posted*

Mmm, this kinda reminds me of my own comic. Especially with Mr. Bunsy being an idiot. Funny how he gets those roles. >_>

This has some potential. Do keep it up.

Umm... just so you know, you're better off using the wooly hat the worm has when he's selected the freeze weapon for Bunsy's hat.

Hmm, didn't think of that. Thanks!

Is Zero's helmet ok? Quite hard to draw anything decent when the sprites are that small and I'm using Paint.

I think it's kinda small.
But hey, it's good anyway!

*Points upwards to where Issue 5 has been posted*

Mmm, this kinda reminds me of my own comic. Especially with Mr. Bunsy being an idiot. Funny how he gets those roles. >_>

This has some potential. Do keep it up.

*cough* whoops.

*cough* whoops.

......What?

......What?

I volunteered to be in issue 5 after issue five came out. I wasn't paying attention.

I volunteered to be in issue 5 after issue five came out. I wasn't paying attention.

Oh right. Issue 6 coming soon everyone.

Awesome. I love these comics. =D

One suggestion, the black text is quite difficult to see against the blue sky. Maybe if the text box was filled white it would be easier to read?

Awesome. I love these comics. =D

One suggestion, the black text is quite difficult to see against the blue sky. Maybe if the text box was filled white it would be easier to read?

[Oooh, twoapenny's back!]

I can't wait til issue six.

I don't think they are great. They are good, it could be more funny though. I'm not saying i hate it though.

I don't think there that good. There, ok, it could be more funny though.

Probably more me and Tg's sense of humour :rolleyes:

Oh and just so you know, it's 'they're' not 'there'. =)

I don't think they are great. They are good, it could be more funny though. I'm not saying i hate it though.

Meh, I don't really write them for a particularly 'wide' audience. As Twoapenny said, they're more for our kind of humour. Besides, most people seem to like them.

Oh and cunning post edit btw.

hm......Some boring isuues : P.

Err..what? Man, you are truly making yourself unliked around this forum.

Issue 6 (http://tgwormy.deviantart.com/art/A-Forumer-s-Tale-Issue-6-76563949) everybody. Not too sure about it but meh.

Not too sure about it but meh.
3 things wrong:
1: Zeor never changes expression.
2: The bubbles in the trail from a thought bubble should be circular and they should all be equal size.
3: Part of Zeor's helmet should DEFINITELY not be transparent half-way through!

2: The bubbles in the trail from a thought bubble should be circular and they should all be equal size.


They don't have to be... I think that is up to the artist. ;)

3 things wrong:
1: Zeor never changes expression.
2: The bubbles in the trail from a thought bubble should be circular and they should all be equal size.
3: Part of Zeor's helmet should DEFINITELY not be transparent half-way through!

1. Crap, forgot.
2. Nah, that's up to me.
3. Crap, forgot.

The only problem is that I"M NOT IN IT!

:mad::mad::mad:


:p

They don't have to be... I think that is up to the artist. ;)
NO! Art has rules enforced by secret art ninjas! :mad: :p

NO! Art has rules enforced by secret art ninjas! :mad:

DAMNIT. Stupid ninjas. ISSUE 6 WAS CRAP BUT I'M ALLOWED TO COCK UP ONCE :mad::mad::mad: Just kidding, I am, of course, a total tosspot and should loose the right to ever draw again. MEH, Issue 7 out soon :D

I did not think Issue 6 was that bad actually. >_> Better than the first three in any case. :p