As I said, this is the first worms picture I upload. Feel free to comment and give feedback.

Oh. thats quite nice but:
- The color of the worm is a bit... brown.
- Don't save it as Jpeg, use PNG instead.
- The Shades arent good. A worm is round so it should have shading on it. (i suck at shading too, dont worry)
- Worms have overbite.

Ok... Thanks for comment.
I can agree that the colour is a little strange, but the shades - well I'd not say they're bad... :O
I think they're alright... I'm not saying that they rules though :)

Definately MUCH better than the average first art you get nowadays.

Just make the colour a little brighter and oranger and you'll have a good piece of artwork.

EDIT: I mean the colour of the skin btw.

Skin colour fixed :D

- Worms have overbite.

Not necessarily.

It depends on the style. If the artist thinks they look good without an obvious overbite, they can do it. Saying they have to have one is like saying they can't have noses.

Very nice, btw. Reminds me of maveristef's submissions.

Myes, i dont mean he has to have overbite. but i think it looks weird if they dont have overbite.

Myes, i dont mean he has to have overbite. but i think it looks weird if they dont have overbite.
Actually, I think it's strange because that pic seems to have an underbite.

I like the first skin color much, much better.
It doesn't look too brown to me, the second color looks too pink.

The helmet is weird, but most of it is excellent.
And I don't see a problem with the mouth, either. It doesn't need to be an overbite.

Definately MUCH better than the average first art you get nowadays.

*coughcoughrobocoughwormzcough*

Nice art too! Just remember that the back of the head needs to be shaded too, to show that it's not a flat surface.

Thanks, it's nice to receive your feedback... :)
I'll probably post another one later today.

shape is good
colour is improved
shading could use some work (e.g. the eyes look weird, though this could also be because of the eyes being deeper than the rest of the face)
so you made a good start :)
MOAR!

Skin colour fixed :D

That looks really good!

*coughcoughrobocoughwormzcough*

Ahem?
You spelt my name wrong.
=_=

As it's been said, it's pretty good, but the shading is lacking in some areas.

Keep up the good work. :)

As it's been said, it's pretty good, but the shading is lacking in some areas.
You see? im not the only one, i think its because theres much more shadingon the helmet than on all other places.

Yeah Liketyspli and all shade criticalists, you're probably right. I'll try make a better one soon. :)

Here we go: antoher one...
I don't know... maybe the first one was better?
I think this one is good except that the left worm is, maybe, a little thick-headed. Quite good though - I like the cake-bomb... :p
Hmm the left worm is not very good, actually. :(

surely improved the shading, but why is there none on the teeth?
the left worm is ok, but looks like he's about to fall on his face (this could also be the movement)
'nother thing, the shadow on the ground is from a different angle than the shading on the worms

so... green means, somethings missing in shading or shadow

You might want to try and make the hands a bit bigger. They look aufully small.

Ok gonna make another one later today... :)

Hey GÅS,

Nice art, I like your style. IMO I think the underbite looks a bit weird, but that's just me. I especially like the second pic because of the dynamites, good idea about the cake and stuff.

Keep it up, m8.
:cool:

I liked the first one better.
The second wasn't bad, but the worms look a bit drop shaped and the hands a bit small.
As the under or overbite, it only gives the worm personallity IMO.

You people tend to criticize odd things. I like the style, and you don't have to draw worms exactly like team17 art, variations define your style, and of course the weirder the better. I'm liking the second one most.

You people tend to criticize odd things. I like the style, and you don't have to draw worms exactly like team17 art, variations define your style, and of course the weirder the better. I'm liking the second one most.
If you were reffering to me it is only tips. I didnt say it was a must or anything relating to a demand for the perfect T17 art.

Anyway, keep up the work GÅS, try different drawing programs or even the good old pen paper.

It's not bad stuff, this. 'Tain't world-beating, but you have the makings of your own style and that's what really matters.

Not bad, man... you got a good perspective notion and pretty nice creativity for poses.

I'd just advise you to work a bit harder on your worm style's mouth. ;)

Looks nice.

Du är svensk,eller hur?
(translation:You are swe,right?)

that is expecially good for a first timer here. i think that shading is pretty good. the hands are kinda small but i like the shap of em for some reason.

keep drawing! plz

Your going in the right way, but how wormthingy said, there are lots of things to change.