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>DoomWorm<
7 Jun 2007, 17:04
So, me and gardy decided to revive what should have been a great comic.

But it never did make it.

So, we have already made whats the base of the plot. The characters are also really greatly developed. If anyone asks, i will be using my older sigworm, Satoshi, for one of the main char. Or at least my char.

Heres whats in it:

10 "levels", but 12 if you count the some "extra ones."

Me, and Gardy (uber main chars) Oft, Metal alex and Psyke (main chars) And a unknown villian and lots of bosses. (well duh, bosses.)

Me and gardy will be doing the Comic on a shift. Him, and me and him and me ETC.

NO REQUESTS TO BE IN IT, WE ALREADY DECIDED EVERYTHING
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa127/ElemenTT_/Newcomicteaser.png

WormGod
7 Jun 2007, 18:00
Triple post OH MY GOD.

But yeah, looks nice.
You and Gardy would be the last partnership I'd have dreamt of, though. :p
Then again, he is a rather good drawer.

Alien King
7 Jun 2007, 18:01
Triple post OH MY GOD.

That's a joke, right?

Metal Alex
7 Jun 2007, 18:04
Triple post OH MY GOD.

The avatar may be the same... but the soul is different...

I'm talking in this odd way, because I didn't actually think I was going to be a main guy :O

*sits and waits for the first part*

_Kilburn
7 Jun 2007, 18:05
Sounds good, I'm waiting for the first part too. :p

Also, can I be a secondary character ? Or at least a cameo ? :p

WormGod
7 Jun 2007, 18:08
That's a joke, right?

Oh, what the hell, I didn't see the username. :p

MrBunsy
7 Jun 2007, 18:08
Hehe

Lots of bosses? Which boss is the boss then? :p

pilot62
7 Jun 2007, 18:36
Oh, what the hell, I didn't see the username. :p

Even if it were the same username, if they're having a conversation with themselves something should twig.

Melon
7 Jun 2007, 18:37
Now, with DoomWorm, I wouldn't be surprised if he was talking to himself. ;)

Paul.Power
7 Jun 2007, 18:40
Also, we didn't ärse to put in seniors, it's somewhat overused when looking at someone like Paul.
Hehe, fair enough ;).

>DoomWorm<
7 Jun 2007, 18:59
The boss of the boss. yeah, the boss of the boss is..... you'll see.

I said gardy had to make the first comic, and it should be done by now as he said he was making it, but hes been offline from msn for some time know and i don't know the process yet.

SuperBlob
7 Jun 2007, 19:02
OOH OOH PICK ME PICK ME!! :p

I have an idea, I'll tell you on MSN

Oft99
7 Jun 2007, 19:05
I complete forgot I'm in it!
Remember my new sigworm! (see sig down below)

How exiting, especialy as this was heading to be a good comic.

>DoomWorm<
7 Jun 2007, 19:37
Weve already decided everything on the looks of the worms, which is about tech-like costumes that sort of look like their current sigworms appearance.

Gardy Looo
7 Jun 2007, 19:52
Right, here's #1.

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/6958/cc1ip4.png

Errors: I forgot a few details oft had, but oh well. Also, I forgot something on the boss too, but, you know.
Yes, it's short, live with it. Now it's DoomWorm's turn to make a comic.

>DoomWorm<
7 Jun 2007, 19:59
Also its kinda short. BUT THAT DOESNT MATTEUR

Alien King
7 Jun 2007, 20:01
Yes... it is short.

Not too bad drawings though.

*requests some sort of imaginitive cameo*

Oft99
7 Jun 2007, 21:07
That's my old sigworm but otherwise COOL!

I love the style used and the "VR LOL"

Paul.Power
7 Jun 2007, 21:21
It's a bit lightweight, but then I guess it's a rare intro comic that isn't.

The art's perfectly decent. VR LOL made me smile.

>DoomWorm<
7 Jun 2007, 21:31
part 2 is already released. look. but it shucks. imma gonna do it in tablet and flash. srsly.
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/3544/91695807rw2.png

Gardy Looo
7 Jun 2007, 21:40
Panel 2 is the awesomeness. Next comic is when they have their BATTULSTUFF. Stay tuned.

>DoomWorm<
7 Jun 2007, 21:50
Lol, materialize.

Alien King
7 Jun 2007, 22:13
I had to read that twice to understand...


...


Ok, I was reading it backwards the first time.

>DoomWorm<
8 Jun 2007, 11:32
This isn't read as a manga. It's read as a normal american or i-dunno-which-language comic. (danish comics is also read as american comics)

also, really, isnt ther <ANYONE> online?

Zero72
8 Jun 2007, 14:10
Consider me entertained.

>DoomWorm<
8 Jun 2007, 14:13
Consider me entertained.

Consider me very happy.

Gardy Looo
8 Jun 2007, 14:33
Part 3, this time longer.
http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/2167/cciioq6.png

Zero72
8 Jun 2007, 14:36
Thoroughly excellent. Love the costume designs, fancy effects with lovely curving lines, and overall stylishness of it.

...Who's the white guy again? :p

Gardy Looo
8 Jun 2007, 14:45
That would be DoomWorm's OLD sigworm.

Paul.Power
8 Jun 2007, 15:25
The art's good, but I still have to critique the writing a little: "UPPERCUTT'D'D'D", "DDDDDDDDDD:", and the use of "LVL" where there is plenty of room to write "LEVEL" bring the level of the strip down.

Gardy Looo
8 Jun 2007, 16:30
DoomWorm influenced me. :p
I'll try, but not sure about him.

>DoomWorm<
8 Jun 2007, 16:48
It's quite okay with me though. BUt saying LVL gives it the influence of being more like a game. Y'know one of these online games :U

Pigbuster
8 Jun 2007, 17:13
Not sure I see the use of the scribbly goggles.

Surely that would just get in the way.

>DoomWorm<
8 Jun 2007, 17:37
Not sure I see the use of the scribbly goggles.

Surely that would just get in the way.

You mean on Psyke? That's light reflection, my friend.

Gardy Looo
8 Jun 2007, 17:45
I think he means Metal Alex, Doom.

>DoomWorm<
8 Jun 2007, 17:47
Ohhh.... nevermind, then.

THE FOURTH IS READY FOR LAUNCH.
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/724/4thcomic2ey7.png
EDIT: fixed some things, and panel order arrows. EDIT2: AARRRgggh i hate imageshack.

Plasma
8 Jun 2007, 20:33
Umm...

Good!

Err...

Request?

>DoomWorm<
8 Jun 2007, 20:51
Umm...

Good!

Err...

Request?

First post.

Kelster23
8 Jun 2007, 21:04
Ah ha! These are great! I am eagerly awaiting the next part! :)

>DoomWorm<
8 Jun 2007, 21:07
Then i'm sorry to say that gardy has gone to bed now. Were expecting the comic to be released tommorow.

Oft99
8 Jun 2007, 21:45
Yay! I said something! in the comic I mean

All is cool so far. lets just see how the plot does in the long run.

>DoomWorm<
8 Jun 2007, 22:02
Yay! I said something! in the comic I mean

All is cool so far. lets just see how the plot does in the long run.

I'm very sure it will get better.

Pigbuster
8 Jun 2007, 22:10
Ohhh.... nevermind, then.

THE FOURTH IS READY FOR LAUNCH.
IMAGE
EDIT: fixed some things, and panel order arrows. EDIT2: AARRRgggh i hate imageshack.
If you need to use arrows to show the panel order, you're doing it wrong.
Unless you know how to do an artsy layout that isn't confusing, stick with the traditional panel grid, please.

I really don't know what happened in that comic, either.

>DoomWorm<
8 Jun 2007, 22:25
I am now very sad. VERY sad. Everyone says that they don't know what happens in my comics. I hate myself.

OH NOW I KNOW WHY YOU DONT UNDERSTAND IT SO. Let me just explain. I get all, "Level 2 is supposed to be here..." and psyke goes "LOL WERE ALREDY THAR." It's just the very VERY early punctuation mark, punctuation mark, punctuation mark.

now this is unnessecarily just made for people who dont know what calamity means.

ca·lam·i·t
n. pl. ca·lam·i·ties
1. An event that brings terrible loss, lasting distress, or severe affliction; a disaster: A hurricane would be a calamity for this low-lying coastal region.
2. Dire distress resulting from loss or tragedy.

i don't know, im just bored.

Plasma
8 Jun 2007, 22:36
i don't know, im just bored.
Then make another comic!
=)


Preferably one with me in it.

Star Worms
8 Jun 2007, 23:42
What's supposed to be going on in this comic?

Paul.Power
9 Jun 2007, 09:11
I'm afraid I can't help but agree with Psyke:

LOL WUT

Zero72
9 Jun 2007, 09:11
The art's good, but I still have to critique the writing a littleThat was kind of what I meant, but I was drugged on lack of sleep at the time. It was too... easy. Just *BAMPF* LEVEL 1 OVER: COOL SUITS GET. You didn't even reveal who the bad guy really was. :p

And yes, that latest one is a complete mess to read. Not even the arrows really helped.

>DoomWorm<
9 Jun 2007, 10:22
That was kind of what I meant, but I was drugged on lack of sleep at the time. It was too... easy. Just *BAMPF* LEVEL 1 OVER: COOL SUITS GET. You didn't even reveal who the bad guy really was. :p

And yes, that latest one is a complete mess to read. Not even the arrows really helped.

Lol @ mess. Don't hurt me anymoar. :P

The bad guy... is to be revealed in later comics.

So, to end it all, stop commenting about bad order of panels, and not knowing what's happening. I know it so get over it. When gardy has made the next one, i will do mine properly.

yauhui
11 Jun 2007, 04:18
okeh dokeh! where's Gardy Loooo?

psyke o_0
12 Jun 2007, 12:35
Looking good so far

>DoomWorm<
12 Jun 2007, 12:44
Thanks mannies. BTW, i have some quite bad news, Gardy, will not be able to do the comic until friday. But be ready to feast your eyes, cause this one will probably be hand drawn.

Paul.Power
12 Jun 2007, 13:27
*BAMPF* LEVEL 1 OVER: COOL SUITS GETOh is that what was going on?

JTHM_Z?
14 Jun 2007, 08:07
after taking the time to post this i suddenly felt the urge to request so....
yeah i will give you info now and a pic later i don't have the stuff i need at my moms (scanner [or photoshop]) so i will send a picture VERY soon i am going to mow my dads lawn day after tommarow so expect it a little after then but

ok he has scrappy hair and wears an eyepeice that is black... it looks like the trackers from DBZ that radits and the other sains wore but black no eye seeing it is because his eye was shot out he is such a retard that he bought a thousand dollar tracker instead of an eyepeice... sorry that i don't have the picture

Paul.Power
14 Jun 2007, 08:37
after taking the time to post this i suddenly felt the urge to request so....
yeah i will give you info now and a pic later i don't have the stuff i need at my moms (scanner [or photoshop]) so i will send a picture VERY soon i am going to mow my dads lawn day after tommarow so expect it a little after then but

ok he has scrappy hair and wears an eyepeice that is black... it looks like the trackers from DBZ that radits and the other sains wore but black no eye seeing it is because his eye was shot out he is such a retard that he bought a thousand dollar tracker instead of an eyepeice... sorry that i don't have the picture
What part of "NO REQUESTS TO BE IN IT, WE ALREADY DECIDED EVERYTHING" don't people understand?

MrBunsy
14 Jun 2007, 09:48
What part of "NO REQUESTS TO BE IN IT, WE ALREADY DECIDED EVERYTHING" don't people understand?

All them words wid more than 4 letters :(

MtlAngelus
14 Jun 2007, 09:59
I think people around here just skim trough the text, spot the word "request" and post a reply requesting regardless of what context the word "request" was used in.

Paul.Power
14 Jun 2007, 10:16
All them words wid more than 4 letters :(

Hmm...

NO ######## TO BE IN IT, WE ####### ####### ##########

Yes, I can see how that might cause confusion.

SuperBlob
14 Jun 2007, 13:47
I think people around here just skim trough the text, spot the word "request" and post a reply requesting regardless of what context the word "request" was used in.

It was actually just too close to the picture for me to notice it :p

Alien King
14 Jun 2007, 21:20
I think people around here just skim trough the text, spot the word "request" and post a reply requesting regardless of what context the word "request" was used in.

Follow the crowd.

Gardy Looo
17 Jun 2007, 14:58
This IS still going.

Only rather slowly. :p

Gardy Looo
10 Aug 2007, 18:41
Part 5.
And you thought this was dead.
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/2875/cc5zf2.png
I probably forgot a few details, but IT DUSN'T MATTUR

Plainplane
10 Aug 2007, 18:55
I first noticed this as a result of the recent post.

It looks very interesting. Keep up the good work. :)

Plainplane :)

Plasma
10 Aug 2007, 20:37
PG-13 TREE OWNAGE!!!

Ah, brilliant!
(oh, and I haven't done so already, I request!)

Zero72
11 Aug 2007, 11:40
I like how Psyke speaks almost exclusively in brainless 4chan regurgitations.

tal05
11 Aug 2007, 14:01
Part 5.
And you thought this was dead.
I probably forgot a few details, but IT DUSN'T MATTUR

thats cool GL, well done :)

SupSuper
11 Aug 2007, 16:51
No fair, we don't get to see Psyke getting owned. :p

PG-13 TREE OWNAGE!!!

Ah, brilliant!
(oh, and I haven't done so already, I request!)http://forum.team17.co.uk/showpost.php?p=584021&postcount=40

You haven't done some reading already, no.

tal05
11 Aug 2007, 17:22
I everythings been decided, can you say who else of the team 17 forum is going to make an appearence?

Pigbuster
11 Aug 2007, 20:11
Tal, he's not going to reveal who's going to be in this comic before they are in the comic, as that would be stupid.

And why do you care, anyway? You're not going to be in it. He decided everything before you were even a member.

tal05
11 Aug 2007, 20:27
Tal, he's not going to reveal who's going to be in this comic before they are in the comic, as that would be stupid.

And why do you care, anyway? You're not going to be in it. He decided everything before you were even a member.

You gota point about he's not going to reveal it, but what gave you the idea i would be in Gardy Looo's comic?
My arch enemy :p (nah just kiddin :))

Pigbuster
11 Aug 2007, 21:28
but what gave you the idea i would be in Gardy Looo's comic?

Eh. Just thought that that would be the only reason someone would ask. ("Am I going to be in this? I'LL FIND OUT!") :p
I guess I forgot about "curiosity".

Cisken1
13 Aug 2007, 21:21
heh sweet! Can I have the tree?

yauhui
14 Aug 2007, 01:23
I wonder if the tree is some oak or somethin..

Metal Alex
20 Aug 2007, 11:33
THE GOOGLES! THEY DO NOTHING!

at least mines ran away.

Pigbuster
20 Aug 2007, 23:07
http://images.wikia.com/uncyclopedia/images/d/d5/Magic_gathering-goggles.jpg