MtlAngelus
3 Mar 2007, 07:43
Hokay, people, this month we got 9 entries. Now I'll proceed to critizise all of them. >:-)
Please understand I'm not trying to discourage anyone.
maveristef (http://forum.team17.co.uk/attachment.php?attachmentid=29397&stc=1&d=1172283016)- Pencil drawing, nicely done. Can't really critizise the drawings or the style, it is a very nicely done entry, but you could have touched it up a little in an image editing program, perhaps fiddle with the contrast as the shading is a bit too dark, makes some details hard to see. 8/10
mariodizzy (http://img467.imageshack.us/img467/3898/mariodizzydp8.png)- I had to login to DA to be able to see your entry, not fun :p. Uploaded it on imageshack so people can have an easier time seeing your entry. I must say this doesn't really fit on the rules I set, it seems like an ordinary simple comic styled entry done in paint rather than pulling your best effort. I have nothing else to say really.5/10
Gardy Looo (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49604814/)- I really liked this entry, it's quite original, and has nice attention to detail. The only thing missing is the robots on the grass casting a shadow on the grass, which would make it look slightly better. The grass effect is also not that great. And the pit in the middle could have been darket towards the bottom. The background is simplistic but I like it that way. 8/10
Pigbuster (http://img91.imageshack.us/my.php?image=zombibcx9.jpg)- Awesome. The skin effect you used it really nifty, and the intestine comming out is just sheer class. Great blood effects too. I honestly can't find anything that could be done better. 10/10
Alien King (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49762266/)- Well what can I say. Nice try I guess. The proportions are all distorted, has a very confusing lighting and the composition of the image is hardly right. Still I can see you really tried so kudos for that. 7/10
philby4000 (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49727927/)- :eek:. Just effing awesome. The lighting seems spot-on, the worms look so lively and the overall composition of the image is very likeable. 10/10
Akuryou13 (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49805230/)- Huh. The worms do look less stiff than before, and I like the stuff going on in the picture. The smoke effects look out of place, and the texture of the terrain looks rather plain. The water is bad too :p. Still, a very nice effort, and kudos for trying something new. 8/10
Metal Alex (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49855310/)- Woah really nicely done. It's not exactly the best 3d ever, but it really fits the image well and gets the job done. 9/10
Vader (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49977030/)- Excelent entry! Altough the shading of the worm closest to the camera doesn't make sense, it looks as if light is comming from bellow but it's casting a shadow as if it comes from the worm's front. I still liked it a lot. 9/10
K I'm done, get voting already!
Please understand I'm not trying to discourage anyone.
maveristef (http://forum.team17.co.uk/attachment.php?attachmentid=29397&stc=1&d=1172283016)- Pencil drawing, nicely done. Can't really critizise the drawings or the style, it is a very nicely done entry, but you could have touched it up a little in an image editing program, perhaps fiddle with the contrast as the shading is a bit too dark, makes some details hard to see. 8/10
mariodizzy (http://img467.imageshack.us/img467/3898/mariodizzydp8.png)- I had to login to DA to be able to see your entry, not fun :p. Uploaded it on imageshack so people can have an easier time seeing your entry. I must say this doesn't really fit on the rules I set, it seems like an ordinary simple comic styled entry done in paint rather than pulling your best effort. I have nothing else to say really.5/10
Gardy Looo (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49604814/)- I really liked this entry, it's quite original, and has nice attention to detail. The only thing missing is the robots on the grass casting a shadow on the grass, which would make it look slightly better. The grass effect is also not that great. And the pit in the middle could have been darket towards the bottom. The background is simplistic but I like it that way. 8/10
Pigbuster (http://img91.imageshack.us/my.php?image=zombibcx9.jpg)- Awesome. The skin effect you used it really nifty, and the intestine comming out is just sheer class. Great blood effects too. I honestly can't find anything that could be done better. 10/10
Alien King (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49762266/)- Well what can I say. Nice try I guess. The proportions are all distorted, has a very confusing lighting and the composition of the image is hardly right. Still I can see you really tried so kudos for that. 7/10
philby4000 (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49727927/)- :eek:. Just effing awesome. The lighting seems spot-on, the worms look so lively and the overall composition of the image is very likeable. 10/10
Akuryou13 (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49805230/)- Huh. The worms do look less stiff than before, and I like the stuff going on in the picture. The smoke effects look out of place, and the texture of the terrain looks rather plain. The water is bad too :p. Still, a very nice effort, and kudos for trying something new. 8/10
Metal Alex (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49855310/)- Woah really nicely done. It's not exactly the best 3d ever, but it really fits the image well and gets the job done. 9/10
Vader (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49977030/)- Excelent entry! Altough the shading of the worm closest to the camera doesn't make sense, it looks as if light is comming from bellow but it's casting a shadow as if it comes from the worm's front. I still liked it a lot. 9/10
K I'm done, get voting already!