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Kelster23
11 Mar 2007, 22:15
That, was an attention grabber.
But anyway, coming from the one who gives you crackers, is this little comic that will (hopefully) make alot more sense than my last one! I drew it, Plasma wrote out the 'script'... AND he did the editing. Which took awhile. Shh.
http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs15/f/2007/070/b/a/Forum_Comic_by_Kelster23.png (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/50653445/)
Just remember; Image quoting makes babies cry.
Haha, I like it. Nice drawing too.
All I would say at the moment is to choose a more pale colour for the sky and a less bold and darker green for the grass.
Otherwise, nice stuff. Made me laugh too.
Gee, "Plasma wrote the 'script'"... such a small comment, considering that the comic is close to meaningless without it.
Alright, so mabye I do have a little ego problem... :p
Anyway, well done! Although I'm sure I already said that enough on MSN.
Kelster23
11 Mar 2007, 22:24
Haha, I like it. Nice drawing too.
All I would say at the moment is to choose a more pale colour for the sky and a less bold and darker green for the grass.
Otherwise, nice stuff. Made me laugh too.
Okay, will do for the next one!
A comic where Plasma doesn't get made fun of? :/ I Don't know if I can read any more of these comics.:(
Metal Alex
11 Mar 2007, 22:40
yay!! I'm there :D
(The headband is black on the upper half :p)
Kelster23
11 Mar 2007, 22:56
yay!! I'm there :D
(The headband is black on the upper half :p)
Okay I'll remember that for next time.
A comic where Plasma doesn't get made fun of? :/ I Don't know if I can read any more of these comics.:(
What? Of course I am! Note the pluralisation in panel 5!
God, who in their right mind would make a comic with me in it without me being made fum of!
fum
Point and laugh folks! Roll up roll up!
Kelster23
11 Mar 2007, 23:21
*points and laughs*
Nice typo! :D
_Kilburn
11 Mar 2007, 23:21
Wh... wh.... what ? I... am.... in.... a...... comic ???
YAAAAAAYYYYY !!!!!!!!!!! :D
Very well drawn, and.... oh, just a detail... I have red eyes. :)
Kelster23
11 Mar 2007, 23:31
Wh... wh.... what ? I... am.... in.... a...... comic ???
YAAAAAAYYYYY !!!!!!!!!!! :D
Very well drawn, and.... oh, just a detail... I have red eyes. :)
Okay, I'll do that for the next one. Thanks for informing me!
Point and laugh folks! Roll up roll up!
It's a cross between 'fun' and 'a bum'!
Yeah, it was a typo.
Pickleworm
12 Mar 2007, 01:20
Cameo please, I'm a green worm with red eye outlines and yellow pupils.
Pigbuster
12 Mar 2007, 01:23
I like the picture of you laying on the ground and drooling.
Reminds me of my childhood. :)
I gotta admit, I laughed at the last panel. :p
GrimOswald
12 Mar 2007, 01:47
I would suggest making the edges smoother as they're a little bit distracting. Other than that, good work. :) (Paul's expression in the last panel is weird, yet priceless)
robowurmz
12 Mar 2007, 07:25
Could I request?
Normally, I look sort of annelid, with my pink skin, but yellow eyes.
When I get hurt badly, or get real mad, I flash lasers everywhere and turn back to robotic as long as the pain or rage lasts. While robotic, jumping power and speed are enhanced. And my eye lasers do more damage. Which is also why I have to get new computers a lot, or cover them in mirrors.
>DoomWorm<
12 Mar 2007, 11:46
cameo please please up please.
That is all.
Gardy Looo
12 Mar 2007, 12:08
[Copied from DA]
No me? You should be ashamed. But I'll hand out some advice.
Paul is morbidly tall.
Panels should be a bit bigger.
Text is a bit small.
Add me.
[Copied from DA]
*looks at robowurmz's post*
*dies, only to be revived again by the sigworm police*
This comic has no meaning without a worm with a cyan mohawk in it. *hint, hint* :p
Apart from that, its good :p The panel outlines and the sky colour are disturbing, though...
Akuryou13
12 Mar 2007, 13:13
It's a cross between 'fun' and 'a bum'!wait a second! I thought it was gardy who didn't like girls :p
SuperBlob
12 Mar 2007, 16:21
It's a cross between 'fun' and 'a bum'!wait a second! I thought it was gardy who didn't like girls :p
LMAO! If it were possible, I'd DEFINITELY sig that
Gardy Looo
12 Mar 2007, 16:58
So would I, actually, because it's GENIUS.
Seriously, I want to make a typo too.
...oh.
I just found out what 'fum' is slang for...
"Literature
Fum or Fung hwang. One of the four symbolical animals supposed to preside over the destinies of the Chinese Empire."
:p
Cisken1
13 Mar 2007, 08:29
...oh.
I just found out what 'fum' is slang for...
"Literature
Fum or Fung hwang. One of the four symbolical animals supposed to preside over the destinies of the Chinese Empire."
:p
Uh...ok?...
Pickleworm
13 Mar 2007, 19:47
...oh.
I just found out what 'fum' is slang for...
"Literature
Fum or Fung hwang. One of the four symbolical animals supposed to preside over the destinies of the Chinese Empire."
:p
I don't think that's really slang per se...
FutureWorm
13 Mar 2007, 19:53
I don't think that's really slang per se...
i don't think you're really a jerk per se...
oh wait i do
I don't think that's really slang per se...
No, that was sarcasm.
Fum is an actual slang word for something. But like pretty much half the words in the English language, it's something to do with the birds and the bees...
Kelster23
14 Mar 2007, 02:58
I'm not in charge of putting people in the comic, but I'll fix the edges of it for next time.
Being put in this comic is all up to Plasma, he writes it... unless I get bored of waiting and decide to do something completely out of nowhere, then he would have to continue of THAT... I feel sorry for you if I do that, Plasma.
Pigbuster
14 Mar 2007, 04:08
Plasma, you misspelled fun "Fum". It was quite amusing.
Stop trying to get out of it.
>DoomWorm<
14 Mar 2007, 15:50
Plasma, you misspelled fun "Fum".
that was intentional. :p
In other news, expect a new comic soon.
Not very soon, but soon.
I'm not in charge of putting people in the comic, but I'll fix the edges of it for next time.
Being put in this comic is all up to Plasma, he writes it...
SHE LIES! She gets to decide too sometimes, if the story doesn't depend on it.
Except for when Paul is involved. I have absolute superiority in choosing a cameo if I want it to be Paul! :D
unless I get bored of waiting and decide to do something completely out of nowhere, then he would have to continue of THAT... I feel sorry for you if I do that, Plasma.
Wait, is it even possible to continue out of a comic that you did?
Liketyspli
14 Mar 2007, 20:05
Well, I got a few things to say about this comic:
The drawing is good keep it up.
It needs Muscular Worm... So, you know what you gotta do.
*Runs*
Oh, and requests ARE allowed!
It won't get you a definite spot in the comic, but it will increase your chances!
>DoomWorm<
14 Mar 2007, 20:25
Oh, and requests ARE allowed!
It won't get you a definite spot in the comic, but it will increase your chances!
REQUEST REQUEST REQUEST. ULTIMATE x2 MUAHAHAHA
...sorry :(
Gardy Looo
15 Mar 2007, 12:09
I Request.
GrimOswald
15 Mar 2007, 13:29
*REQUEST*
Or my heart will be broken.
WormOfFire
15 Mar 2007, 17:53
*cameo request*
Metal Alex
15 Mar 2007, 20:08
I REQU...
oh, wait.
maveristef
15 Mar 2007, 22:01
*Requests*
Shockdude
15 Mar 2007, 23:13
...
request
:p
Preasure
16 Mar 2007, 16:28
Go on then, if you must.
Kelster23
16 Mar 2007, 20:26
Okay... just letting everyone know that I should hopefully have the next part up by tomorrow!
Okay... just letting everyone know that she most likely won't have the next part up by tomorrow!
Yeah, the first attempt at this part didn't go quite planned.
Kelster23
17 Mar 2007, 07:25
Okay... just letting everyone know that she most likely won't have the next part up by tomorrow!
Yeah, the first attempt at this part didn't go quite planned.
:(
You know me too well...
Cisken1
19 Mar 2007, 13:53
Isn't love nice to see? IN ACTION MOVIES!!!!!
Sorry for the lack of comic, but apparently Kelster is going through an Artist's Slump right about now.
If anyone has tips on how to get out of one of these, theat'd be greatly appreciated.
MtlAngelus
20 Mar 2007, 07:52
Alcohol. :)
Akuryou13
20 Mar 2007, 08:41
BOOBIES!!! :p
Metal Alex
20 Mar 2007, 15:13
Potatoes. They fix everything.
Cisken1
20 Mar 2007, 15:19
Nah, just walk on a busy highway in the middle of the road, that always helps me!
Metal Alex
20 Mar 2007, 15:21
Nah, just walk on a busy highway in the middle of the road, that always helps me!
To commit suicide? This is for making a comic.
Cisken1
20 Mar 2007, 15:23
To commit suicide? This is for making a comic.
That's what I ment, to make comics!
Liketyspli
20 Mar 2007, 15:31
Potatoes. They fix everything.
I agree, Metal Alex, your so smart! :D Oh, god!
Metal Alex
20 Mar 2007, 16:49
I agree, Metal Alex, your so smart! :D Oh, god!
THINK ABOUT IT.
-you are hungry? eat it.
-you are bored? say potatoes randomly.
-you need ideas on a comic? put me taking out potatoes from my backpack.
-you need to have a stamp? use a potato. It works, really.
-you want a beautiful garden? use the rest of the plant.
AND the rest of the reasons I think that way.
Cisken1
20 Mar 2007, 21:04
THINK ABOUT IT.
-you are hungry? eat it.
-you are bored? say potatoes randomly.
-you need ideas on a comic? put me taking out potatoes from my backpack.
-you need to have a stamp? use a potato. It works, really.
-you want a beautiful garden? use the rest of the plant.
AND the rest of the reasons I think that way.
You need some time-out?
Apocalypse
20 Mar 2007, 21:14
Go on then, abuse my character, since I abused yours :p
Profile (http://forum.team17.co.uk/showpost.php?p=359373&postcount=169)
Pigbuster
20 Mar 2007, 21:23
THINK ABOUT IT.
-you are hungry? eat it.
-you are bored? say potatoes randomly.
-you need ideas on a comic? put me taking out potatoes from my backpack.
-you need to have a stamp? use a potato. It works, really.
-you want a beautiful garden? use the rest of the plant.
AND the rest of the reasons I think that way.
THAT'S
...
Quite brilliant, really.
YES.
Sorry for the lack of comic, but apparently Kelster is going through an Artist's Slump right about now.
If anyone has tips on how to get out of one of these, theat'd be greatly appreciated.
Put that in your pipe and SMOKE IT.
Preasure
21 Mar 2007, 16:43
Put that in your pipe and SMOKE IT.
What, the potato? :p
THINK ABOUT IT.
-you are hungry? eat it.
-you are bored? say potatoes randomly.
-you need ideas on a comic? put me taking out potatoes from my backpack.
-you need to have a stamp? use a potato. It works, really.
-you want a beautiful garden? use the rest of the plant.
AND the rest of the reasons I think that way.
Have a break. Have a Potato.
Pickleworm
24 Mar 2007, 03:34
Try psychoactive drugs.
Kelster23
24 Mar 2007, 06:32
...thanks Pickleworm...
MtlAngelus
24 Mar 2007, 08:19
It works for him.
Kelster23
24 Mar 2007, 16:40
I think I can tell.
Metal Alex
24 Mar 2007, 16:47
Have you tryed potatoes yet?
Pickleworm
24 Mar 2007, 20:57
...thanks Pickleworm...
You're welcome!
Kelster23
27 Mar 2007, 02:46
Have you tryed potatoes yet?
Yeah...
But I'm almost out of it!
Thanks for your suggestions!
Yeah...
But I'm almost out of it!
Thanks for your suggestions!
Sweet! Now you can get back to that comic again soon!
And perhaps THE LETTER! :rolleyes:
Kelster23
29 Mar 2007, 03:39
Yeah................
I need to improve mah memory.
Apocalypse
30 Mar 2007, 09:27
Get a 256k memory card :p
Kelster23
30 Mar 2007, 21:46
Are you now classifying me as a robot?
Apocalypse
1 Apr 2007, 12:45
I'm classifying your comp as a robot :)
Metal Alex
1 Apr 2007, 22:06
I'm classifying your comp as a robot :)
I'm quite sure she meant her brain memory, but, anyways, it's a bit frustrating that the only comic I appeared in without requesting or begging, and the only one it wasn't not to be rejected, has only 1 comic D:
Don't blame me; I've done my part ages ago!
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