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GrimOswald
11 Mar 2007, 03:52
Gee, remember that comic me and _Kilburn were thinking of making? Before the onslaught of other comics assaulted this forum? Well, we made the huge mistake of actually going ahead with it. So without further ado, here is strip #01.

http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w220/GrimOswald/WromAgentsmall.jpg (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/50592069/)

Note: The thread title is the actual name of the comic, but that doesn't fit on DA. :p

Note 2: Just so you know, I don't mind requests at all. And providing it's not an absoloutely appallingly crap sigworm, it'll probably make it in. Now some might say that's not such a great way to write a comic, but I say it takes only one big crowd scene...;)

EDIT: Because of overwhelming demand from myself, I've decided to add the links to this thread too whenever a new comic comes out.

#01:
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w220/GrimOswald/ComicPreview01.png (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/50592069/)
#02:
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w220/GrimOswald/ComicPreview02.png (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/50812946/)

Slick
11 Mar 2007, 04:05
Woah, a decent/real comic. Goodness!
I'd like to see more soon.
And yeah, feel free to use Slick. He's a pretty easy character to use for any story and can usually bring out the best in any comic if used right. [/ego]

tgworm
11 Mar 2007, 08:59
Comicy goodness.

Paul.Power
11 Mar 2007, 09:06
Nice job.

So is this an author/artist partnership, or an alternate strips job?

GrimOswald
11 Mar 2007, 09:51
Thanks guys.

And it's an author/artist partnership. I write 'em, he draws 'em. *Nods sagaciously*

tgworm
11 Mar 2007, 10:24
Thanks guys.

And it's an author/artist partnership. I write 'em, he draws 'em. *Nods sagaciously*

Oh so this is Kilburn's artwork, I thought it reminded me of his comic thread.:p Keep up the good work guys.

Gardy Looo
11 Mar 2007, 10:59
Requesting am comic I the in it yes.

I'm too lazy to draw a pic, so here's a description in TEXT.

Brown hair, goggles with green lens, black gloves.

Plasma
11 Mar 2007, 11:20
*Requestumisational*

Melon
11 Mar 2007, 11:52
I said it in the other thread, and I'll say it again, _Kilburn's artwork is great.
Don't know about Grim_Oswald's writing yet, but if it's as good and funny as _Kilburn's art, then we've got a real winner on our hands!

Keep it up. Oh, and MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! Supreme* amazing* detective Melon!

*This may be a lie

Liketyspli
11 Mar 2007, 12:27
Lol, nice start.

Pigbuster
11 Mar 2007, 15:14
Ohmigod a comic that appears to have a plot.
RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!

Akuryou13
11 Mar 2007, 15:24
too sleepy to read this right now, but it looks rather interesting, so I'm posting so I won't forget about it :p I'll add my opinions later :p

and feel free to use me as well, I guess.

GrimOswald
12 Mar 2007, 01:11
Don't know about Grim_Oswald's writing yet, but if it's as good and funny as _Kilburn's art, then we've got a real winner on our hands!

I don't know about Grim_Oswald's, but GrimOswald's certainly is. :p

and feel free to use me as well, I guess.

I'm rather glad you said that, considering you have a main role. :p

And the second strip should be finished by this time tomorrow. I hope.

>DoomWorm<
12 Mar 2007, 11:49
I'm rather glad you said that, considering you have a main role. :p

I wish i was a more known worm.








.... so i could get a main role. REQUEST!

Liketyspli
12 Mar 2007, 12:18
I wish i was a more known worm. [long moment of silence] .... so i could get a main role. REQUEST!

Just act like a 1337 programmer(gamemaker)...

*runs*

Akuryou13
12 Mar 2007, 12:59
I wish i was a more known worm.








.... so i could get a main role. REQUEST!settle on a sig and you may have a shot :p

GrimOswald
12 Mar 2007, 13:32
I wish i was a more known worm.








.... so i could get a main role. REQUEST!

Actually, I picked Akuryou because of an idea someone PM'd me. I won't name this person, but I'd like to thank them from the bottom of my heart, and let them know that my door is always open.

And just be thankful you have a role rather than a cameo. (It's not easy giving someone like Skel a personality you know)

Gardy Looo
12 Mar 2007, 14:04
I'd like to thank them from the bottom of my heart, and let them know that my door is always open.


That is very disturbing.

I don't care if I get a cameo or a role, as long as I'm in. :p

Akuryou13
12 Mar 2007, 14:53
I don't care if I get a cameo or a role, as long as I'm in. :pconsidering the comment just above this segment of your post, THAT is very disturbing.....then again, I guess all that not liking girls thing does have to lead somewhere :p

>DoomWorm<
12 Mar 2007, 18:43
And just be thankful you have a role rather than a cameo. (It's not easy giving someone like Skel a personality you know)

Well skel is kind of random. Kind of like LBUABUABBH (maybe exxagerated) every second- but half the time he is the baron von something evil worm, if ya-know-what-i-mean?

_Kilburn
12 Mar 2007, 18:56
And the second strip should be finished by this time tomorrow. I hope.

Yes... You hope... :p

Liketyspli
12 Mar 2007, 19:05
Yes... You hope... :p

Muscular Worm hopes too :mad:

Alien King
12 Mar 2007, 19:07
Ooh. Nice. Good art work and what looks like an interesting story that will be developed.

I request!
http://forum.team17.co.uk/showpost.php?p=359467&postcount=170 - Psychotic bad guy... evil, scheming... you get the idea. Use if you wish.

Preasure
12 Mar 2007, 20:52
'A public toilet' XD

Nice. Good storyline development, decent art and pretty funny. Lets keep it going!

GrimOswald
13 Mar 2007, 01:16
Well skel is kind of random. Kind of like LBUABUABBH (maybe exxagerated) every second- but half the time he is the baron von something evil worm, if ya-know-what-i-mean?

...

No, I really have no idea what you mean.

:mad:

;)

:(

_Kilburn
14 Mar 2007, 02:39
Updated strip #01 (added colour to worms), and just finished strip #02 :)

I Can't Pretend This Is A Pleasant Surprise

#01
http://kilburn.ftp.free.fr/Images/comicprv1.PNG (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/50592069/)
#02
http://kilburn.ftp.free.fr/Images/comicprv2.PNG (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/50812946/)

Pigbuster
14 Mar 2007, 04:15
This = Wonderful.
Please keep it up.

And I would like to be put in, if there's any good point for a hopelessly optimistic person to be shoved in.

Liketyspli
14 Mar 2007, 09:55
Great writing, great drawing... i'm in it... 10 out of 10!

Zero72
14 Mar 2007, 10:04
Oh, fantastic. Do continue.

Snoozy
14 Mar 2007, 13:01
A comic that seems to have a well planned plot... what a rare thing these days :p And the drawings are good, too, so... *requests*

Melon
14 Mar 2007, 13:23
Ah this is so good. If you don't continue I will have to hurt you.

Seriously.

GrimOswald
14 Mar 2007, 14:29
Again, thanks for the praise. I can't deny it, I am truly brilliant. *Nods sagaciously*

Oh yes, and I edited my first post to include links to them all, as this thread will undoubtedly become filled with posts worshipping me as a god. Which is cool with me.

... i'm in it...

But for how long? *Suspicious music plays*

Akuryou13
14 Mar 2007, 14:40
OH GREAT AND MIGHTY OSWALD! HEAR ME! My crops are growing in well, so there will be plenty of beer for you, oh lord, but the nonbelievers on your back-side really need to be dealt with before they cause any more harm :p

Metal Alex
14 Mar 2007, 14:43
Now, THIS is a proper comic. I mean, one of those with storyline.

Paul.Power
14 Mar 2007, 17:24
Some of the speech bubble order in #2 is a little confusing, but still, good job.

Alien King
14 Mar 2007, 17:50
Damn that's still good. Keep them coming.

Liketyspli
14 Mar 2007, 20:03
But for how long? *Suspicious music plays*

NOOOO!!! I don't wanna die!

Preasure
15 Mar 2007, 16:43
I'm liking this more and more. Great art and very good humour and plot. Just don't fizzle it out when the comic phase does. :p

Oh, and put me in if you feel like it.

>DoomWorm<
18 Mar 2007, 12:27
I'm liking this more and more.

Me too.

But his needs loads more updates, kepp em coming. It almost ended on second page.

*pigbuster mode initiated*

_Kilburn
18 Mar 2007, 12:38
I'm too busy now, but I'll try to start BUT NOT FINISH LLOLOLOLOLOLOR111 YA MORON the 3rd strip this night. ;)

GrimOswald
18 Mar 2007, 12:52
I'm too busy now, but I'll try to start AND FINISH LOLZ!!11! :mad::mad::mad: the 3rd strip this night. ;)

Just call me Bob The Builder.

Preasure
18 Mar 2007, 18:37
Just call me Bob The Builder.
Come on bob, get your ass going! We want comics! :p ;)

_Kilburn
29 Mar 2007, 00:02
Just to say I'm still working on it.

Tiny preview : http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/8337/prqw0.png

:p

>DoomWorm<
1 Apr 2007, 14:53
Just to say I'm still working on it.

*EXTREMELY LOUD CAPS LOCK PHEW*

Just to say I'm still working on it.

Tiny preview : http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/8337/prqw0.png

:p
I see myself, I presume.






GERBILS.

GrimOswald
2 Apr 2007, 12:17
I see myself, I presume.

Yes, that's you. Strip #03 will demonstrate how you're not exactly the wordiest book on the shelf.

And just so you guys know, I give _Kilburn the new script straight after he finishes drawing the current one, so you can only ever blame him for delays. :p

GERBILS.

WHERE? *Gets out knife and fork*

_Kilburn
2 Apr 2007, 12:23
Damnit, if only I've not become a MUGEN addict.... I would have more time to draw the comic. XD

Liketyspli
23 Jul 2007, 00:15
I order* you to continue this.

SuperBlob
23 Jul 2007, 00:19
I obey you to continue this.

...order perhaps?
*vanishes back into obscurity*

Liketyspli
23 Jul 2007, 00:21
...order perhaps?
*vanishes back into obscurity*...I need to go to bed.

GrimOswald
23 Jul 2007, 11:24
I order* you to continue this.

Hear that _Kilburn? Get to work. *Whips*

Or I'll cry. :(

yauhui
27 Jul 2007, 15:16
Its flooded with water and protein here. Tears in other words.

_Kilburn
27 Jul 2007, 21:16
Stop whining.