Well heres some fanart..........????......!!!!!.......

Change the shape of the lower lip - It should not be a chin.

Change the shape of the lower lip - It should not be a chin.Well, I dunno, it's not exactly doing any harm.

May be a bit early to be doing "How To Draw" Guides though.

Your basic weakness is a complete lack of eye expression in the little cartoon you drew. With their giant pupils, both look rather stoned. I reckon you take a look at the work of some of our better "expression" artists, like Slick, Zero72, or indeed myself.

Well, I dunno, it's not exactly doing any harm.

May be a bit early to be doing "How To Draw" Guides though.

Your basic weakness is a complete lack of eye expression the little cartoon you drew. With their giant pupils, both look rather stoned. I reckon you take a look at the work of some of our better "expression" artists, like Slick, Zero72, or indeed myself.

is it really that bad?

... Yes. Have a look at this (http://forum.team17.co.uk/showthread.php?t=21216) thread.

is it really that bad?Odd thing to say. That wasn't exactly a damning critique I just gave you...

El Oh El, Duck Wormz?!

Ok, i'm scared. The first picture seems to be an almost word-for-word copy of this: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24052488/?qo=32&q=by%3Asplapp-me-do+sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps but with disasterous results.

:(

dammit,dammit, dammit!

You know, the the style is ok, exept for the chin, remove the chin, it makes him look fat. but you should really clean your drawings.

DON'T use lined paper for drawing. Please.

Don't make tutorials on drawing Worms if you can't draw them well.

Hopefully this one is better
http://s94.photobucket.com/albums/l85/ReturnDrak/?action=view&current=ebay2.jpg&refPage=&imgAnch=imgAnch1

Here's a tip: Go through this again, but watch everything it tells you not to do.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24052488/?qo=32&q=by%3Asplapp-me-do+sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps

I THINK this is what you should do:
28542
Though, i dont really like the Small head/Long neck style. but ok.

Oh and, the expression should be more like that, hes weird/crazy so the eye lids would be like this. XD

P.S. Yeah, i know there are TYPO's there.... i did it quick... and im lazy.

Hopefully this one is better
http://s94.photobucket.com/albums/l85/ReturnDrak/?action=view&current=ebay2.jpg&refPage=&imgAnch=imgAnch1

*Pukes over keyboard*

Oh,for the love of god.

Read the tutorial AGAIN please...

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That's WormOfFire!
It's WormOfFire, WormOfFire, Giggidy giggidy goo. It's WormOfFire, WormOfFire, Giggidy, gi-gedy, giggidy goo!

Lol joke from Family Guy.
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Anyway back on topic, I think with alot of work, your art can be good as the others! Heck, you could even be as good as Splapp! ok maybe not

alot of work

you should have highlighted that

you should have highlighted thatErr, why? It's fair comment.

He says to highlight it because he thinks we should emphasize that he would need a lot of work.

Because we all hate each other on the Team17 forums. :rolleyes:

He says to highlight it because he thinks we should emphasize that he would need a lot of work.

Because we all hate each other on the Team17 forums. :rolleyes:Oh, I thought he meant highlight like this, so it would be hard to see...

Oh, I thought he meant highlight like this, so it would be hard to see...
no, thats Bright, this is Highlight.

in case you didnt know, you probably did.

not like anyone cares, but ..... http://s94.photobucket.com/albums/l85/ReturnDrak/?action=view&current=blood.jpg&refPage=&imgAnch=imgAnch1

....That's alot of blood.

Just possibly a little too much......and if thats the horizon, thats a lot of blood. If that's not the horizon (judging by the worm hanging on the wall) shouldn't the evil worm start drowning in all that blood?

why don't people realize that having a lot of gore doesn't make an image interesting. hell, if anything it takes away from the image. the coloring on that drawing is borderline decent. the shape of the worms is about as pleasing to the eye as a white-hot poker. hell, aside from the guy standing there with the sword I can't tell what anything else is doing in that image and I'm only assuming all the lumps in the pic are worms because each and every one is done in a completely different style from the others present.

and I have to know two things here:

1. what the heck is that thing stuck on the side? is that a worm? and if so what is it doing?

2. what's the white spots in the middle of the red ocean thing?

not like anyone cares, but ..... http://s94.photobucket.com/albums/l85/ReturnDrak/?action=view&current=blood.jpg&refPage=&imgAnch=imgAnch1

lets try and keep the gore section with HK and such...

three tips here: (sorry if this sounds too critical)

if that is the horizon line... then the worm on top must be huge. put him closer to the camera (move him down a bit), and possibly have him in the blood, as you can't really stand on it.

tails are too small.

a bit gory. but the blood looks too... rushed. I suggest the drips on the corpse to the left should be less close together, and slightly more randomly placed (as if they were coming out at multiple directions. and that gut that the worm is pulling out should perhaps not be on the tip of the sword but wrapped around it like spagghetti is- and perhaps for the headless worm on the right you should have more... sort of coming over the sides. or, alternetively, no blood at all. which isn't as frightening as it sounds. if I didn't explain it right, the image here should do it.

you draw your way, I draw my way.

you draw your way, I draw my way.

Listnen to him, seriously. You can't improve your art.

you draw your way, I draw my way.difference is: his actually looks decent. but hey, that's just me (and everyone else here).

Listnen to him, seriously. You can't improve your art.

i probably can't

As long as you're doing your best and keeping the amount of blood and gew at a lower level, I'm satisfied. But I recommend you to listen to people's advices - if you want to improve, that is.

Yes, or you'll be like Luke, he improved eventually, but took friggin' months to do so. :p

Yes, or you'll be like Luke, he improved eventually, but took friggin' months to do so. :p
Replace that with years.

*don't have any clue who this guy is, but laughing anyway*

:D

*don't have any clue who this guy is, but laughing anyway*

:D

Go look up 'the art...it lives' Or something like that. It's a thread by Agent Luke. You'll be all filled in.

Go look up 'the art...it lives' Or something like that. It's a thread by Agent Luke. You'll be all filled in.

*shudders like hell*

http://forum.team17.co.uk/search.php?searchid=519795

*decides to switch to classic Worms design*
http://s94.photobucket.com/albums/l85/ReturnDrak/?action=view&current=newstyle.jpg&refPage=&imgAnch=imgAnch1

uh....yeah.....that really doesn't improve upon anything at all.

I dont know, but I prefer the old. However, there are lots of stuff that you need to do. First, try to draw the worms without colors for working in the shape and then, the face and expressions (you must change a lot things there).

you might want to consider opening a worm's mouth if he talks...

switches back to old

switches back to old

Good. You were starting to scare me for a second...