So, me and gardy decided to revive what should have been a great comic.

But it never did make it.

So, we have already made whats the base of the plot. The characters are also really greatly developed. If anyone asks, i will be using my older sigworm, Satoshi, for one of the main char. Or at least my char.

Heres whats in it:

10 "levels", but 12 if you count the some "extra ones."

Me, and Gardy (uber main chars) Oft, Metal alex and Psyke (main chars) And a unknown villian and lots of bosses. (well duh, bosses.)

Me and gardy will be doing the Comic on a shift. Him, and me and him and me ETC.

NO REQUESTS TO BE IN IT, WE ALREADY DECIDED EVERYTHING
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa127/ElemenTT_/Newcomicteaser.png

Triple post OH MY GOD.

But yeah, looks nice.
You and Gardy would be the last partnership I'd have dreamt of, though. :p
Then again, he is a rather good drawer.

Triple post OH MY GOD.

That's a joke, right?

Triple post OH MY GOD.

The avatar may be the same... but the soul is different...

I'm talking in this odd way, because I didn't actually think I was going to be a main guy :O

*sits and waits for the first part*

Sounds good, I'm waiting for the first part too. :p

Also, can I be a secondary character ? Or at least a cameo ? :p

That's a joke, right?

Oh, what the hell, I didn't see the username. :p

Hehe

Lots of bosses? Which boss is the boss then? :p

Oh, what the hell, I didn't see the username. :p

Even if it were the same username, if they're having a conversation with themselves something should twig.

Now, with DoomWorm, I wouldn't be surprised if he was talking to himself. ;)

Also, we didn't ärse to put in seniors, it's somewhat overused when looking at someone like Paul.
Hehe, fair enough ;).

The boss of the boss. yeah, the boss of the boss is..... you'll see.

I said gardy had to make the first comic, and it should be done by now as he said he was making it, but hes been offline from msn for some time know and i don't know the process yet.

OOH OOH PICK ME PICK ME!! :p

I have an idea, I'll tell you on MSN

I complete forgot I'm in it!
Remember my new sigworm! (see sig down below)

How exiting, especialy as this was heading to be a good comic.

Weve already decided everything on the looks of the worms, which is about tech-like costumes that sort of look like their current sigworms appearance.

Right, here's #1.

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/6958/cc1ip4.png

Errors: I forgot a few details oft had, but oh well. Also, I forgot something on the boss too, but, you know.
Yes, it's short, live with it. Now it's DoomWorm's turn to make a comic.

Also its kinda short. BUT THAT DOESNT MATTEUR

Yes... it is short.

Not too bad drawings though.

*requests some sort of imaginitive cameo*

That's my old sigworm but otherwise COOL!

I love the style used and the "VR LOL"

It's a bit lightweight, but then I guess it's a rare intro comic that isn't.

The art's perfectly decent. VR LOL made me smile.

part 2 is already released. look. but it shucks. imma gonna do it in tablet and flash. srsly.
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/3544/91695807rw2.png

Panel 2 is the awesomeness. Next comic is when they have their BATTULSTUFF. Stay tuned.

Lol, materialize.

I had to read that twice to understand...


...


Ok, I was reading it backwards the first time.

This isn't read as a manga. It's read as a normal american or i-dunno-which-language comic. (danish comics is also read as american comics)

also, really, isnt ther <ANYONE> online?

Consider me entertained.

Consider me entertained.

Consider me very happy.

Part 3, this time longer.
http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/2167/cciioq6.png

Thoroughly excellent. Love the costume designs, fancy effects with lovely curving lines, and overall stylishness of it.

...Who's the white guy again? :p

That would be DoomWorm's OLD sigworm.

The art's good, but I still have to critique the writing a little: "UPPERCUTT'D'D'D", "DDDDDDDDDD:", and the use of "LVL" where there is plenty of room to write "LEVEL" bring the level of the strip down.

DoomWorm influenced me. :p
I'll try, but not sure about him.

It's quite okay with me though. BUt saying LVL gives it the influence of being more like a game. Y'know one of these online games :U

Not sure I see the use of the scribbly goggles.

Surely that would just get in the way.

Not sure I see the use of the scribbly goggles.

Surely that would just get in the way.

You mean on Psyke? That's light reflection, my friend.

I think he means Metal Alex, Doom.

Ohhh.... nevermind, then.

THE FOURTH IS READY FOR LAUNCH.
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/724/4thcomic2ey7.png
EDIT: fixed some things, and panel order arrows. EDIT2: AARRRgggh i hate imageshack.

Umm...

Good!

Err...

Request?

Umm...

Good!

Err...

Request?

First post.

Ah ha! These are great! I am eagerly awaiting the next part! :)

Then i'm sorry to say that gardy has gone to bed now. Were expecting the comic to be released tommorow.

Yay! I said something! in the comic I mean

All is cool so far. lets just see how the plot does in the long run.

Yay! I said something! in the comic I mean

All is cool so far. lets just see how the plot does in the long run.

I'm very sure it will get better.

Ohhh.... nevermind, then.

THE FOURTH IS READY FOR LAUNCH.
IMAGE
EDIT: fixed some things, and panel order arrows. EDIT2: AARRRgggh i hate imageshack.
If you need to use arrows to show the panel order, you're doing it wrong.
Unless you know how to do an artsy layout that isn't confusing, stick with the traditional panel grid, please.

I really don't know what happened in that comic, either.

I am now very sad. VERY sad. Everyone says that they don't know what happens in my comics. I hate myself.

OH NOW I KNOW WHY YOU DONT UNDERSTAND IT SO. Let me just explain. I get all, "Level 2 is supposed to be here..." and psyke goes "LOL WERE ALREDY THAR." It's just the very VERY early punctuation mark, punctuation mark, punctuation mark.

now this is unnessecarily just made for people who dont know what calamity means.

ca·lam·i·t
n. pl. ca·lam·i·ties
1. An event that brings terrible loss, lasting distress, or severe affliction; a disaster: A hurricane would be a calamity for this low-lying coastal region.
2. Dire distress resulting from loss or tragedy.

i don't know, im just bored.

i don't know, im just bored.
Then make another comic!
=)


Preferably one with me in it.

What's supposed to be going on in this comic?

I'm afraid I can't help but agree with Psyke:

LOL WUT

The art's good, but I still have to critique the writing a littleThat was kind of what I meant, but I was drugged on lack of sleep at the time. It was too... easy. Just *BAMPF* LEVEL 1 OVER: COOL SUITS GET. You didn't even reveal who the bad guy really was. :p

And yes, that latest one is a complete mess to read. Not even the arrows really helped.

That was kind of what I meant, but I was drugged on lack of sleep at the time. It was too... easy. Just *BAMPF* LEVEL 1 OVER: COOL SUITS GET. You didn't even reveal who the bad guy really was. :p

And yes, that latest one is a complete mess to read. Not even the arrows really helped.

Lol @ mess. Don't hurt me anymoar. :P

The bad guy... is to be revealed in later comics.

So, to end it all, stop commenting about bad order of panels, and not knowing what's happening. I know it so get over it. When gardy has made the next one, i will do mine properly.

okeh dokeh! where's Gardy Loooo?

Looking good so far

Thanks mannies. BTW, i have some quite bad news, Gardy, will not be able to do the comic until friday. But be ready to feast your eyes, cause this one will probably be hand drawn.

*BAMPF* LEVEL 1 OVER: COOL SUITS GETOh is that what was going on?

after taking the time to post this i suddenly felt the urge to request so....
yeah i will give you info now and a pic later i don't have the stuff i need at my moms (scanner [or photoshop]) so i will send a picture VERY soon i am going to mow my dads lawn day after tommarow so expect it a little after then but

ok he has scrappy hair and wears an eyepeice that is black... it looks like the trackers from DBZ that radits and the other sains wore but black no eye seeing it is because his eye was shot out he is such a retard that he bought a thousand dollar tracker instead of an eyepeice... sorry that i don't have the picture

after taking the time to post this i suddenly felt the urge to request so....
yeah i will give you info now and a pic later i don't have the stuff i need at my moms (scanner [or photoshop]) so i will send a picture VERY soon i am going to mow my dads lawn day after tommarow so expect it a little after then but

ok he has scrappy hair and wears an eyepeice that is black... it looks like the trackers from DBZ that radits and the other sains wore but black no eye seeing it is because his eye was shot out he is such a retard that he bought a thousand dollar tracker instead of an eyepeice... sorry that i don't have the picture
What part of "NO REQUESTS TO BE IN IT, WE ALREADY DECIDED EVERYTHING" don't people understand?

What part of "NO REQUESTS TO BE IN IT, WE ALREADY DECIDED EVERYTHING" don't people understand?

All them words wid more than 4 letters :(

I think people around here just skim trough the text, spot the word "request" and post a reply requesting regardless of what context the word "request" was used in.

All them words wid more than 4 letters :(

Hmm...

NO ######## TO BE IN IT, WE ####### ####### ##########

Yes, I can see how that might cause confusion.

I think people around here just skim trough the text, spot the word "request" and post a reply requesting regardless of what context the word "request" was used in.

It was actually just too close to the picture for me to notice it :p

I think people around here just skim trough the text, spot the word "request" and post a reply requesting regardless of what context the word "request" was used in.

Follow the crowd.

This IS still going.

Only rather slowly. :p

Part 5.
And you thought this was dead.
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/2875/cc5zf2.png
I probably forgot a few details, but IT DUSN'T MATTUR

I first noticed this as a result of the recent post.

It looks very interesting. Keep up the good work. :)

Plainplane :)

PG-13 TREE OWNAGE!!!

Ah, brilliant!
(oh, and I haven't done so already, I request!)

I like how Psyke speaks almost exclusively in brainless 4chan regurgitations.

Part 5.
And you thought this was dead.
I probably forgot a few details, but IT DUSN'T MATTUR

thats cool GL, well done :)

No fair, we don't get to see Psyke getting owned. :p

PG-13 TREE OWNAGE!!!

Ah, brilliant!
(oh, and I haven't done so already, I request!)http://forum.team17.co.uk/showpost.php?p=584021&postcount=40

You haven't done some reading already, no.

I everythings been decided, can you say who else of the team 17 forum is going to make an appearence?

Tal, he's not going to reveal who's going to be in this comic before they are in the comic, as that would be stupid.

And why do you care, anyway? You're not going to be in it. He decided everything before you were even a member.

Tal, he's not going to reveal who's going to be in this comic before they are in the comic, as that would be stupid.

And why do you care, anyway? You're not going to be in it. He decided everything before you were even a member.

You gota point about he's not going to reveal it, but what gave you the idea i would be in Gardy Looo's comic?
My arch enemy :p (nah just kiddin :))

but what gave you the idea i would be in Gardy Looo's comic?

Eh. Just thought that that would be the only reason someone would ask. ("Am I going to be in this? I'LL FIND OUT!") :p
I guess I forgot about "curiosity".

heh sweet! Can I have the tree?

I wonder if the tree is some oak or somethin..

THE GOOGLES! THEY DO NOTHING!

at least mines ran away.

http://images.wikia.com/uncyclopedia/images/d/d5/Magic_gathering-goggles.jpg