right now you thinking "on no! agent luke with more crappy art!" but your mind will switch around after clicking this link! everything improved! hands..mouth..eyes..head.. hand drawn! still working on tails though.


here it is!: http://img274.imageshack.us/img274/7835/omgimprovement1one8oy.png (http://imageshack.us)

Jesus Christ Almighty!!! :D

yeah. this took me 3 hours to make!

A new style is in order.
Keep practicing making random worm styles on a page, then upload it here. We'll point out which we like best.

better. much, much better...just keep improving ;)

yeah. this took me 3 hours to make!

?

that took 3 hours?

right now you thinking "on no! agent luke with more crappy art!" but your mind will switch around after clicking this link! everything improved! hands..mouth..eyes..head.. hand drawn! still working on tails though.


here it is!: http://img274.imageshack.us/img274/7835/omgimprovement1one8oy.png (http://imageshack.us)
Keep it un-coloured from now on. It ruins the whole picture, first now I realized that it actually was worms =P j/k It is improved though still needs improvings, use a pencil so you can remove all "unused" lines. Give the worms eye brows so they can make expressions for you easier.

One more thing, keep your art in one thread this time and bunch an improved picture everyonce in a while (I hope I wont regret saying that =P)

Well,some improvements,but not THAT good.

Still a long way to go, but at least it's heading in the right direction now. Keep it up.

Wow, that's a major improvement over the last work I saw from you. Don't let it go to your head, its still not good, but you've come a long way. Keep it up, and you'll be making excellent art in no time!

They're a little odd,still.
BUT! You've improved alot since I saw your hand drawn art last. Just keep practicing! I have to say though, my impression on you changed... a guy who keeps getting told to quit... but he just keeps trying to get better! That's cool. I like that. Good job Agent Luke.
(If you really let me go on to say all I had to say, this would be a really long message)

WHAT? they removed my "5 minit matrix" picture! I shall fart in their general directon!

wtf???????

WHAT? they removed my "5 minit matrix" picture! I shall fart in their general directon!
Who? Fart in who's general direction? and what "5 'minit' matrix picture"?

the mods! and well, I can't remeber where I saved the picture so I can't show it!

the mods! and well, I can't remeber where I saved the picture so I can't show it!
How unfortunate.

I'm not posting it here again and risk to get watched!

WHAT? they removed my "5 minit matrix" picture! I shall fart in their general directon!
Is that wise, since it was Sel that deleted it ;)

And before you ask, no it can't be undeleted - it's gone to forum heaven (or Hell, depending on just how bad it was ;))


Also, I can't help but notice how this thread is degrading into spam, especially as agent luke hasn't posted in it for a week...

Is that wise, since it was Sel that deleted it ;)

And before you ask, no it can't be undeleted - it's gone to forum heaven (or Hell, depending on just how bad it was ;))


Also, I can't help but notice how this thread is degrading into spam, especially as agent luke hasn't posted in it for a week...

*jumps out of the topic window* I WAS NEVER THERE!

lol seriously, you're right, I'll stop posting here now, sorry Thomas and Sel and... well, just sorry

agent luke hasn't posted in it for a week...



sorry about that. i should post one soon... iv'e been busy. [at being lazy]

sorry about that. i should post one soon... iv'e been busy. [at being lazy]

NO, please stay lazy PLEASE!

NO, please stay lazy PLEASE!
lol...
Meh,if you create an art thread,then draw some art for it lazy boy:p

you can draw art if you are lazy :P get a good chair and a desk and draw...

get a good chair and a desk
Thats where most lazy people fail.

you can draw art if you are lazy :P get a good chair and a desk and draw...

I draw on the floor when I can be bothered. Getting the paper is the hard bit.

I draw on the flaw when I can be bothered. Getting the paper is the hard bit.

ask someone to get it :p

you can draw art if you are lazy :P get a good chair and a desk and draw...
Wrong. I can draw, but I can't draw art.

more art YAY!!:D :D



http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=worms5ds.png

Gradients = BAD.
The smoke and wound look bad because of this rule. Also, the hand holding the gun has really tiny fingers.

All that said, I rather like the worm on the left. And I know most people hate your sickly grey color, but I rather like it.
You know, it's rather strange that that digital drawing is vastly superior to your hand-drawn one. Normally it's the other way around.

more art YAY!!:D :D



http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=worms5ds.png

Wel whatayaknow, finally something DECENT came up!

Wel whatayaknow, finally something DECENT came up!
Where?:confused:

3 posts above you

looks much better then your previous work !:)
just work a little bit on the hands holding guns. it looks more like they're holding a can than a gun.

Gradients = BAD.

Only if they're used correctly do they look good.

3 posts above you
No, I meant the decent art.

It is better than before but the worms are still 2D and now they are green. There's no detail on the worms. Also, don't use gradients. The shading is poor, the dark shadows on the backs of both worms suggests the gun is a light source, which is just plain ludicrous.

more art YAY!!:D :D



http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=worms5ds.png
Definetley getting better, but...
1: Don't mix sining colours with basic colours (blood and smoke)
2: The eyes of the left worm should be at the right of the eyeballs, rather than the centre.
3: The hand and gun are out of perspective. Look at your hand, with fingers touching. Notice how each finger has a different length, and not simpy shaped either. Then, find a picture of a gun, and compare the shape to yours.
4: The shading was done badly. The shading should be the same colour at the left of both worms.

and now they are green.
HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO SAY IT?!?! I'M COLOR BLIND!!!

HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO SAY IT?!?! I'M COLOR BLIND!!!
Then go get someone else's opinion.
Or get the colour from someone else's picture's skin colour.

Simple chose the colour by its tag, not by how it looks. Worms skin is: FFCC99 Simply take this colour ;)

alright. i'm makin a flash animation. if any 1 wants 2 be in it. just ask. i also need help with a plot. here's the story i came up with so far:____________

PM me if you wanna help with the story or be in it or both.

you can also help with voices/art/sound effects. if you want.

HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO SAY IT?!?! I'M COLOR BLIND!!!
Well, then I think it was a good guess, if you guessed to the colour of both red and blue...
Try hand drawing btw, it helps you improve, and keep in uncoloured if no one wants to help you find the right colours.

Hmm... progress, finally. Good for you. (Not meaning you've improved to a good standard, but it's better)

UPDATE: iv'e decided i'm not goin 2 make an animation. i'm 2 lazy.:p

alright. i'm makin a flash animation. if any 1 wants 2 be in it. just ask. i also need help with a plot. here's the story i came up with so far:____________

PM me if you wanna help with the story or be in it or both.

you can also help with voices/art/sound effects. if you want.
UPDATE: iv'e decided i'm not goin 2 make an animation. i'm 2 lazy.
That didn't last very long. :p

That didn't last very long. :pSuch a shame too. A plot with as much potential as ____________ could have gone a long way.

Your new av isn't too bad, Luke, although I'm slightly curious as to how the sunglasses keep appearing back on his head (maybe that's why he looks so puzzled when he takes them off... "deja vu is normally a glitch in the Matrix" :p)

Your new av isn't too bad, Luke, although I'm slightly curious as to how the sunglasses keep appearing back on his head (maybe that's why he looks so puzzled when he takes them off... "deja vu is normally a glitch in the Matrix" :p)
It might also explain why there is a badly combed cat on his head...

It might also explain why there is a badly combed cat on his head...
Oh, I can live with that: it's no more advanced than, say, Sgt. Anderson's hair from Boot Camp. And if all else fails, he can put a little dot on top and pretend it's a beret.

Your new av isn't too bad, Luke, although I'm slightly curious as to how the sunglasses keep appearing back on his head (maybe that's why he looks so puzzled when he takes them off... "deja vu is normally a glitch in the Matrix" :p)
He's telepathetic. Kidding. Maybe just telepathic.
Your worms are an odd mustard color, do you other people's worms that color being how you're colorblind?

Still very bad, man... but i gotta admire your determination and persistence... keep trying and one day you'll hit the spot... ;)

but i gotta admire your determination and persistence...

Yeah, you have THAT! BUt you're improving slightly, just keep trying!

yeah. this took me 3 hours to make!
No, those are called nanoseconds.





Sorry, couldn't resist :p

YAY! you could call this..ehh.. a slighty animated slideshow! Staring random members [but i'm not random cuz i made this comic!!] Random members: Smap. psyke. HK. and slick!


http://img91.imageshack.us/my.php?image=almostfin9jl.swf

"no this comic isin't on newgrounds"

I wonder why... :rolleyes:

My hair is going two diffrent directions. Not very stylish.:mad:
Though me poping out of the ground and humping HK in the air...is a nice touch. :p

just say we were on one side of a hill. and you were on the other. you busted straight through!

That was crap. It really was. The worms were awful.

"EEE! ARE LAST BOMB!"

I don't quite know what to say. It made me laugh, but probably for all the wrong reasons...

I dunno, really. You're drawing isn't awful any more, and your expressions were kind of amusing, but... well...

Though me poping out of the ground and humping HK in the air...is a nice touch. :p
Yes. totally.

When Slick makes a sh(WHEE)tty flash, everyone loves it.
When Luke makes a crappy flash, everyone hates it.

Why, that's not hypocritical at all.

So, you're saying slick's latest flash is as bad as agent luke's?

Cause if you are, indeed, i'd have to disagree in all matters...

So, you're saying slick's latest flash is as bad as agent luke's?

Cause if you are, indeed, i'd have to disagree in all matters...
Nope. White Wonder was fine and nook.

I was talking more about this one.
http://www.deviantart.com/view/20116714/
(I know that someone is going to say "THAT'S WAS HAHA HILARITY". So, here's my post FROM THE FUTURE!!)
No it isn't.

And hey, at least they're all better than all of MY flash movies.
http://img81.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hpdemon4uc.swf

I was talking more about this one.
http://www.deviantart.com/view/20116714/
Sorry, but i disagree again... i still think that flash movie slick made almost an year ago is still better than luke's...

Why? Even if you don't like slick's style you gotta admit that it has some real animation in it and not only silly tweenings... and the only part that kinda sucked on slick's movie was the first one... the last one was pretty damn random and funny...
And hey, at least they're all better than all of MY flash movies.
http://img81.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hpdemon4uc.swf
Call it a prejudice, i don't care, but i still like yours better than luke's... :D

To me, "if you can make it good, don't make it at all"... :p

But it's all a matter of taste afterall... personally i found luke's attempt to make a random animation pretty bad... he forced a lot of things (the whole thing to be precise) while random jokes and stupid things are usually fun because they're natural... (that's probably why i can't make random stuff... i always think too much before even start making stuff... meeh...)

Well, Luke's animation is bad if you actually know what everything is about.
The first time I saw it, it was rather funny, because I didn't get any of it.
But now I know what the jokes mean, and it's kinda lame now. :p
Though at least I found it funny once.

And I know that there are people that find random stuff like what was in Slick's animation funny, but I'm not sure it really deserved 2nd place in the Draw HK compo.

I probably could've shown you one of my worst animations, but I don't want to put those up on the internet for all to see.

Still, I don't think Slick's animation deserved 2nd place in the Draw HK compo.
Well...that i can't say because i wasn't even here when this competition occourred... :p
And I probably could've shown you one of my worst animations, but I don't want to put those up on the internet for all to see.
Lol... i know the feeling... you're absolutely right in keeping them for yourself... i'm full of stuff here that i don't have the guts to upload... :D

You are improving, But that's just, CRAP. Stick to NICE drawings and then make a DECENT flash.

The one tip I can think of, Luke, is:
Practice duplicating your style.

When Slick makes a sh(WHEE)tty flash, everyone loves it.
When Luke makes a crappy flash, everyone hates it.

Why, that's not hypocritical at all.Did I say I hated Luke's?

No. I wouldn't have watched it about five times straight if I hated it. It's comedy gold, albeit not in the sense he intended it.

I just wish it was slightly more coherent.

I just wish it was slightly more coherent.
That is the only thing wrong with it.
(And the blaring music at the end)

There's blaring music at the end?

Well, that's what I get for using a public computer that doesn't posess speakers.

Sorry for not posting here for a week again. its just cuz my good computers memory got screwd up and now i can't get into flash!:eek: and we did get the internet working on another PC but i forgot my password. so i sent for a "forgot password" thing But the Emails inbox wasen't working!! AAAAHHHH!!!!!:( :mad: :eek: but just to keep this thread going i'm posting an animation i did a while ago about Sonic. "pant pant"



http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/33909737/

I have to say it, that was terrible (And not just because you killed my favourite Sonic character :p). Your Worms style is at least heading in the right direction, but I suggest you leave anything more complex until you're a lot more experienced.

*also notes that you're a Roger Weide fan*. I did wonder ;).

Complete overuse of the gradient tool and generally crap. It made little sense to me at all.

And one other thing: don't use other people's art. All it does is make your own look worse.

Just wondering, why would Tails make a robot which he doesn't know how to use?

Just wondering, why would Tails make a robot which he doesn't know how to use?



also qoutes tails: Yay! i "GOT" a new robot!

he didin't make one. he "Got" one.

also qoutes tails:

he didin't make one. he "Got" one.
Ok. Why would he GET a new robot when he could build one?

Who cares!? he just got a new robot! he didin't WANT to build one then.:p

Ok. Why would he GET a new robot when he could build one?

Because he's a lazy sod?

Good one ;D
Eh?
Oh wait. Sonic fan. They like anything as long as it has sonic in it.
GAH.
Luke, that was bad. Please stick to regular art, as you are making perfect examples of why some people want Flash to be destroyed.

As a general tip:
Keep working on your art until it actually looks good. Try to take as few shortcuts as you can.
(although I could be wrong, I'm just tired)

And neither your art or your maturity is good enough for you to make a flash animation, so stop trying. Perhaps after a dozen pictures or so, but not now.

Eh?
Oh wait. Sonic fan. They like anything as long as it has sonic in it.
GAH.That's a bit of a generalisation, isn't it?

That's a bit of a generalisation, isn't it?

It's amazing how accurate it can be. There are of course one or two exceptions (as there are to most rules and laws).

It's just that I'm a Sonic fan, and I don't like everything with Sonic in regardless of quality.

Even if I do like Roger van der Weide.

It's just that I'm a Sonic fan

I was aware of that at the time. Hence why I said there are exceptions.

That's a bit of a generalisation, isn't it?
Yeah, it's a stereotype. :p
And I like Sonic too, by the way (Until the whole SHADOW HAS HIS OWN GAME crap).
It's just that I'm a Sonic fan, and I don't like everything with Sonic in regardless of quality.
And that's exactly what makes you different from them.

Those people would go onto every gaming site everywhere and give Shadow the Hedgehog full 10s, saying it's the best game ever, and insulting the people that told the truth about it.
I meant to aim it more at those people. Sorry if you misunderstood it.

I actually thought it was alright...a bit unnecessary, but still an alright game. I dunno, perhaps I'm too easy to please. 2D Sonic is a gazillion times better though :p

Yeah, it's a stereotype. :p
And I like Sonic too, by the way (Until the whole SHADOW HAS HIS OWN GAME crap).

And that's exactly what makes you different from them.

Those people would go onto every gaming site everywhere and give Shadow the Hedgehog full 10s, saying it's the best game ever, and insulting the people that told the truth about it.
I meant to aim it more at those people. Sorry if you misunderstood it.Fair enough, sorry for the misunderstanding, and now you come to think of it I know exactly what you mean.

Flippin' Shadow. Done more harm than good, he has. If he'd just been restricted to SA2, and had stayed dead, it might have all worked out. Instead we have to put up with him coming back and getting all "what is my purpose in life?" on us. Meanwhile, genuinely interesting characters like Tails* seem to have been getting their character development knocked back ever since Heroes.

* Sorry to go on about it, but let's look at the facts:

Sonic 2/3&K: Hanger-on. Occasionally does some piloting work.

Sonic Adventure: Takes his plane expertise and becomes the good guys' resident techie, developiing better planes, building a workshop. Begins thinking about his dependence on Sonic and wanting to prove that he can make it on his own. By the end of the game, has saved Station Square from being nuked by the Doc and is feeling rather proud of himself.

Sonic Adventure 2: Has developed the Tornado into a sort of all-purpose transforming walker thing, gets to fight the Doc directly while Sonic has his hands full with Shadow, breaks Sonic out of prison, becomes the goodies' all-round science guy. Has come a long way from the days of Sonic 2, where he just followed Sonic around like a groupie.

Sonic Heroes: And it all goes out the window.

What's with all the sonic talk... Yes I saw the picture, and he looks very golden.
I don't mind Sonic though.

Flippin' Shadow. Done more harm than good, he has. If he'd just been restricted to SA2, and had stayed dead, it might have all worked out. Instead we have to put up with him coming back and getting all "what is my purpose in life?" on us.
That's because stories now days have nothing else to do but have a dead character come back to life to find his purpose... only to find out that
a)he's a retard, or
b)everyone hates him, or
c)he doesn't have one, or
d)all of the above.

What's with all the sonic talk... Yes I saw the picture, and he looks very golden.
I don't mind Sonic though.That's because it's a Flash movie. That picture's just the preview.

Notice: THIS ANIMATION WAS SUPPOSE TO BE CRAPPY!!!!!
1)Show us the non crappy stuff then.
OR
2)Is that just an excuse?:p

1)Show us the non crappy stuff then.
OR
2)Is that just an excuse?:p
What non-crappy stuff? I lie! I'm sure if he tried harder, he could make something not that crappy.
Excuse? Probably. But how would I know... I didn't even watch it, so I shouldn't really be saying anything. But judging from your guys' 'comments', I don't think I will...

1)Show us the non crappy stuff then.
OR
2)Is that just an excuse?:pIt's possible that he's deliberately emulating Roger van der Weide's style, but Roger draws an order of magnitude better than that, anyway.

Hey guys i'm SOOOOOOO sorry i haven't posted forever.:( :( And i will not let this thread die! Lets get back on topic with some hand drawn Art!

http://img140.imageshack.us/my.php?image=notherpicyay25kf.png

Believe, me, man...the only ones that are sorry are we... and please, next time you absent from the forum, don't rush.... take your time... ;)

The lines are too thin for the size of the picture. Try to make them smaller and change the shape of the head and eyes (I dont know why, but I feel that you will never do what I said :-/ )

Why dont you take drawing classes? if you want to improve, look for something/someone to help you!

Very nice...lips.
Like pinoocho suggested:
Why dont you take drawing classes? if you want to improve, look for something/someone to help you!
I will...if you want it, just PM me

Oh come on. That's not that bad at all.
The lines are too weak, squiggly and uncertain and the worm is rather anorexic.
Apart from THAT, what's wrong with it?

rather say; Apart from the colours, whats good about it?

I'd take some drawing lessons, yeah.

Well at least now it looks a bit like a worm :p

Very nice...lips.
Like pinoocho suggested:

I will...if you want it, just PM me

KLESTER IS CHEATING ON PLASMA!!!!

That is all...


Picture look shalf-dencent, You're somewher between hopeless and talented (but leaning towards hopeless)

Hey guys i'm SOOOOOOO sorry i haven't posted forever.:( :( And i will not let this thread die! Lets get back on topic with some hand drawn Art!

http://img140.imageshack.us/my.php?image=notherpicyay25kf.png

1. The lines are too thin. (However, in your digital works, theyre mostly way too fat)

2. Pupils look very sloppy.

3. Dont draw both eyes with one line. Make two circles touching each other, then erase the lines between them.

4. The left eye dont has to be cut by the outline of the worm. You can also give the eye an own outline, so it forms a good circle, but goes slightly out of the actual worm outline. I draw eyes like that for example, and while surely not being realistic, it still looks better than cutting the eye, imho.

Your worm drawing is okay now. Trouble is, it's no better than okay. So you either need to back your art up with good writing (which, from what I've seen of your writing so far, isn't an option frankly) or continue to improve your art (for which, see the people who are actually good at art critiquing).

iv'e changed my sigworm:


http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newsigworm3ef.png

iv'e changed my sigworm:


http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newsigworm3ef.png
What changed? You should work on the hands... it looks like an hand of an 90 year old worm. Oh. and dont worms only have 4 fingers?

Apart from THAT, what's wrong with it?
Not much actually.
Pretty good.
Keep it up!

iv'e changed my sigworm:


http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newsigworm3ef.png
Hm...the hand sucks,and erase the black line that goes in the eye,and the black line that goes outside the worm.

if you want it to look like it wasen't done in paint click on it. then once it goes to the hosting page click "back" it will look better.

iv'e changed my sigworm:


http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newsigworm3ef.pngYou'd think people would learn from the times companies change their names and people laugh at them for doing so ("Consignia" indeed...)

That hand is terrible.
And the lines are still too jiggly.
And the pencil has a different line thickness than everything else.

That hand is terrible.
And the lines are still too jiggly.
And the pencil has a different line thickness than everything else.
It's hopeless... why do you guys still bother?

It's hopeless... why do you guys still bother?
Because he's slowly getting better...

If you do say so... :rolleyes:

iv'e changed my sigworm:


http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newsigworm3ef.png

Nice pencil there mate.

It's hopeless... why do you guys still bother?Mostly I'm hoping for a comedy reply to something I've said.

If you haven't already seen it: http://www.deviantart.com/view/34381642/

More art! YAY! i was quite happy with this one: http://img430.imageshack.us/img430/203/agentluke3jw.png (http://imageshack.us)

You've still gotta sort out the tales. Not so long. Not so flat.

More art! YAY! i was quite happy with this one: http://img430.imageshack.us/img430/203/agentluke3jw.png (http://imageshack.us)

It looks pretty good, except for the fact that the tail looks screwed up.
It really does look like you are improving, not counting the fact that I voted otherwise in your poll.

is the tail better now? i made it more uh..fat.


http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/4440/agentluke25hk.png (http://imageshack.us)

is the tail better now? i made it more uh..fat.
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/4440/agentluke25hk.png (http://imageshack.us)
I believe the tail should be way shorter.

...
I don't like how you draw this part of the tail(shown in picture)

Though,that's just me...

...
I don't like how you draw this part of the tail(shown in picture)

Though,that's just me...




Frankly i don't seem to like the "body covers tail" look. i just seem to like the "sqwished in and out" look

Frankly i don't seem to like the "body covers tail" look. i just seem to like the "sqwished in and out" look

WHAT???????

Frankly i don't seem to like the "body covers tail" look. i just seem to like the "sqwished in and out" look

That is a very intriguing/confusing choice of words.

Well, but the tail WoF showed you is the GOOD way to draw them. Every good artist does them that way.

5 minutes ago or something,i drew this in photoshop with ONLY the line tool,(and sometimes a 1-pixel brush)
It's rather easy with the line tool.
(and sometimes a 1-pixel brush:rolleyes:)

But that doesnt look that good... it really could use some curves :p

But that doesnt look that good... it really could use some curves :p
Yes i know,but my mouse sucks...isn't really created for drawing...:p

Yes i know,but my mouse sucks...isn't really created for drawing...:p
Then get yourself a scanner. Better yet get me a scanner.

Then get yourself a scanner. Better yet get me a scanner.
I have one,i'm just too lazy to use it...:rolleyes:

I have one,i'm just too lazy to use it...:rolleyes:

Give to me, and don't use FedEX, UPS is cheaper.

Here! is the tail better NOW?!



http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/9753/agentluke37jl.png (http://imageshack.us)

A bit better now. Oh and WOF, that pointy-ness is more than I could prefer. The eyes, basically. If you want to learn pointy art, call 1800-OFT99-AND-LINE-TOOL. Yeah, crappy joke, oh well.

Hm...the tail is better now...

*call* *beep* *beep* *beep* *beep* *beep* *hello* *!* *slams phone*

Tail is better. Main body stretches up too far.

Here! is the tail better NOW?!



http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/9753/agentluke37jl.png (http://imageshack.us)


Keep trying...

Tail is better. Main body stretches up too far.
True. The neck is too long.

Here. i made the head somewhat shorter.



http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/89/agentluke45rm.png (http://imageshack.us)

Better. Maybe get rid of the lump on the back of the neck.

Which lump and where?

That one .

Actually, I'd say to remove this bump instead:
28122

Indent, you mean.

Or hollow, or concave region. It doesn't have to be indent.

i should put the mouth a bit lower.

That's it. That's the problem. I always knew their was just one more particular issue standing in the way, but I could never quite work out what it was. That was it.

i should put the mouth a bit lower.
And make the eyes taller, so that they're still close to the mouth.

Yet again more art!


http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/9476/hahahqh2.png (http://imageshack.us)



Okay. with this one you vote in art styles: http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/7935/123rw3.png (http://imageshack.us)


witch one do you vote? 1? 2? or 3?


[i didin't spend much time on these]

2's best. Still not perfect

2's best.


I agree.


OH NOES!!!! MY MESSAGE WAS TOO SHORT!!! NOOOOOOooooo.....

I think 1's eyes, but rest would be 2.

Is it really that hard? This may be your style, but it looks quite wrong. First of all their necks are too big.

OH NOES!!!! MY MESSAGE WAS TOO SHORT!!! NOOOOOOooooo.....See, you could have said something like "I believe I'm inclined to concur with you, old chap. I say, anyone for a spot of tiffin?".

Then it wouldn't have been too short.

Ive been searching around deviantart and found this that might help with your drawing. It helped me.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/21253756/

I vote 1. It dosnt have too many shape errors. But you still need to change a lot of things.

I was quite happy with this art: http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/6710/deeseesgoodafz3.png (http://imageshack.us)

I was quite happy with this art: http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/6710/deeseesgoodafz3.png (http://imageshack.us)
Right, err, firstly, where do you think that drawing could be improved.

I'm no artist but there are a few things which really stand out and punch me in the face.

Worm was much better than your older stuff. But the lamppost was terrible!

Actually, the worm's fine.
The background, however, is pretty bad.

i know. i spent about 96% of the time on the worm.

Yeah, the worm's not bad but the background is... urk. If you can't draw things straight, use a Line tool.

Could it be...MORE ART????!!!:D :) :D :eek:


http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/2268/gorebl3.png (http://imageshack.us)

Could it be...MORE ART????!!!:D :) :D :eek:


http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/2268/gorebl3.png (http://imageshack.us)
Holy Biscuits, that is the best I have seen so far.

That's actually competent. You got a little bit gradient happy on the sword, but the worm shapes are okay and the gore, though not spectacular, isn't awful either.

(Although that depends on which definition of awful we're using here)

Hey, that's pretty good. Just try shading and stuff now.

You totally *** me in gore. Right Iggy? ;)

Now that's actually good. Well done.

There we go. That's great fun to look at.

Your next picture might just compete with mine.

There we go. That's great fun to look at.

Your next picture might just compete with mine.
Really? No way. You rock at drawing dude! Nobody can bring you down!
Take 'em down a notch, Luke!

Look, thats better only have u ever heard of undo? when you missplace a line (like on the tale on the front worm) then u can always press ctrl - X. to undo it.
lolz, u probably know but theres a line sticking out.

Look, thats better only have u ever heard of undo? when you missplace a line (like on the tale on the front worm) then u can always press ctrl - X. to undo it.
lolz, u probably know but theres a line sticking out.
ctrl-z isn't it?

Yeah, CTRL-X is usually cut.

Why is CTRL-Z undo anyways? What does Z have to do with Undo? Or X with Cut? Or V with paste?
Or did they just pick ZXCV because they're in a corner of the keyboard?

Or did they just pick ZXCV because they're in a corner of the keyboard?
Bingo.
That, and they're closer to Control.

oh its X here.... mhhhhh guess i changed that once, cant remember.

Nice one, there Agent Luke! Like whatisname said (Yes I'm too lazy to look at who posted what) that's the best one so far!!! Keep it up in that direction!

(Yes I'm too lazy to look at who posted what)I don't think that's anything to boast about, really. Would've taken you less time to find out than to write that bracketed sentence.

I don't think that's anything to boast about, really. Would've taken you less time to find out than to write that bracketed sentence.
Perhaps, but not quite as fun...

YIPES! Plug your nose! Chain yourselfs down! ITS ART!!!!



http://img311.imageshack.us/img311/2668/indeedzv0.png (http://imageshack.us)

The right hand worm looks better than the left hand worm, but the tail looked better in your previous picture

The worm to the left looks like a brickhead :p

These look like Alien King's first worms. Which weren't very good. :p The tails are too fat, first of all. Quite nice overall, though.

WHEEEEE!!

http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/684/dahartfc5.png (http://imageshack.us)

EDIT: Oh yes. I now officaly only wear my glasses in combat.

I now officaly only wear my glasses in combat.It's a good job worms have nothing to hide...

Nice job, AL. You should do one leaning forward like that with a sly look peeking out from behind a lampost saying "I see youuuuu!"

Hurry! Click the reply button! I'm only taking 2 requests! First two people to request get drawn!

I issue a request... of some sort...

i dont request.
oh wait i do,
draw me a worm holding a banana on a stick

They don't even look like worms now. They look like snails without shells. FIX THE COLOR! (And everything else for that matter.)

These look like Alien King's first worms. Which weren't very good. :p The tails are too fat, first of all. Quite nice overall, though.

Which ones? I assume it wasn't this (which was my first worms pic).

But anyway, I don't think these are much like any of the worms I drew. Although they're still poor.

Which ones? I assume it wasn't this (which was my first worms pic).

But anyway, I don't think these are much like any of the worms I drew. Although they're still poor.
... ... ... atleast it looked like a worm. My first worm back from Grade 5 had no "nose/overbite".

... ... ... atleast it looked like a worm. My first worm back from Grade 5 had no "nose/overbite".Notably, Alien King's worm has no nose/overbite.

Not even my first worms had an overbite. Although it wasn't as noticable in the W:A era.

Notably, Alien King's worm has no nose/overbite.
Isn't that a front view? Then it wouldn't be all that visible anyway.

Isn't that a front view? Then it wouldn't be all that visible anyway.

A lot of my early worms had the expressions drawn from the front (even if they're facing the side). This meant no overbite. I didn't start drawing proper mouths for a while, and I it was even longer before I put in noticable overbites.

But this isn't about how bad my art used to be...

True, but it seems odd to say that your worms "didn't even have a nose/overbite" when confronted with AK's first piece, where that would probably be the least of his concerns.

okay, don't expect anything for about 1 week, i'm going on a short vacation.

Which ones? I assume it wasn't this (which was my first worms pic).

But anyway, I don't think these are much like any of the worms I drew. Although they're still poor.
Nah, I meant back when you were still struggling with the shapes. They're great now, though.

Nah, I meant back when you were still struggling with the shapes. They're great now, though.

Oh right. Them....

*shudders*

Being the over-nice person that I am, Iv'e decided to draw new member hellstrike.


http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/1609/hellstrikein0.png (http://imageshack.us)

Being the over-nice person that I am
*Laughs out loud*
Nice art though.

Being the over-nice person that I am, Iv'e decided to draw new member hellstrike.


http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/1609/hellstrikein0.png

Thats actually quite good (y), still looks a bit rushed (n)

The bottom of your worms should look more like this.

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It's nice. I like the eyes the most. *thumb up*

*gives AgenLuke "Most-Evolved-And-Persistant-Artist-Ever"-Trophy*

Nice work, it's good to see that you haven't gone the way of Worm_boy. :p
Just keep working on the shapes and certain details and you'll be fine.

Haha, Remember him?

Haha, Remember him?

I don't know of him, what was he like?

*gives AgenTLuke "Most-Evolved-And-Persistant-Artist-Ever"-Trophy*
"Sniff!" You gave that trophy to Agenluke instead of me?!?

"Sniff!" You gave that trophy to Agenluke instead of me?!?

Oh! Oh! Is there an imposter around here, trying to be Agent Luke?!

I don't know of him, what was he like?You don't wanna know. Which gives me more incentive to tell you.

Random linkage:
http://forum.team17.co.uk/member.php?u=18158
http://forum.team17.co.uk/showthread.php?t=20272
http://forum.team17.co.uk/showthread.php?t=21185
http://forum.team17.co.uk/showthread.php?t=24816

You don't wanna know. Which gives me more incentive to tell you.

Random linkage:
http://forum.team17.co.uk/member.php?u=18158
http://forum.team17.co.uk/showthread.php?t=20272
http://forum.team17.co.uk/showthread.php?t=21185
http://forum.team17.co.uk/showthread.php?t=24816

*shudders*

Brr...Wormy_bomb was a real pain too...

You don't wanna know. Which gives me more incentive to tell you.

Random linkage:
http://forum.team17.co.uk/member.php?u=18158
http://forum.team17.co.uk/showthread.php?t=20272
http://forum.team17.co.uk/showthread.php?t=21185
http://forum.team17.co.uk/showthread.php?t=24816

Help me... erase my memory of those!

Help me... erase my memory of those!


Here! Take the cleaver I used.:rolleyes:

Lol, Once I mistaked Wormies for Wormybomb and I felt stupid.

I think my favourite post in those threads in Swed Simon's

70% min bounce 2 sec nade ususally get them in the drink.

Like worm_boy would be able to draw that

(Like I would, come to think of it...)

Unlike worm_boy, you've mastered drawing Worms in MSPaint.

Unlike worm_boy, you've mastered drawing Worms in MSPaint.
Umm... what's your definition of Mastered?

Unlike worm_boy, you've mastered drawing Worms in MSPaint.

MS Paint difficult to learn, easy to master hehehe

Right above 'just about mastered'.:p

Paul's master...tion (:p) is in the form of art. Boot Camp almost looks like it was done in Flash. Was it...?

It sure is a shame this thread isin't about MS paint or paul power, Because if it was, We woulden't be spamming, But since it isin't, Were spamming.:rolleyes:

Paul's master...tion (:p) is in the form of art. Boot Camp almost looks like it was done in Flash. Was it...?Nah, he uses Corel Whatumacallit that I've never seen anyone else use.

It sure is a shame this thread isin't about MS paint or paul power, Because if it was, We woulden't be spamming, But since it isin't, Were spamming.:rolleyes:Well, there's an easy solution for that: new art. ;)

It sure is a shame this thread isin't about [...] paul power, Because if it was, We woulden't be spamming, But since it isin't, Were spamming.:rolleyes:Oh, I think we would be. Partly because I'm off-topic organiser in chief.

Nah, he uses Corel Whatumacallit that I've never seen anyone else use.Let's hear it for dads who bring the CD home from work!

Nah, he uses Corel Whatumacallit that I've never seen anyone else use.
I have it, but I don't use it. It annoys me

I got an old version of corel but it freaks the hell out of me: what are ALL THOSE MENUS for???

I got an old version of corel but it freaks the hell out of me: what are ALL THOSE MENUS for???Er, menu things? What else would they be for?

Seriously, once you get over the fact that they call layers objects and selections masks, I don't see what the problem is...

Er, menu things? What else would they be for?

Seriously, once you get over the fact that they call layers objects and selections masks, I don't see what the problem is...

It's too damn complicated. Period.

Stop Spamming!!!

The underside of your worms is still the wrong shape

You should really check these little mistakes (and repair em)before you post your pics.

Lol...Is that supposed to look demented?

Stop Spamming!!!
Try make the base line curve the other way.

Oh, and the inside of the mouth should extend further to the right

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Uhmmmm... you get my point, you should really improve it.

Heres a little random thing i did!:


http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/6307/bewarethehamby3.png (http://imageshack.us)

have you ever listened to me?

The worm looks like he's just been stuck onto the picture. maybe it's the angle, maybe it's the fact that he's better drawn by far than the rest of the drawing, I dunno. Oh, and his tongue should not be purple

The worm looks like he's just been stuck onto the picture. maybe it's the angle, maybe it's the fact that he's better drawn by far than the rest of the drawing, I dunno.
It's because the lines on the worm are thinner than any of the other lines.

It's because the lines on the worm are thinner than any of the other lines.

Ah yes, well spotted. And the inside of the mouth's still wrong

I think he gets a bonus mark for insanity, though.

You fail, try again:

Oh, stop hamming it up.

Oh, stop hamming it up.

ROFL, let's all stop hamming before this thread gets locked!;)

Heres a little thing i'm trying to send to knox as some preloader art, There email button doesen't work



http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/1201/knoxcy7.png (http://imageshack.us)

CLAY MEN!!!!!!!!!!!
That's the best picture you've ever drawn. Because it is Clay Men.
KNOX CLAY WORLD=YAY.
I'll stop spazzing now, sorry.
But it is very well done.:D

CLAY MEN!!!!!!!!!!!
That's the best picture you've ever drawn. Because it is Clay Men.
KNOX CLAY WORLD=YAY.
I'll stop spazzing now, sorry.
But it is very well done.:D

Thanks! And i also agree, Klay men RULE!!! I'm try to put every single one of there movies on my PC so i don't have to wait for them to load every time! Also: Can anyone guess whats happening in the picture?

ARRGGGG!!! Help me! Double-post! More Art=YAY! I was actually drawing Garfield, But then i didin't get his mouth right, Then when i finished he was mutated into a mouse


http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/1781/cartoonog1.png (http://imageshack.us)

He should be fatter, and should be orange. :p
You can just go to garfield.com for references.

If you would have read the rest you woulden't have siad that:p i was in the middle of drawing, then i decided to draw a mouse instead.

Is it supposed to have two mouths? :p
Or is that a moustache?

Looks more like he has one weird chin. :p