Hi all, just on iScribble.net and I drew this little creation;

It seems to work, having manga/anime/whatever you want to call it eyes on a worm, providing they are large enough. This was just a doodle, but hey! Maybe this is my niche!

Honestly? Way too scribbly to see the style. I'd really suggest that you expand the picture, and use an alternative paint program to outline the picture in much smoother, thicker lines. Then come back to us.
Also, the sideways look makes it hard to judge.

It looks like a jewish worm that has been shot through the head with a shotgun. I'm not sure if that's what it's supposed to be though. The shape of the worm is good but the rest is a mess.

It may be your niche, but I don't know about everybody else...
It looks like a jewish worm that has been shot through the head with a shotgun.
Just summed up my words right there.

I'd like to do one myself, but everyone's comments just discouraged me.:(

Hi all, just on iScribble.net and I drew this little creation;

It seems to work, having manga/anime/whatever you want to call it eyes on a worm, providing they are large enough. This was just a doodle, but hey! Maybe this is my niche!

Meh... ok but don't just scribble it, whats what causes bad ratings, but I think its ok. 4/10

The tail looks too high up, I think.

It's a side view of the worm, in case no one can see it.

Try it from a more regular 3/4 perspective so you can see both eyes, and you know, neater, less sketchy.

Also, since the eye isn't colored, it's hard to tell it's an anime eye unless you actually know before-hand.

Who wants to see the rest (http://www.iscribble.net/gallery/drawing29478-Doodles.html) of the picture? Although unfortunately you erased him :mad:

I'd like to do one myself, but everyone's comments just discouraged me.:(

Meh. Nevermind what I've just said.

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:(

UGHMM......

I thought anime eyez were suppozed to be liek:

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/9599/animeeyeslv3.png

UGHMM......

I thought anime eyez were suppozed to be liek:

I'm pretty sure there is no epitome of anime eyes. I mean it isn't like all anime artists have a little folder of pre-made eyes that law forces them to use. Different artists do them in different ways. The only real feature most all of them have in common is their large size.

UGHMM......

I thought anime eyez were suppozed to be liek:

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/9599/animeeyeslv3.pngGiven that the eyes that TeddyWorm drew are significantly better, I should hope not.

This calls for...
http://forum.team17.co.uk/attachment.php?attachmentid=25540

This calls for...
He already got the big colourful eyes, the big head, and the 'manga hair'. He even made it cyan too!

UGHMM......

I thought anime eyez were suppozed to be liek:

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/9599/animeeyeslv3.png

Not always. Look at the ones in Death Note. They're not obscurely large. Or shiny.

Or the victim of an unfortunate marbles attack.

You forgot the blue hair and the huge boots!

Can worms wear boots?

Can worms wear boots?

Well, they could certainly wear one.

Well, they could certainly wear one.I now expect a reference to that bit in Super Mario Bros 3 where Mario gets to jump around in a giant boot in the FAotM compo.

EDIT: Ahahaha, amusingly sloppy word structure.

I now expect a reference in the FAotM compo to that bit in Super Mario Bros 3 where Mario gets to jump around in a giant boot.

UGHMM......

I thought anime eyez were suppozed to be liek:

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/9599/animeeyeslv3.png

It looks like it's asking for something precious..:p

This calls for...
http://forum.team17.co.uk/attachment.php?attachmentid=25540

What the hell-

I now expect a reference in the FAotM compo to that bit in Super Mario Bros 3 where Mario gets to jump around in a giant boot.
Now you've done it. :mad:

Oh no... I'm reminded of my early years as a fanartist.

THE PAIN

The rest of this thread should safely be ignored, because...
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/1470/newwormstyle1.png

TADAAH! I'd been doodling, and I thought that I might try and find a style I really liked. I like this.
Yes, I know the perils of lined paper, but I was idly doodling in a jotter.

Those lower eye rings look very weird. :S

He looks sleep deprived.
:)

Hehe, he does a little. I should probably make the lower boundaries for the eyes shallower.

I disagree with grimoswald here.

It needs refining, but i don't see any problems with how you did the eyes. They're pretty good.

Draw more on the same style and see if it suits enough situations to be used as a permanent one.

I disagree with grimoswald here.

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I disagree with grimoswald here.

It needs refining, but i don't see any problems with how you did the eyes. They're pretty good. it's probably just that the worm's left eye has a much skinnier line on the bottom than his right eye while it should be the other way around.

it's a really minor issue but it could cause some to find that it looks odd.

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D:<
it's probably just that the worm's left eye has a much skinnier line on the bottom than his right eye while it should be the other way around.

it's a really minor issue but it could cause some to find that it looks odd.
Well, due to the sketchyness of the picture, i'd say we can't nitpick it too much.

Still, it's just a good idea. I had to drop the first eye design i did for my style cause it simply wasn't flexible enough to fit most of the situations the worms would be drawn in. So he has to do more testing. It can be a fairly good idea, but it's just an idea so far.

Well, due to the sketchyness of the picture, i'd say we can't nitpick it too much.right, I was just listing what could have been the reason for his complaint.