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DarkWorm95
6 Oct 2007, 20:31
OK, I'm a new guy here and I have decided to start with a comic.
http://img02.picoodle.com/img/img02/9/10/6/f_untitledm_a204d58.jpg (http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?img=/9/10/6/f_untitledm_a204d58.jpg&srv=img02)
farazparsa
6 Oct 2007, 21:06
Better first comic than most newbies.
1. JPEG is murder.
2. MSPaint is decent, but not the best. Try The GIMP or Macromedia Flash.
3. Don't use gender/sexuality jokes.
4. Worms are light peach, not pink.
5. Doesn't the interviewer have a hand?
6. Somebody else will tell you the rest of the faults.
Welcome to the forums. ;)
Also, why in the hell does the gun change from a handgun to a semi-automatic-type gun?
DarkWorm95
6 Oct 2007, 21:48
Better first comic than most newbies.
1. JPEG is murder.
2. MSPaint is decent, but not the best. Try The GIMP or Macromedia Flash.
3. Don't use gender/sexuality jokes.
4. Worms are light peach, not pink.
5. Doesn't the interviewer have a hand?
6. Somebody else will tell you the rest of the faults.
Welcome to the forums. ;)
1.You're recomending BMP?
2.I will.
3.OK.
4.They are peach on my comic(or at least they are on my display).
5. He does, he's a human.
6.There are more faults?
Also, why in the hell does the gun change from a handgun to a semi-automatic-type gun?
If you have ever played an FPS this animation should answer you-
http://img32.picoodle.com/img/img32/9/10/6/f_gunfirem_8cd22cb.gif (http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?img=/9/10/6/f_gunfirem_8cd22cb.gif&srv=img32)
And at last- sorry about my bad english, I'm from Croatia.
3. Don't use gender/sexuality jokes.
What? Forum News is only 3 episodes in and I've already made 2 sexist jokes.
Your comic is alright. Just keep practising and you're bound to improve. A very good point about your comic is that it's very clear what's happening. That's a definite must for comics.
Paul.Power
6 Oct 2007, 21:53
3. Don't use gender/sexuality jokes.
Why not, exactly? Three of the worms on my current Worms Armageddon team are female. On of my Worms 4 Mayhem worms had a female name while having a moustache. There is scope for interesting comedy there without having to worry about sexism or indeed sex.
DarkWorm95
6 Oct 2007, 21:56
What? Forum News is only 3 episodes in and I've already made 2 sexist jokes.
Your comic is alright. Just keep practising and you're bound to improve. A very good point about your comic is that it's very clear what's happening. That's a definite must for comics.
TNX. I'm planning to make more episodes, but tomorrow.
I can see why the top of the gun would slide backwards, but why does the firing nozzle change shape completely?
Also, don't mind Farazparsa, you can use sexist jokes here, just as long as they're funny.
1.You're recomending BMP?
Save it as PNG, it's the best.
Better first comic than most newbies.
1. JPEG is murder.
2. MSPaint is decent, but not the best. Try The GIMP or Macromedia Flash.
3. Don't use gender/sexuality jokes.
4. Worms are light peach, not pink.
5. Doesn't the interviewer have a hand?
6. Somebody else will tell you the rest of the faults.
Welcome to the forums. ;)
AHEM.
:mad:
DarkWorm95
8 Oct 2007, 13:19
Now this one hasn't got any sex jokes or violence, made with Paint.NET
and worms are peach. Oh, please don't mind my bad english, I'm from Croatia.
http://img33.picoodle.com/img/img33/9/10/8/f_wofrmcomicm_4a38d57.png (http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?img=/9/10/8/f_wofrmcomicm_4a38d57.png&srv=img33)
Shadowmoon
27 Nov 2007, 18:46
A very funny comic strip. keep up the good work.
Kelster23
27 Nov 2007, 18:52
Ahh, Wikipedia, the Ultimate Spoiler for Everything.
Nice comics by the way, I like the joke in the first one. :D
1.You're recomending BMP?
, I'm from Croatia.
i think he should use PNG
p.s
you kicked englands ass!
HuntaKilla
28 Nov 2007, 04:37
3. Don't use gender/sexuality jokes.
AHEM.
:mad:
Lol I was just about to use you as an example :p
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